Mother, I'm Sorry That My Son Married Me

It's quite nice, and it's different from ordinary time travel. There's no system, no golden fingers, no soap making, no braised vegetables. The first pot of gold is fried crab meat [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] It's probably from the free shipping area. .

I want to know who the male protagonist is. I'm so curious. Is it Yaozu or King Yan? The author, you use too many words. I think we can start with facial expressions. It feels a bit weird, but the plot is good. I quite like the group portrait. The deputy CP is also very annoying. Later, I wrote that love is too vulgar and the plot is too cliche. I think that career can be the main focus and love can be supplemented. Become an official first and then write about love. Studying hard in the early stage should not only be a preparation for love. Don't be anxious, just take it step by step. It has been a long time since I felt like a teacher. It was clearly explained that when Shou entered the capital, he asked a few questions about the teacher's movements, and then did nothing else. He only focused on falling in love for so long. I'm sorry for his respect for the teacher and the teacher's help to him before. The plot lines of the story were not sorted out in sequence, which made people uncomfortable.

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. At present, it seems a bit like a small group portrait of the protagonist's family, and there is also a branch plot of the protagonist's wife, and the protagonist's emotional line has not yet begun. Hope is the feeling of Baozi working hard to take the imperial examination and finally meeting at the top. [Send heart][Send heart]

It's very interesting. As a new author, I have already written very well. I read all 64 chapters in one go. It's not enough. Also, when will the other male protagonist appear? Come on! I started reading this book when it had less than 60 chapters. I have been reading it for two or three days intermittently, and now it has reached more than 180 chapters. It is really good, super good, the plot is compact, and the emotional scenes are also very enjoyable. I hope everyone will read it. It is really a good book.

What's going on? I've reached 180+ chapters. Why do I feel that 0's character has collapsed, 1's character has developed into a domineering prince, and 1 is seriously injured. 1 Doesn't know if he can survive, but he asked 0 to marry him, and he didn't explain his situation clearly to 0 [star] Everyone can quit, 0's character design has collapsed into some romance heroine [face covering]

It seems that the pace of the article is not grasped well. The pace of "The Separation of the Family" is a bit slow, and I am really angry, but the pace of seizing the throne feels clean and tidy; I like to read imperial examination essays recently, and there are very few Shuangnan ones, so I can only look for those without CP. I almost met the heroine several times. Fortunately, I abandon the article quickly, so this article is rated as a five-point as long as it is not wrong. Of course, after reading 2000 pages, the content is indeed rich, and the deputy CP is also very good. Overall it is good.

The plot is pretty good, but the tone and sentences are a bit strange, with a lot of exclamation points. I think if I change the punctuation and sentence breaks, the tone will be better and more natural. Now when I read the text, it gives people a more urgent and intense feeling [thinking]. Come on, author, for more updates [please update]

The story is not bad. There are a lot of places where you need to catch bugs in the article. The logic in many places is mediocre and there are a lot of bugs. [Facepalm] Five stars are given to the author who is writing for the first time. It would be great to revise this article in the future.

This book is good at everything, with a reasonable plot, tight rhythm, vivid characters, and clear context. There are many minor flaws, such as typos and sentence fragmentation, and the names of characters are always wrong or simply replaced. Some modern words pop up from time to time. There are also many wrong names for characters. For example, the fifth prince often calls the fourth prince and fifth brother, which still affects the perception. But when I watch it, I automatically correct or skip it, so it doesn't have much impact. Overall, except for some minor flaws, it is still very good-looking. Some transitional plots are also handled very well, not too abrupt, and very comfortable to watch.

The author's writing style is actually pretty good, but his control over the plot of the chapters may not be very good. Everyone who clicked in to read must have come because of some of the things in the introduction, or some external labels. Some unimportant plots can be written briefly, and it will not affect anything. If the author doesn't know much about this aspect, you can learn more about it (I don't mean to preach, just a small suggestion [love] [love] [love]).

I read Chapter 131 in one go. I really like this subject. Everyone reads a book and has different ideas. Some friends are bad. I have to read the book reviews of other book friends. There is not much to say. I hope you can continue to work hard and don't be affected. I also hope that Baby Jincheng will get better and better and Yunting can create sparks as soon as possible [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's quite good-looking, and the author's writing style is pretty good. The only drawback is that the author always makes typos. It's no exaggeration to say that there are typos in basic chapters. Although they sometimes make mistakes, they are harmless. So overall, this novel is worth reading. There are no surprises.

It's good-looking. I finished it in one go. The story of how to get rid of poverty and then get rich through pregnancy, and then take part in the imperial examination. In the early stage, it talks about family ties, with weird family members, and early separation. Later, when you grow up, you develop emotional lines. The development of the whole story is quite gradual, and there are also two pairs of CPs interspersed in the middle. Overall, it's just right for me, hahaha. I tend to give up halfway if it's too long. It's good-looking!

I especially want to read it. I recommend reading it when there is a shortage of books.

It looks great, all CPs are well shaped! The main cp is also very good and interesting. I also want to watch some daily extras of the main vp. The deputy cp is also fine! I feel that their daily interactions are very interesting. I beg the author to please give me a [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][crazy][crazy][crazy]

It looks great, but who is the other male lead? Is it the prince or Zhang Yaozu [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I'm so curious

The author is great, is it the same year or the last year? How old is the difference? [What] [What] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

When I first saw this name, my first reaction was, mother, I'm sorry for my son, so she married herself [face covering] Later, when I saw the title of "Double Heroes", I realized that it was, mother, I'm sorry, my son married herself [laughing and crying]

The one I'm reading now was very good before. The one I'm reading now was very good before. Anyway, it doesn't have those exaggerated vocabulary or family affairs or anything like that. It's just very simple, about daily life and the like. It's very interesting, and the writing is also very good. The length of the article is about the same, not very short, not very long.

I hope the author can update 100 chapters a day, so that it will be enough to read [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Earthy love words be like: There are rumors recently that I like the author. I want to clarify that it is not a rumor. Don't read this book be Iike: I can't do it! The "clear water" in front of the court is full of demons and has no character, while the pure love in the pool is pure and untainted. This is the only book that truly embodies the beauty of the country, and it moves the bookstore every time it is updated. (Teacher Liu Yuxi apologizes!!!)

The other male protagonist hasn't come out yet? When will he appear?

I continue to catch up, it's not the master and apprentice, it's the general, who is the other male protagonist? I always thought he was the master and apprentice, but the last few chapters have left me confused [I almost cried]

The author writes well, but there are a lot of typos and so on.

When I first read the introduction, I thought he was a young man who went to court and became an official, but it turned out he was a prince [laughing]

It's beautiful. Why is it rated so low?

It's been a long time since I've tasted such delicious food! Come on!

The plot is very interesting. The more I read it, the more I like it. The author has worked hard to update it [Like][Like][Like]

It's super good-looking, the plot goes very smoothly, and the relationship between the two male protagonists is very good and sweet. Especially suitable for those who love to read sweet articles.

It's well written. I'm eager to read it. Friends who want to come, please come and let's squat together [laughing]