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It's okay, it's just mediocre, I can't find anything exciting about it, and there's no pretentious plot about the shared worldview that makes the chat group the most enjoyable at the beginning. After watching it, I can't remember what I watched. I'd like to encourage you with four stars. Come on, the author.

Woohoo... What I wrote is really good! Alas! I'm done! Ha ha! I'm done! !

In a multi-female chat group text, the protagonist is definitely the strongest among the people who appear. She has a certain degree of OOC, but it is not a random novel. It would be very difficult for a second author to write it as the same as the original novel, let alone a comprehensive comic chat group type. In terms of debate, I just want to say that it depends on the author's setting. Zhan Linu does not recommend reading mixed novels. Overall rating: 8 points What is the most abstract thing about this book? There are two two-star negative reviews. One said it suppressed Bengtie's combat power, and the other said it suppressed Myth's combat power [laughing and crying] It's really a debate.

Can the author let the group of friends chat about their respective worlds? After all, this is also a cool point. Can the approximate level be displayed at the back of the chat group? Otherwise, when encountering some strong enemies later, the group members will not be strong enough and will be easily injured or even killed by the aftermath or large-scale AOE (of course, I have never seen the author write the group members to death)

Well, it's a good suggestion. I recommend this book well. It's not like other books that are rather stiff in writing. I don't know much about character design. Damn it, I haven't read any of these. Damn it, but the description is still good. It's interesting. Well, for a bookworm like me, it's pretty good. It's very good.

First of all, my actual score evaluation for this book is four stars. The reason for giving it five stars is that I think the score is far from what I expected. There are no serious poisonous points, but there are no clear characteristics. It is the current situation of Chapter 44. Without promoting the characters, the plot has no particularly attractive selling points. However, due to the nature of fan fiction, some of the most noisy ones we know have not yet entered, and the future of memes is promising. Suggestion: Communication is to complete the role, not to make dumplings on the surface. It is recommended that in terms of characters, under the premise that the protagonist has half-locked the upper limit and his personality is almost unchanged, as the chat group grows stronger, it will gradually fade away and become a cover-up mechanism and an old man. Let chat groups return to what they were like in the early days of the Internet. Putting aside the helplessness of reality, allowing the exchange of ideas is the charm of chat groups.

"[Little City Master of Wuxiang City: Immortals, they must be able to fly!]" Which immortal can't fly? Oh, it's you! Groudon [laughing evilly] Groudon: Cliff Sword Warning [Anger]

It's interesting, not all of them are women. That's pretty good. Many chat groups are the harem of the group leader, so they can be changed to harem groups. This book overall feels quite bland. Somewhat interesting, but not much.

So far, it looks good and has no bad qualities. But would the author consider changing the cover of the novel?

Come on, come on, Ollie [laughs evilly]

It looks good, I love reading it, and I will update it soon. Anyway, I like the character of the protagonist. He usually looks for fun instead of turning into a lunatic. In many fics, the protagonist just wants to have fun and turns into a two-armed lunatic. This is much better.

It's okay, it's a bland and leisurely daily story, the protagonist is invincible, so it won't be upgraded at all, so it's okay to read for leisure.

Not bad, but I feel that the plot is not outstanding enough and there are no eye-catching operations.

Just rush 500,000 to comment and I'll give it full marks.

Just because I stepped on you, Shinhwa Shinhwa must give you five stars.

It's okay. It's not cool, and there's nothing bad about it. It's not very attractive. I suggest you make some cool or interesting things that can increase your appeal. Everything else is pretty good.

So far it looks okay, but I don't know why it feels a little weird when I look at it.

Isn't it your Sword Saint? Was it the slime or the brother who killed you?

Can you also write the Big Black Tower, or other Bentie characters, into the chat group?

@ Seven-year-old Super Kuro Author, is Daheita the heroine?

It's very beautiful, I hope to see it get a score of 9.0 Or above [Sending my heart]

It's very interesting so far, good luck to the author!

The writing is okay, but I don't have a car, which is sad [crying]

A relatively daily novel.

Just keep writing, please, they will do anything [grievance]

It's quite good to watch, but maybe it's because I keep following the updates, and I feel like the proportion of solid plot is less [Thoughts]

The writing is very nice. The author should work hard✍🏻

The overall atmosphere is relatively relaxed. There is nothing particularly explosive but nothing particularly poisonous. Five-star praise.

It's very beautiful. Can you let Daheita join the chat group [Sending Hearts]

Aren't you kidding me in Chapter 32? It even involves eating.