Xihuan: I Am a Ghost! Not Your Sister!

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Yes, the setting, world view, and story are all pretty good. The only thing missing now is a main line that can support the whole story. Now it's better to be strong for the sake of being strong, not for what you're strong for. All in all, it's worth watching, and I quite like seeing the ending. Secondly, although it is light, it would be better if you could appropriately increase the emotional line when writing about daily life, or create an accident to make the relationship between the two people further. Of course, it would be even better if there are stickers [laughter]

It's quite interesting. I thought Velcy was the main heroine at first, but later I found out that she is a strong heroine with 65% Arya and 35% Velcy. (I blame my stereotype. I didn't read the label and thought all time-travelers were big.)

I finished reading it in one go. It is very well written. It is definitely the first among Tomato Transformation novels. The character relationships, plot development, and writing descriptions are all excellent. However, the number of words is too few now, and there are still many world settings that have not been written. It is a novel with a promising future. Recommended, come on the author! ! !

Good book. Coordinate 67, I watched it all night. I only wrote about the middle of the second major event, so I can't tell much about the overall story development, but the plot arrangement of each event is still quite smooth, and the behavior of each character is logical. The interaction and sense of distance between the characters is what I loved most about this book. The initial little thoughts of the two protagonists are quite interesting. I hope there will be more in the future. Who says that when the relationship gets better, you can't have your own little Jiujiu. The actions of NPCs are also relatively consistent with their settings. It is really good to be able to show the arc of ordinary people at critical moments. So far, I haven't seen any classic villains with bitter hatred and deep hatred that I'm tired of seeing. The topic of Industrial Cthulhu is indeed more appealing to me than the traditional Cthulhu. The big ships and big cannons are powerful and exciting. It is interesting to watch after coming and going. Being chased by endless high-ranking beings for 200 chapters is still insensitive.

It's not bad, but it's too compact. Things will happen wherever you don't go. It's a bit too deliberate. At least arrange some time when nothing happens and treat it as a daily transition. I also read more than 100 book reviews. Most of the places that are said to be poisonous are not felt at all (maybe it's because I've been reading for a long time and the poison resistance is high or the author has changed it). Please write more and don't cut it. The book is in short supply. I can see that most of them are waiting for updates or don't want to click on it. It's too difficult to find a book that I can read now.

The introduction of the novel does not match the atmosphere of the story. So far, the novel gives me a sense of cold-toned tension. The plot is compact and reasonable, and it gradually narrates the world view. Although it has eased a little in the latest part, it is obviously to pave the way for subsequent major events. I suspect it is a classic fish-man. The article has been describing the protagonist's external characteristics, but it will blur the protagonist's sexual cognition, and the protagonist's past life experience and gender are currently unknown (should be a deep foreshadowing). This article is worth reading.

In the process of catching up, from what I have seen so far, I feel that it is a very good work. Should it be a dual protagonist? Everyone's characters are well developed, and there are no obvious flaws. Every character who has appeared and is worthy of the author's efforts to describe has a personality. The more realistic aspect is that the characters will have a self-interested tendency, but from this aspect, it is more highlighted that the importance of their true pursuit is noble, higher than reputation and life. Basically, it gives me this feeling [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's a very strange start. We traveled back and forth to become ghosts or substitute messengers. They were suspicious of each other and gradually accepted it. It was quite good. The last book was not cured due to force majeure. I hope this one can be completed with good results. Come on.

I saw the latest 43 chapters. There are no bad points. They are very interesting. I hope the author will not disappear and continue to update. Why did I encounter this book so early? I am sad. I feel that the author may add some Warhammer content [Thinking] (I personally don't play games but I also like the content of Warhammer games). Finally, I hope the author will not stop updating.

The book is good. It has a world view with a relatively large proportion of battles. If you want to read about love, you can read Zai Ding first. It is slow to develop. At present, the relationship is considered to be comrades in life and death. The updates are not stable and the data is poor. The novel may be ended in a hurry. In addition, the emotional line of the little saint seems to be heading for love.

The writing is good, the logic is online, and the setting of the combat power system is also very reasonable. I hope there will be more interactions between the two protagonists in the future (after all, the ghost sister is the original intention of me clicking in!)

Fighting to be a good person has become a permanent part [face covering] Everyone can decide for themselves whether it counts as being abused. Judging from the content of the paragraphs and comments, book friends who are following it can be said to be happy to hear about it. How can you become stronger without suffering some hardships? By the way, the fight scenes in this book are very well written.

A very good novel, and the two heroines are also very good. However, Arya's strength still needs to be improved, whether it is practicing marksmanship, learning melee skills, or learning auxiliary spell models. It hasn't been reflected yet, but I hope to see Arya become stronger through herself soon. [Blowing kiss]

It's good to watch. The author's writing style is quite good and the plot is also interesting. However, I feel that the story is a bit too compact and lacks some daily descriptions. I hope it can be slowed down a little later, otherwise it will easily lead to fatigue [please update]

Well, the plot looks very interesting so far, I really like this kind of story. However, I feel that the interaction between the two heroines is a bit less, and the events are one after another. It will feel a little depressing after watching it for a long time. Cheers, author 😋

Both sisters are decisive people. Unlike the Holy Mother, they repay kindness with kindness and revenge with hatred. As far as the younger sister is concerned, she can be regarded as a genius in mysticism. After all, she got "sister" out, but the sisters' life experience has not yet been explained, and the power system has the flavor of the Lord of Mystery. It is worth watching.

It's very good. It's a rare high-quality product in Tomato. It's not a novice, so you need to read it more carefully. The writing style is also very good and it's very comfortable to read. The author will become popular if you work hard. At the same time, I want to ask whether the protagonist is a hundred, a single, or a queen? (´◊ω◊｀)

Great book, great honor! It's my favorite type of occultism + gram! So far it seems that the writing is top-notch and the plot is great! (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) Xiao Wei and Xiao Ai, who I love so much [Blowing Kiss], have a mysterious person in the previous life who transformed into a reliable sister and the strongest stand-in messenger (), a precocious and cold lolita in front of others, and a soft and waxy sister in front of her sister () switching back and forth (I don't know if the summary is accurate [thinking]) It's just too little and it's not enough to watch (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) The author hurry up and update, I want to see more and more exciting battles and stickers (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

It's good to read, and the plot is good. I hope I can see this book finish normally in my lifetime. It's good to watch. There are currently 116 chapters, and there's nothing poisonous about it. I hope that some plots can be added to explain the character's background story, such as Velsey's occupation before time travel, Arya's family, etc. I also hope that this book will get better and better, instead of having a hasty ending [shy]

This kind of protagonist form may have some requirements for the emotional part, but there are also many well-written ones. At the same time, the author's basic skills are pretty good from the above book. Even if it leans towards the past style, it should be quite interesting.

Although there are currently no intimate activities that I want to read, the writing is very good and the results are normal (it may also be that the books I read are relatively unpopular, and the gifts are generally less). Logically speaking, the author should not stop updating [Sending Hearts]

Xihuan, many things were not explained clearly. The early story is interesting, but like other reviews, there is no specific main plot, and the academy does not look like an academy. The origin of the protagonist's life is also unknown. In the end, the two of them don't even know what they want to do. This is also a sense of the times. The dust of the times weighs on everyone like a mountain. There is also not a very good connection between the front and back, but the daily processing is very good, and the story rhythm is very good, but it is a pity that the ending is hasty.

Not bad. I have always felt that the advantages of Western Fantasy lie in its unique social composition and the mystery of extraordinary power. This kind of "discovery"-like progress brings a great sense of intoxication. I look forward to Arya's progress in school.

Very good, I read it late at night

It's okay. I feel that the world view is a bit like that of my best friend Spider (except that the technology of firearms is completely out of step with the development of the times, which is a minor drawback), but the world view of steampunk + western fantasy/fantasy seems to be similar.

It's pretty good, but there seems to be no emotional connection between the two protagonists [what]

It looks good, at least for now. But I don't know if the ending is he, be, or he (hell end or heartbroken end) [laughing] Oh, come on, author

Looks good, who wouldn't like Star Platinum's sister?

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