Kendo*************

It's great. This is the best sword fanfic I've ever read. The plot is smooth and not annoying, and the emotional scenes are not awkward either. But there are so few people watching. Is the popularity of swords so low now? Please author, please write at least 200 chapters. I will send you electricity with love every day❤️

Fans of Swords and Swords cannot be said to be rare, they can only be said to be extinct. In my opinion, this book is very good. The plot is not procrastinating, and the emotional description is just right. The harem is not offensive. Even if you have not read the original work, there is no problem if you just read it as an online game article that focuses on the plot rather than the data. Overall, it does not seem to have any obvious poisonous points that are offensive, so it is considered good. Ernegay, as long as I keep updating, I can do anything [crying]

It's a rare good book on Tomato. As far as I'm concerned, Kirito is definitely my favorite, but the number of words is too few and it's not enough to read [crying]. The character creation is very distinct, whether it is the love for my sister Suguha, the vague feelings for the "Wings" and the views on the SAO game. All in all, it is very interesting to me [Adoration] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Great, I haven't given up on the cheerful version of Kendo, Grandpa Tong. We are saved [laughing evilly]

Summary: A very interesting swordsmanship fanfic, a real harem, not OOC, highly recommended. Grandpa Tong is strong and reasonable, not a mindless killing. Each heroine's emotional development is traceable, and you don't just fall in love with her at the drop of a hat. The author's writing style is very delicate, and the description of details is very comfortable. Regarding Suguha and Shino, who are very vocal in the comment section, I have some humble opinions: Suguha met Kirito in ALO using the character Leafa. But Kirito's purpose in entering ALO was to save Asuna. This is a perfect life, and it won't be perfect if Asuna is taken away again. It depends on how the author handles this point. Sinon met Kirito in GGO, and Kirito entered GGO to catch Death Gun. I really look forward to Kirito taking the harem group to conquer GGO together, but this will reduce the interaction with Sinon, and it is also up to the author to handle it. Finally, big cheers to the author!

It's really good, but the emotional drama still takes up a bit of space. People have different opinions on this matter, but I still like a little more plot. The author has to make some trade-offs, otherwise it will be difficult to write a work that is attractive enough just relying on the harem...

This is the first echelon of all the sword novels I have read so far. The description of the characters is very delicate and the personalities are in place. To a certain extent, it makes up for some of the regrets I had about reading swords at the time. I hope the author can keep updating it. I will give you all the electricity I generate for love. You must stick to it [Like]

Statistics of female characters that Kirito can theoretically accept (including games and animations) Everyone is familiar with animation, so let's take a quick look at it. Asuna, Silica, Lisbeth, Sachi, Leafa, Yuuki, Shino, Alice, Ronye, Sortiliena Game line: Storeya, Philia, Lingyin, Xeven, Premia, Tyr, Medina, Dorothy And Laila vs. Bits and pieces: Kizmel, Argo, Yuna There may be some and some weird ones: Edith, Sarui, Tiejie, Cardinal, Seluka, Fessel, Lineel, Sheida, and finally my most greedy sister, Quinella🤤

Yes, it's really good. The writing and plot are very good, delicate and gripping enough. Yes, the author must keep writing. This writing style will be able to make a living at the starting point in the future. However, sword fandom is relatively unpopular, so don't give up just because of temporary results.

The writing is good. It has filled in some of the poisonous points of the original work. I don't like pseudo harems. Now it's a real harem. It's good.

Does anyone know why it was removed from the shelves [face covering] It's not pornographic or anything, it's quite a normal and refreshing article.

Continue to maintain this quality and add a few more chapters a day. It will definitely be good to watch. Your only shortcoming now is that the word count is too few and you have taken a different main line from the original plot, but the viewing experience is very smooth and it is worth recommending.

A rare sword fan, Kirito's second set is lovable, and it is a rare harem type. The sweet love is great, and the setting of the world also ensures the continuity after the SAO chapter (derivatives of Conan and other plots), good luck to the author

The one who appears now is Grandpa Tong, who is not autistic and cheerful. He is not weak at heart, is confident and strong, gentle and considerate, has not given up on the sword, and is strong. It has received good reviews from the beginning. The Shura field is very interesting and the interaction with the heroines is also very good.

After reading about ten chapters, I hope the author can write out the character of Asuna in the original work. The previous one seems like she is a silly sweet girl. The characters of the male and female protagonists in the original work are very good. The author has also written well in the previous work. I hope the character can be written better in the future, at least not OOC.

The other possibility of Kirito is interesting, and you can feel that the author must have the original work and various extras next to him when writing the article.

It's really good to watch. The main character is the original Grandpa Kirito, but he is similar to Kirito in a parallel world. He has a high emotional intelligence, a cheerful personality, and has not given up on sword training. The writing style is very comfortable to read, and the reading is very smooth. There is no ink at all when it should be pretentious. The plot arrangement is reasonable, and the advancement is also very reasonable. I can only say that it is a high-quality fanfic of Sword Art Online. The current state of the harem is that it is estimated that the regrets of the original work will be made up for.

The sunny, cheerful, kendo champion, confident and gentle Kirito is too yin [laughing and crying]

This is my first time reading a sword fanfic, it's so well written! I read Sword and Sword a long time ago, but now I have almost forgotten many details. It feels almost like reading a new novel.

When I read the original book, which was relatively rough, I felt that this one was okay. As long as I didn't insist on details, it was passable. However, some skills were acquired too early, and the writing of Eiji in Yuna's section was also a bit strange. In the original book, Eiji is not a gamer, so it's impossible not to do it. Understand the importance of Yuna's skills. After all, they are noble percentages. The writing is a bit stiff, and Yuna's special training is also toxic. At that time, Yuna was still living with Eiji. According to Yuna's relationship with Eiji and Yuna's character, she should be able to be with Eiji. Secondly, I mentioned a little bit, and maybe asked if I could bring a friend with me, but the book didn't mention it at all. Apart from the fact that it would affect the perception, the rest of it was just a minor irritation. It can be said that it has no impact. If there is anything weird about it, it should be the female character. The favorability of the color increased a bit too fast, and it seemed a bit frivolous. The other parts are worth reading. It can be regarded as making up for the uncomfortable and regretful parts of the original work. Also, the progress is a bit too slow. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes, and can stick to it until the end.

So far I have read Chapter 38 which is quite interesting. The protagonist has a good personality There are a bit too many female leads, but I don't hate them The writing style is not a novice either. There are also too few chapters. The author, oh my, please try your best to update.

Among fan fiction, it is very good. The author describes the details of the novel, and the writing style is not bad. He did not add some messy things himself. It is not poisonous at the moment and is worth reading. I have been certified as a bookworm for more than ten years. Of course, if the author was the eunuch, I would scold him. It's hard to find novels nowadays. I always hate the novels about the eunuch that I finally paid for out of shit. I hope the author can keep it up. There are not many sword fan fiction writers nowadays.

To make up for the five stars, in addition to the anime + movie plot, will this book consider writing some game plots and characters in the future, that is, female characters such as Philia and Stolea? If I plan to write a hundred floors, the next 25 floors... I am not sure if the author has played games such as Infinite Time and Void Chapter. You can refer to the game plot settings. After all, there are ready-made ones that can be used.

It's quite good to watch. It feels like other storylines in Sword and Sword. There's nothing toxic about it. The plot probably starts to change based on the main character's changing range. The rating should be at least 8.5 To be normal.

Dear author, can you write about Alice in the future? I really like Alice, and there are a lot of regrets in the otherworld chapter. Woohoo XX, please, I really like Alice. [Cry][cry][cry]

It's great. It has multiple female protagonists. The emotional lines are very delicate and very beautiful. I just don't remember some of the characters. It would be great if the author could post pictures [Blow kiss]

As a person who has only watched one or two seasons, I dare not say that I know much about it. In fact, I tend to watch many episodes as if they were original works. Only then did I realize that every level in Aincrad was originally there. It is very beautiful. I like this kind of lack of regrets. Come on, author. The only requirement is that I hope to write a few million words [shy]

I really like the sword fanfic written by the author. As a fan of Kirito, I really like to see Kirito suffer this kind of harem chaos.

It's so beautiful that it makes my brain spiral to the sky (It's really a perfect life!) (They are all my wings) (The harem is not on fire series) (They are all filled up for her, and no one can be left behind) [Sneaky smile]

Damn it, I'm still waiting to return to the Shura field in reality. I'm just trying to survive by reading books.