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Overall, it's good and very interesting. It's not all invincible right from the start. It also has some of the author's own ideas, which can be adapted. The only shortcoming is that there are too many people who join the White Group later in the book, such as Barrett and Hawkeye. Personally, I don't think they would recognize Whitebeard as their father due to their characters in the original novel. But overall it's still very good👍! Very humorous and has very few typos.

A cute little old man Original song "The Wind Rises" Stop and go along the way Follow the traces of drifting on the sea The moment before becoming a pirate A little hesitant I can't help but laugh at this lifelong wish family around Look at your smiling face Still so warm Remembered my partner The once immortal green flame Two Swords in Flowers Listen to all things Kozuki Oden There is also Sachi who hides diamonds and fire fists Now we go to the battlefield together One hundred thousand soldiers Fist crushes magma and cuts golden light with knife The iron fist and frost are just like the palms of Buddha descending from heaven I once smashed the void with my fist and was named the strongest Tsunami shock is unparalleled and domineering Cong Yun is in hand, killing all the monsters and asking who dares to take the role? Today's old and sick remnant of the era I just want to protect my son The new era has no cabin for me Walking against the light, suffering from sword sores and gunshot wounds Since I was born in this endless ocean It is bound to become famous all over the world. Looking back on my original dream of becoming the Four Emperors Maybe what you're looking forward to is just having your family by your side Try it again Foolish son stabs his father Forgive him too The war rages on with Malinfando Seven warriors and three generals The Iron Fist Golden Buddha is waiting for you to come I am also willing to go through fire and water to face swords and guns. Even if the lava penetrates the chest Darkness plummets Silk Blood Counterattack Kills the Evil Son Mo Kuang Go back ten years and I will kill myself with a knife I laugh to myself and ask you, Rat-headed Deer Even though he is an old man, he is not afraid of monsters Finally sighing, the journey is long, a dream of yellow beams I have also had the palm of my hand for half my life Don't kill a pair of black-handed iron fists Before dying, I was a little confused The evening breeze blows up the white frost in my beard Heal the sores left by the sea My life has darkness and light, I only hate the flames The dusk covers my sharp eyes Suddenly recalling the king of those days Let's get to know each other and help some more I still marvel at his great ambition He also admitted what he said back then No need to struggle whether the treasure is real or fake, it's not a joke I will finally put down the glory of my life Together with the home I value most Just let him go with your grudges and grudges Is my father still qualified?

Relatively gentle, making up for the regret Give the Thunder Fruit to that peach, [cover your face] [cover your face] [cover your face] just throw it away

It's a very nice book, not the kind of cool one that is invincible at the beginning. The image of Whitebeard is also well portrayed. It can be seen that he is really serious about writing this book. I like it very much [Blow Kiss]

It's so beautiful. I rarely give 5 stars. Really rare. Most of them give 2 stars. As long as you write this book well and don't have a bad ending or sudden old system, it is definitely a good book. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on.

Not bad, good-looking, small growth stories are more interesting than big events

It may be a bit toxic in the early stage, especially Barrett. After Hawkeye is defeated, he may join the white team, but Barrett feels a bit broken, but in the later period, especially after arriving in Wano Country, I feel that the writing is much better.

It's pretty good, but the updates are a bit unsatisfactory. I watched it [face covering]

Overall, it's very interesting. I have a question. Who did you copy from whose book? I also saw this book in another software, but I didn't read it. The cover and title are exactly the same.

The writing is pretty good, so I can't give a professional review, but compared to other pirate fan fiction, there are very few novels that I can patiently read here.

I feel it's pretty good, it's a very novel subject matter, I started from scratch with Bai Tuan, [laughs] I just watched it two days ago. Really like it

I think it's pretty good. I don't know why the rating is so low.

The content is very interesting, but the author is too short [laughter]

It's pretty good. This book is not like those mindless novels. The author also has his own changes and thoughts. It's highly recommended [laughing][laughing][laughing]

So pretty Update soon! ! ! 10 Chapters a day is not too much, right? [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The characters and locations in this novel are very well written. I want to know what the protagonist's second fruit is? Who is the girlfriend?

It's quite interesting, and the interaction with the heroine is also very eye-catching.

It looks good, I hope the author will continue to keep it up, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on! !

The plot is coherent and seems quite comfortable.

I've read Chapter 74, and I feel pretty good about it. I don't think there's anything wrong with the disadvantages of the Thunder Fruit that everyone talks about. I hope the author will continue to work hard [angry][angry][angry][heartfelt][heartfelt][heartfelt] I saw 179. I feel that the protagonist's Devil Fruit's presence is a bit low. The author can write more about its ability to give life to objects. This should be very interesting.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This book looks okay

Okay, very good! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡Come on [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]

Well written, don't be misled by the comments. The thunder fruit was given to his future wife. His wife is a navy and she ate it accidentally.

Overall, it's good, high-quality grain and grass

The plot is very good. Looks pretty good too

The writing is very good, please help the author and do more Braille.

It's quite good-looking. It can be seen that the author carefully researched the information, and it is quite consistent with the original work.

Very good looking. Highly recommended if you like Baituan. Hehe

A very interesting One Piece fanfic