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It's a very interesting plot. The protagonist is full of complaints and there are jokes (but the jokes are too dense), which actually affects the reading sense. The protagonist's viper-mouthed cannon ability is quite good, and he can really catch up when something happens. The opening bulk plastic English is also normal. 𖤣𖥧𖥣｡𖤣𖥧𖥣｡ It's just that the pace is slow. In chapter 60, I just started to be able to use my abilities, and there are no pitfalls about becoming a ghost in the human world. If the world view is large, I don't think 200 chapters can be completed. The writing style is also very good, the narrative expression ability is very good, and the content and expression of the article are clear. Harry's participation in the main plot is written appropriately. The main character is clearly set. Storyline Akiro. My guess is that Xiao Hei will die in the middle and later stages, and then the protagonist will take control of his abilities. Or fight monsters and escalate the plot. I mistakenly entered the Eastern Secret Realm to upgrade among the items belonging to the boss of Knockturn Alley. Later, Dundoduo's white lie was exposed (unraveled), and Harry asked the protagonist why he lied to him even though he didn't recognize him. 𖤣𖥧𖥣｡𖤣𖥧𖥣｡ The only thing that can be said is that better description of the environment can make people better immersed in it. The following will be added later@henforgetwhite

Everything is difficult at the beginning, so I will write the book review for you [currently in progress] I'm really good at writing so many words [laughs] [like]

Oh my god, it's so good-looking. I'm going to tell you that it's sour and funny in the early stages. The protagonist and that little temper are really fun, but I have to give some spoilers. A new perspective will be added in the middle of Volume 1, which may be a bit unfamiliar to you, so I'll give you a precaution. The author also loves to reply to other people's messages and is very active. The only drawback is that few people read it, probably because the author stops updating. But it's understandable. After all, the main thing in junior high school is academics. The plot is also very good. It's so novel, I haven't seen it anywhere else. There are many CPs that can be defeated. I estimate that this world view should be quite large, and it's no problem to update a few hundred pictures. Those who like to develop the system are in luck.

The teacher's writing style is very delicate, and overall this book is very good😊 Moreover, the protagonist written by the teacher is a setting that I like very much. The teacher gave me an overall feeling. The first part is very daily, and the description of the protagonist's psychological activities is also very interesting to me. However, later on, the teacher's writing is a bit sadistic, but it is still very good-looking, but it's not that it's not good-looking. , But for someone who has read a lot of books, I think I still need to evaluate him, there is nothing bad about it, so don't criticize me, don't criticize me 😱) The teacher's writing is very delicate, but if the teacher has always insisted on this kind of writing style, it is actually okay, but if the length is relatively long, everyone may be a little tired of it, because I have seen this kind of writing style very delicate before, But just because the article is a bit long, I just read less and less, so as a reader, I still want to say, don't spray me, don't spray me, don't spray me😱But I believe that the teacher's writing style will improve, come on😄💪 [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart Heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Love the teacher, you will live forever

[Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] This is the first time I write such a long book review, but I still want to say it. This book is very nice. Maybe a little cruel? The content is novel and can firmly catch people's attention, especially the title, and the author's writing style is exquisite. Although the plot may not be so perfect at the beginning, and Keyu's character and behavior may be a bit childish, he is only a child, and he also needs to grow up. [Love]'s first thought after passing through the book was definitely to get close to the protagonist and hug the protagonist's lap, but he also thought about it later and was not so enthusiastic. [Love] [Love] Although there are some minor shortcomings in some places in the book, the author has corrected them. [Adoration] The author has been improving himself, and his writing is getting better and better! The paintings drawn by Da Da are so cute, they are so cute to me [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] And the author is very active, she will reply to many comments [Adoration] I hope the author's books will get better and better! I will follow you forever! ! ! (Can there be more? 🥺🥺) [Love][Love][Love][Love][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Licking screen][Licking screen][Love][Love][Adoration][Admiration][Love][Flowing kiss][Licking screen][Flowing kiss][Love][Flowing kiss][Licking screen] Don't stop updating! 🥺🥺[Crying][crying] Ignore those who deliberately find fault. [Love][Love][Love][Love][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It has a sour and astringent feeling. I like it very much and cry. It is the first time I like sour and astringent food so much. All in all, it was fun to watch. I don't know why so many people find it so frustrating. I think it looks great. I like listening to "Time Machine" with this song and it feels very good. It must be five stars in the end! So pretty! It's very reassuring and beautiful to watch. The author must update more!

It's good to read. I came in based on the title of the book. This book made me feel very novel. The writing style is much better than I expected from a new author. The logic is clear and the development direction allows readers to have enough room for imagination. Occasionally embarrassing plots will be filled in other ways. Maybe I think the shortcomings are that the protagonist's strength is unstable, he has a high learning talent but no planning, and he doesn't understand his own power. In the content of the book, some plots may be a bit abrupt because the author wants to create a perfect character, and it feels strange to suddenly insert a new character's perspective without any foreshadowing. The summary is that the content of this book is novel, and the author's writing style is a bit green, but it has potential. I look forward to the subsequent development of the book and the author's progress. Come on!

The writing style is actually not bad. If it were written by a female character, well, this writing style would be too much for most. Well, because the setting itself doesn't feel like a male video, so it's not that exciting, but I like the emotional scenes very much, they are very delicate.

It's pretty good, not too abusive either. It's just that the descriptions in some parts were so real that I felt like I was living it, and then I got an anxiety attack... Haha. I'm going to read some funny articles first to adjust my mood.

How should I rate it? I heard that if you give a five-star rating directly, it will not be included in the rating system [Thinking] Foreign Currency Eight Treasures. I didn't use my brain to read the whole process, and I didn't know what to evaluate. If I had used my brain, I think I could find 114,514 problems [smile]

It's very interesting. The protagonist is in a semi-ghost state. The inner description is very good. I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and the HP world is closer. There is no sense of distance as at the beginning. I look forward to starting to gain strength. I am a cultivator or something. It sounds like it is suitable for pretending to be 13. It should be a talisman cultivator. I look forward to the author's follow-up.

Come on, it looks really good! Regardless of the book, the author is very cute just because he is so big! I really like the author greatly! It's really awesome! Moreover, the protagonist is also very unique. It can be seen that the author has put great care into it. I am so happy to be able to eat immortal food when I come back from school! But the author must remember to take a rest. Good health is the best thing [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Good looking

Xiao Keyou is delicious, I want to tease her ˃ 𖥦 ˂

I like it very much, I hope it can make the protagonist happy

I personally think this article is okay, but it was very frustrating in the early stages. Basically there is no ambiguous content, but it should get better later on, because I saw it! The ultimate ice spirit root! Finally feel a little better

I really like this cover and the author is also very nice. Many of them will reply to the content. You can read it yourself. I have been writing Chinese for a whole day and I don't want to summarize it anymore. (The author would like to ask if this cover is the plot behind it) (Will there be Changfeng x Keyou in the extra episode)

Hmm... It's a very good book. The current low rating may simply be because fewer people read it... In addition, the protagonist may be a profile of the author in some aspect. When reading, you can roughly feel the author's mood and thoughts at the time, and feel that the author has a good mentality () If you want to read a mindless and refreshing article, you can leave it first. The protagonist is indeed very distressing... "The world kissed me with pain, but I responded with songs." Although it may not be very appropriate... But please forgive me, I can't think of a better sentence for the time being. Well, that's probably it.

The setting is very novel and the plot is pretty good ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ🉑Watch it

I feel sorry for Keyu, the author of all kinds of evil Damn evil author! I want to see Heartthrob!

It's very good to read. I've read both of the author's books and they're so good! [Like] [Like] I was attracted by the title of the book at first [laughing evilly] The author, Da Da Da Hei, doesn't want to die! ! !

The author's writing is super good. I really like the writing written in large numbers [love][love][love][love][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][KISS][Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates]

Nice! ! ! The teacher's writing is good, and his drawings are so cute! ! ! !

Beautiful, very funny and fun Really pretty

Very good, that's it

Come on, the author has such a good cover painting

Oh ~ dear author, you must keep reading! I really like Keyu and Xiaohei, so don't stop updating them! I will follow this book forever

Nice! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! I prefer to listen to books while doing homework, so I didn't have time to write a book review.

It's very healthy, except that the protagonist is a little aggrieved in the early stage, but there is a reason for it. Personally, I think it's pretty good. It's not a cool novel, it's about the protagonist growing up step by step.

It's not as good as other books. I just have a crush on the protagonist, which makes me more excited in the early stages [laughs]