On the Wedding Night, the Aloof Female Sword Fairy Begged Me Not to Die.

There are many heroines in this book, and each heroine will be carefully created to ensure that everything from appearance to personality to story is different and colorful. This book is slow to pick up, and the more the plot unfolds, the better it becomes. I hope you will be patient, and thank you!

Needless to say, the heroine's portrayal is interesting and her emotions are very delicate. She is not the kind of story that starts in just two pages and lasts for several days and nights. This is the type I like. I follow the path of the Evil God! ! !

How should I put it? The tempo is not generally slow. I have also seen slow tempo, but it is indeed too slow. Of course, just pretend that I didn't say that. Of course, this is for me, and the author's emotional description is also very good. Each character also has distinct characteristics I can't stand it anymore, so I'm leaving it five stars, hoping it will become more popular in the future.

The current two female protagonists are both well written, very good. I hope it is a harem story and doesn't engage in stock copying, otherwise it will be praised with seven stars.

It's okay. It's considered a high-quality product in Tomato. The male protagonist's character is perfect even if he's not obscene or a loser.

It's so good. It looks like it's going to be about a harem now, but the interaction with the female sword fairy is also very interesting now. The relationship slowly grows but it doesn't make people feel dragged out. The author's ability to write about pure love is definitely not bad. I have to carefully taste and appreciate how to open a harem in the future [laughter]

The best book I've read recently. It's a history of various counter-conventions, but it's not as comfortable to read as the conventional ones.

Five-star praise. The female characters are well created and have their own characteristics. They are not the same. I stayed up late to watch it. As long as the broken shoes and cow heads are not included in the follow-up, it will be perfect. Keep the rhythm and feel like fairy grass.

It's quite interesting. The setting of the heroine is great, but the plot is a bit slow. I thought the heroine's sect was going to be slapped in the face by the men. Who knew there was such a long story in the middle but it's still okay overall. There's nothing sinister about it that's worth watching [laughs]

It's delicious, it's so delicious. If you don't eat it even after you get married, do you think you are the Nascent Soul? I just want to fuck someone else's demon sect. It seems quite satisfying at first, but later on it becomes more and more female-driven, playing tricks in the world of cultivating immortals. It's so good, everyone, come and watch it.

First of all, the score of this book has been lowered by at least 8.5 And up. Then there is the creation of the heroine. The author has done a good job in this aspect. The heroines that have appeared so far have all been portrayed with flesh and blood and emotions. The emotional descriptions are also very good. There are indeed omissions, but they have no impact on the plot. The opening is indeed fascinating, and the writing style is also good. Is the title of the article trying to imitate Dream of Red Mansions? [Laughing], and the author rests too much. Why not update 10 chapters and eight chapters in one day? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not take such a rest. I suggest just finishing the following chapters in one day.

It can be regarded as a fantasy and conspiracy novel. After reading the previous paragraph, I feel that it is well written. In fact, it is from each getting what he needs to being in love with each other. I think some people say that the male protagonist is a turtle. In fact, the turtle will ignore his own principles, but the male protagonist has always achieved his goals, but his attitude is just soft. After all, he has no strength, no background, and no rights. The male protagonist can do well in the early stage. As for tea or PUA, to put it bluntly, the two of them help each other to get what they need. As for tea, they expressed it in a language that the heroine can accept, and they didn't try to tear anyone apart or cheat the heroine. The key point is that the male protagonist did not lie to the female protagonist at first, he just said it in a realistic and understandable way. . It is true that the closer the relationship, the faster the treatment.

It's good to watch. Generally speaking, the pacing is a bit slow. The plot of two women competing for one husband doesn't appear until at least 80 pictures. Overall, it's okay.

It's so good. I was so tired after reading more than 400 chapters. After chapter 500, it was a bit flawed. Gu Changsheng was no longer so calm. Heiye Liuli was no longer so obsessed with Gu Changsheng. There weren't so many posts. The later chapters felt like an antique. The following chapters are not as lively and interesting as the first 400 chapters. Do you understand the author? The author should change it. The first part is really beautiful, as if you won't get tired of it even if you read it 1000 times, but the second part is a little stiff. Author, please, please change it... Also, author, please pay attention to rest. These are all posted in the early morning. Such an irregular schedule is not good for your health. If you do this every day, your body will collapse. The images of the creatures are all very well and vividly created, and I really like them. The author seems to be tired, just like Gu Changsheng was squeezed dry by Ling Shuangyue and Ye Liuli. The author is trimming it, and fighting again, come on!

The bookworm of 3412 hours thinks it's great [like] It can be used as long-term rations [Like] The score cannot be set too high. If it is too high, there will be Shen He~ It was too early to say anything in the early stage. I read Chapter 176. The combat power has been suppressed, and I can't see any hope, and I don't have any trump cards. The description of the wedding night in those chapters is a complete mess, it's just a bit poisonous. The protagonist himself is talented, but here he is like a child holding a big knife in his hand, with only brute strength and no knife-wielding skills. (Why not give two ⭐ because the previous writing is pretty good)

I agree with the views in the comment area. If I'm trying to nitpick, the favorability is a bit off-putting, but it's acceptable in the plot. The plot is a bit typical but the characters are well-developed, and the titles of each chapter show that they were carefully thought out [Blow kiss]

If you like watching ambiguity with a single female protagonist, you can give it a try. The male version actually contains a female version of a palace fight, but it can be a bit more fun. At least it's not too brainless. It can be boring. Why do I say that because there is only one female protagonist in the whole story. In fact, there are too many key emotional descriptions and descriptions of palace fights. After all, the male version is cool. Wen is the one who drinks the strongest wine and rides the wildest horse. You can have Wen Du and be scheming, but you don't need to describe too much about your love and hate with a person. Just like Ayanokouji, I need you to achieve the goal I want. You are just a tool. I will only guide you. You step into the abyss, and then I give you a ray of sunshine when you have already stepped into the abyss so that you can be used by me, instead of designing an ambiguous plot of two women fighting for one husband just to fit the label, and there are many foreshadowings in the article that make it feel like a harem novel. , Leading to the failure to grasp the most important core point of the male channel. Of course, there are also merits in it. I like a single female protagonist. You can try something with emotional ambiguity and jealousy (a little Shura field). In summary, 4 stars is more coherent than ordinary novels to kill time.

I spent an entire afternoon to read the whole story intermittently. Although the plot is classic, there is nothing toxic about it. However, I cannot accept the concept of favorability. As the original article said, emotions are not a series of cold numbers. I hope that this setting can be reduced in the future. Let's talk about the rating. 6 Points for this book is definitely low. I wanted to give it 4 stars, but when I saw this rating, I gave it 5 stars to encourage the author to update more than 10,000 times a day. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's okay. Although the plot is relatively classic, the heroine is well portrayed.

There are no big problems in terms of emotions and worldview. The emotions between men and women are written more delicately, but the male protagonist is already 400 chapters old and he is only having a small fight with the female protagonist. Is it too nutritious to eat at some point? . .

It's so good, I haven't read more than 400 chapters. It's the best among female videos.

After reading so many chapters, I feel that the author's writing is still very good, both in terms of love and power struggle. Many people say that they don't want to read so much power struggle and want to pay more attention to the harem. I feel that power struggle is also necessary. It would be better to reduce it a little. Come on, author, wish you a happy fire [blowing kiss] I don't know why so many people feel that the harem is not enough. Is it because relationships in reality have failed so much that they have to find ways to make up for it in novels? I think the author's emotional rhythm is quite good. Is it really good to watch if it's too fast? [Facepalm]

The character creation is delicate, the dialogue logic is ok (not brainless), it is very interesting, and the update is very fast, which is equivalent to 3 twenty-nine. I recommend everyone to read it slowly, don't be anxious, come on, author

It's really well written. I saw it before the exam and that was my only pain point. It's really good-looking and the characters are all well created (T ^ T) Ye Liuli is a very good kitten. The same is true for Inheritance... Everyone should be good aaaa

A slow-paced emotional novel, the main plot and daily emotions should be divided into four or six. The daily descriptions are delicate and interesting. The heroine's character is very three-dimensional. When does Xiao Ling have to eat? Also, don't tremble every time you hold hands [please update]

This novel is very well written. Compared with conventional fantasy novels, in order to highlight the "invincibility" of the protagonist and turn the protagonist into a "god", the ending of this novel re-gives the protagonist a "human" identity. The writing power is evident. The ending of the story is quite perfect. It is a good novel.

Among the novels I have read on Tomato, it is very good and very interesting. The two heroines who have appeared so far are very good. I read more than 100 chapters in one go and quickly went to save Xiao Liuli!

This book is not bad. It is much better than many brainless novels. The plot is compact and the plot is detailed. Although it is still a time travel + system, it is much better than those brainless invincible novels. It is worth reading slowly.

Recommended from the home page, I just wanted to take a look, but it turned out to be surprisingly good. The characters are vividly created, and the plot is compact and basically reasonable and smooth. Give it a 5-star review. The author has worked hard on coding, so I send you a small power generator to express my encouragement.

The author's writing is very beautiful, and the author's hand speed is superb. He updates four or five pictures a day.