霍格沃兹：我的加点没有上限

You are the best of the male protagonists I have seen. Although other male protagonists are saving the world, superheroes, and even ancient dark lords, etc. But you are different. You are being yourself. You are doing whatever you want to do, you are living freely, and you are living out yourself. So you go out of your way. The above comments are from Ms. Hunter who explores treasures. I like this novel very much, but I never knew how to comment on it. Until I saw this short review, I couldn't help but copy it. The author created a very charming protagonist. On the surface he is kind, upright and brave, but in fact he is not bad either. [Laughing] It's just that he is more decisive in killing. In terms of plot, the protagonist is not the nanny of the three little ones, he himself breaks down and commits suicide after being played by Voldemort. But it doesn't completely break away from the plot. This is a better control in fan fiction. But there are also some shortcomings. The rhythm control is slightly poor. The early stage is relatively slow. In the middle and late stages, in order to control the rhythm, the author will make sudden turns, which is a bit abrupt. But if this novel can be written to more than 2 million words, these shortcomings cannot be considered shortcomings. [Laugh]

Overall, this novel is very good for Tomato. It is a rare good book. It is not as dark as other fanfics. There are not so many conspiracy theories. However, there are also some insignificant flaws, that is, the data is a bit passed over. Except for the overall panel at the beginning, it almost talks about how many attributes you get. Is there an overall attribute panel, such as physical strength, mental energy, etc., But only talks about how much mana you have individually.

It is indeed very interesting. This is my third HP novel that is one of the few that has been put on the bookshelf. It is the emotional line of the protagonist. There are three girls who like the protagonist. The author also made it very clear. In the end, it will be the single female protagonist Luna, right? I have read more than 400 pictures. In my opinion, it is obvious that the single female protagonist is Luna. However, after more than 400 pictures, the protagonist interacts too much with Hermione and the original character Amy, but the protagonist has no intention of accepting it. My personal opinion is that this is a gift book for girls. If you like to read gift girls, you can read it [smile]

It's super cool, and the main character is a Gryffindor, not Harry. Very charming, clear goals, knowledge fanatic, never afraid of knowledge. Handsome, gentle, patient, strong and principled, he really fits the imagination of a decent male protagonist. He can really say that: Never underestimate the power of knowledge. "If you forget, keep remembering, Neville, and don't be afraid of knowledge." Really, it feels so exciting

It's very well written. It's a rare masterpiece. The only shortcoming is that the numerical values ​​are problematic. If you don't know how to write numerical values, don't write them. It's annoying to read. Okay, okay, it's okay to overwhelm the combat power, don't wait for the last hit and wait for the counterattack, right?

The content is very well written. I didn't expect the plot of this book to be so good at first. I was attracted to it as I read it. The character's personality is well shaped, and you can see the growth process of the protagonist's mentality. I think this book deserves a higher rating [like][like][like]

The writing is so beautiful and the content is very rich. I highly recommend it. This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. It's not a lie at all. It's really beautiful. Once I opened it, I couldn't stop. I don't know why the score stopped here. It's at least 9.8 Points.

A very good HP fanfic, but unfortunately the character descriptions are too sharp. They are either black or white, except for Dumbledore. However, this is quite in line with the requirements of Shuangwen. After all, too many twists and turns will only make people look annoying. As an extra mention, today epic is giving away the legacy of Hogwarts. Come and enroll in Hogwarts and become the first generation Dark Lord.

I decided to withdraw at Chapter 338. A score of 8.1 Is a very fair evaluation. The author has written carefully because I can see that he has been absorbing readers' suggestions. The writing is very good, unlike the first time he wrote a novel. The story is also good. Ethan is charming and the original character is restored. But the problem is that there is no panel in the early stage, and Ethan's combat performance is not well written. After all, the three bear babies in the original book can kill Quirrell. Of course, the logic of children's books is very confusing, but Ethan works so hard and is still hanging, which makes him seem too weak. However, children's growth is limited after all, and the previous plot is so close to the protagonist group, so it is reasonable to grow slowly. Then I added the panel after listening to readers' opinions, and my attributes skyrocketed, and I suddenly became invincible. I was directly at odds with the protagonist group. The highlight of the protagonist group was gone, and only the bears were left. I was speechless. After all, it was necessary to bring Ethan's perspective into it, and then there was a plot where he was too invincible to be taken back to school? I added a murderous aura setting to Ethan and reduced his strength by half [face covering]. The repeated back and forth has made me lose interest in Ethan's growth. I really think the writing is pretty good, so it's a pity that I typed so many words. I'll see you next time.

The protagonist is well portrayed, but some settings are a bit flawed. For example, Harry doesn't know what Eton is. Overall, you can watch it.

Very well written, probably around 9.2 Points The main plot and the original plot are about 6:4, and there will be more and more original plots later on. What attracts me the most about this book is the emotional part. The single female protagonist Luna, when the two of them are together, the ambiguous atmosphere is unparalleled. I hope the author will add more and more updates. I can't wait for such a good book.

This is good, a good HP article. The protagonist is very obsessed with academics and is very authoritative academically. However, many people commented below that this article is a nanny article, and my nanny article is just a nanny article, so it doesn't matter. Nanny articles are written in the same way as nanny articles, and they are great if they are well written. There are some small poisonous points in the early stage, so it doesn't matter if you ignore them. The writing is not very good, it's a new author, so that's normal. Also, the protagonist is a heartthrob and may have multiple heroine tendencies, but the protagonist is always loyal to Luna. (Others are probably concerned about friendship.) There are also some private settings, so just treat them as private. Some settings have errors, so don't worry too much about them. @ [Like] [Like] [Like] Please add me an update soon

It's not bad. The protagonist seems to have more combat power than the attribute points. It feels like the protagonist's combat performance is strong but not very weak and not very weak. Others are pretty good [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou sighed after reading it... This must be one of the four great masterpieces, and it is definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu has almost no literary talent in front of it! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naiyan, Wu Cheng'en, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Du, Su Xin, Qin Emperor, Han Wu, Tang Zong, Song Ancestor, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle, all said it was good after reading it! The author's book is really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties to the core. I can read this book by the author in my lifetime.

The quality of the entire novel is very high, the plot is smooth and engaging, and it is a very good work. Only the emotional line made me full of tangles, and it felt like a partisan struggle. My childhood sweetheart is gentle and touching, and Hermione is smart and dazzling. I love these two characters very much, especially the little childhood sweetheart who has been with me since childhood. Now that the protagonist has chosen Luna as his destination, if the ending is determined to be a single female protagonist, I will inevitably feel very disappointed and regretful. Although it is difficult to understand everything, I still recognize the overall high quality of the book.

It's not bad. Although it follows the plot, it has its own thing. The writing is not bad, the protagonist's character is good, and the interaction is okay. It means that the protagonist's combat power is suppressed, the golden finger cannot be used, and the original setting has been changed by the author.

To be honest, I have read a lot. Among the fans of this series, this is the only one who can write the "taste" of the original version in terms of language. The others are all in Chinese writing style. In addition, the ability system of this book means that it is very good at cheating and deserving of a true five-star @

When the Hogwarts Express sprays white mist across platform nine and three-quarters, when the Sorting Hat sings an ancient ballad in a hoarse voice, and when Dumbledore raises the mead glass at the opening party and says "Idiot! Cry! Scum! Screw!" - We know that the magical world that has fascinated readers around the world has once again opened its star-studded door. This book is not only a milestone in children's literature, but also a prism that reflects human nature and reality. In the light and shadow of the waving magic wand, there is a fable about life that is more profound than magic.

Not bad, very nice. Especially what happened at Rolt's summer camp. Those few sentences were full of shock. I like this section very much. As for the subsequent appearance in front of the principal and professors. I feel even more comfortable.

Everything else is good. I just feel a little tired after watching the third semester. To be honest, I have watched Harbo Film and Television many times and am a little tired of some of the original plots. But this original plot is exactly the most exciting and annoying.

After watching it for a long time, I still think it's very good. I also read many comments. Some said it was a nanny tattoo, and some said it was overpowering. I don't know what a nanny tattoo is. From what I can understand, it shouldn't be a nanny. The heroine said she was Luna at the beginning, but the plot is a bit unremarkable. If you still think it's not working, you can take a look at this book, "Hogwarts: The System Rewards Are All Dark Magic." The protagonist is not in Gryffindor. The system setting is very interesting. Although it feels like there are a lot of female protagonists, each one has a detailed description of appearance. By the way, if my book review is helpful to you, please remember to reply. It's still very interesting, but Luna's role is less. The author will update soon.

It's very interesting to read, because I prefer reading novels like Shuangwen, but the protagonist of this novel grows up step by step, but it keeps me reading. It's a pity that I didn't see it before, but it's not too late now. Come on!

It is a very good Harry fanfic. The data is rigorous and reasonable, the growth is orderly, the emotional line is clear, the plot and characters do not deviate from the original work, and there are logical extensions. I have read more than 880,000 words in one go, with very few bad points. It is very suitable for reading!

There are many good reviews, so I won't go into details. Although the protagonist clearly said that he only likes Luna, I still want to ask the author, can he have a harem? Will it? Will it? Because the emotional descriptions are sometimes really delicate, making people unable to let go of little Qingmei and little Hermione! Really, I don't mind your lack of pure love, let's go, let's go, I am willing! ! !

It's a pretty good book, I read the latest chapter in just two breaths. The bad thing about this setting is that all attributes must be added by adding points and cannot grow on their own. But after ignoring this bug, it's pretty good, five stars.

In fact, this is like a daily novel, the writing style is good and there are no big contradictions, it is quite good. Those who like to read it think it is very interesting. Those who are used to reading cool novels are not particularly happy to read this kind of novel and find it very stubborn. I can give it a score of 9.1 On Tomato. Like other Harry Potter fans, it is too ridiculous to read a few chapters. It is very enjoyable. After reading it, I can't stand it anymore. I think this slow-paced book is good-looking. In addition to the character, it feels a little weird, but the character transformation is indeed what it should be, and it is more in line with the original character.

Very well written, super delicate and gentle. I didn't even skip chapters. While maintaining the character of the original characters, the author wrote a great story about the turbulent undercurrents under the calm water. The protagonist maintains his own interests while still having that kindness and perseverance. A gentleman does not care about his deeds. Not feeling aggrieved, but also able to pretend.

The name may mislead you. This is not a mindless article that focuses on the system. In the mature world view of the original Harry Potter, this article will definitely not collapse. The author's personal writing style is also quite good. The pace of the article is very comfortable, there is no inexplicable hydrology, and there is no taken-for-granted "neither Chinese nor Western" storyline that completely disrespects the original work. This should be considered a successful piece of fan fiction. I personally have not read the Harry Potter novels, and have only watched a few of the movies. However, the stories written by the author will lead me to search for relevant original settings and who so-and-so is. I highly recommend everyone to read it.

The protagonist works part-time in a work-study program, helping teachers teach students, helping Harry defeat Voldemort, and the nanny also charges money. The red scarf on the chest of this self-funded worker is even brighter. . .

It is a very good book. It does not follow the plot blindly. The original part is very vivid, the character interaction and plot development are very reasonable, and the daily processing is not boring. Overall, the plot control and character creation are of the highest quality, but because it is not a short, quick and exciting novel, it is relatively less impressive in terms of emotional arousal. However, this does not mean that it is not enjoyable, but it does not allow me to read dozens of chapters at once. The pace of reading a little bit every day is quite comfortable.