After My First Embrace, I Became My Nemesis's Daughter

From now on, this is a novel that has great potential and can be invested in for a long time. The subject matter is relatively common, but the content is very novel. There are mistakes in the writing, the writing style is a little rusty, and there is a lot of room for suggestions. The author's efforts in creation and interesting character can also be seen in the article, and the readers' opinions will also be taken into consideration. I hope that the author will not collapse in three aspects, the plot will not collapse, the combat power will not collapse, and the emotional character will not collapse. I will give you praise. By the way, be careful with Shen He, Tomato has been strict with Bai Hou recently. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on (I'm exhausted from typing like this)

It looks good so far, but there is one more thing to say, because there are many books of this type. However, there are very few stories where the inner drama of the protagonist is particularly delicate. At present, it seems that this is one of those rare genres. But there is a suggestion. The protagonist was a boy in his previous life. Moreover, he is now an adult and has entered the society, and he still grew up in an orphanage, but his heart should be stronger. The article keeps talking about how the protagonist wants to cry, how he wants to cry, this place is very fragmented, and there is a feeling of left brain and right brain fighting. It feels that the protagonist's previous life was in vain, so I hope to deal with this part better. (No malicious intent, just suggestions)

I have seen a lot of similar Blood Rider imitations on blb and many other platforms. In contrast, the author has written his own characteristics and did not apply the usual routines. The characters' personalities are very distinct, and there is almost no overlapping of characters like other (most Blood Riding style) characters. It's a pity that Tomato doesn't promote this kind of article. If the one next door is at least an A-listed article, you must stick to it. Really good!!!

The subject matter and concept are good, the emotional description is very delicate, the overall framework is quite complete, and it is very friendly to those who like to make white stickers. However, the combat power and some racial settings have not been clearly introduced at present. Some details are a bit uncomfortable to watch logically, and the settings may be a bit incomplete. Also, the protagonist is very kind so far. I think it is a bit silly. Some people may not be able to accept it. In short, the book is not bad. Maybe I am a bit picky, but I still support the author's 😘. I hope to introduce the combat power and setting. It's more comfortable to watch without thinking. Anyway, I feel a little uncomfortable watching it. Try it for yourself 🙂

Personally, I think the plot is okay, but the mentality changes at the beginning is a bit fast. Is the main palace the sister? I hope the author will spend more time writing about relationships and not be too quick. Let the protagonist make his own choice instead of everyone else competing for it. The protagonist should not casually promise things like relationships. He should respect and understand everyone's thoughts and concerns before making a choice.

So far, there are no major negative points. Although there are some small details that are still not handled well, considering that the author has updated the content and it does not affect the viewing experience, I still give it a five-star review. There are many plots and it is very enjoyable to watch.

If you want to read Blood Tribe after Chapter 10, the book will be slow-paced and daily, with no patience for lightning protection. Linn was a bit weird at the beginning, but I can't tell. Blood Tribe has a psychological transition period, which is not too long. If you mind, you can not read it, but you will miss the post. On Tomato's Blood Tribe, it is an okay book (personal opinion above)

It's quite good-looking, similar to the Blood Princess book, but very different from that one. That book is pure fighting blood, and there is no daily experience. Bai Ji is interesting for the first time. This book has more daily posts, but she accepts her identity too quickly.

Generally speaking, vampire novels that are relatively good-looking, although the writing style is a bit green, but as long as it is updated continuously, five or six chapters a day, readers will automatically ignore this small flaw. I hope the author will continue to write this novel, after all, it is really good-looking. 💕💕

After reading the first few chapters, as a new author, Da Da's writing style is relatively good. However, the past few chapters have repeatedly mentioned the protagonist's past of growing up in an orphanage, which made me a little confused: is this a foreshadowing, or does it mean that characters from the orphanage will appear later. In addition, although there is a lot of psychological description in the book, I feel that it does not reflect the reaction and growth that the protagonist should have when he travels to a different world. Finally, I feel that the author's way of advancing the plot is a bit rigid and there are some logical problems. However, this book still has great potential. Come on 👍👍👍 I have been reading the book for a while, but I didn't expect it to be updated so much. 👍👍👍 It's very worthy of recognition, but when I watched the main character's arena match, I felt that the opponents were a little bit intimidated, and it felt a bit fake. Normally, you should be wary when encountering opponents with a winning streak, and even investigate the background of your opponents in advance, but the protagonist's opponents felt that they were purely based on the word count, so it looked a bit strange. Finally, I hope you will post more welfare posts and enjoy watching the protagonist's shy scenes. 🤭🤭🤭