Ordinary Life in Fei Ren Zai

It's pretty good. After Liu'er's book, I found another good-looking non-human fanfic.

Author, your writing is very good, it is very consistent with the original text, and it still has a sense of the original work. You have made this funny comic come alive, and it feels like it is not much different from the original work. However, I see that some people in the comment area have been wanting to see some knives, and I think You Beast Yan can be added to the list. Reasons: 1. Youshouyan is a collection of knives, one sword per hundred chapters. Although there is no sword in the previous thousand chapters, it is more uncomfortable than writing about knives directly. The author can learn from this writing method to ensure that it is more comfortable to read. 2. The worldviews of Youshouyan and Inhumanzai are consistent. They often make guest appearances in the two comics. The author can also give it a try. 3. Feirenzai is famous for its funny comics, but it could use some knives because the original work also has them. Okay, others, please stop complaining, because the author may not adopt it.

Super pretty! She is my favorite heroine Xiaoyu! The plot is funny, sweet, and more than addictive! Highly recommended!

I am an author, so giving myself five stars is not too much. 🤭

The quality is above average and I highly recommend reading it. As for some shortcomings, I can only say that the author's writing skills are not good enough for the first time to understand that he is not talking about those shortcomings. That person is wrong. I just want to say that after all, it is good for the author to write such a work for the first time. As for the so-called shortcomings of some people, I personally feel that it is okay. After all, Feirenzai himself is a comedy. Are you serious about being serious in comedy comics? Do you have enough to hold on? All in all, this novel is still worth recommending.

It can be bland and heartwarming, but I feel like the author is not very good at writing about emotions. I was a little embarrassed when Mr. Yu fell in love with the protagonist for no reason, but it got better after the relationship was established. In the subsequent chapters, there is also a little awkwardness in the two-person world chapter. It is not as good as when there were September and them, overall it is okay.

Good-looking, single female protagonist Xiaoyu, highly recommended

Let me tell you my point of view. From the moment I wake up, I feel a sense of fragmentation. In the first picture, the protagonist is a college student who has passed through the soul. In the rescue, I can also use the sorrow of the Heavenly Father or the world to influence the protagonist and save the world. However, in September after leaving, it is understandable that some of the original characters are younger or inhuman. But how can the older ones, such as the masters, look at them with judgment and call themselves elders? Even if the protagonist is a soul traveler, even if he has just woken up, his personality will not be the same. Change, if you say that the protagonist takes the initiative to regard them as their elders, I also think that after all, the protagonist's consciousness is a college student, and the scrutinizing gaze is also the reason for the scrutinizing gaze. If I want to say it, they are the ones who came later and the protagonist is the master. Unless you covet something but it is impossible, you can't conspire the inhumans. Don't say what is the purpose of interrogating the protagonist as the elder of September? After all, it is written that Zhulong saved the world, so it still needs to be evaluated? This is my point of view and I hope to change it slightly. It doesn't matter if you listen to it or not. I don't have any ill will towards this book. (At least I still gave it 4 stars and didn't mention any problems for novice writers. I just gave suggestions, so please pay attention to this comment. Thank you) 🧐

Although there are some places that are not reasonable and there are a few minor flaws, the love plot makes my body warm, Xiaoyu Saigao٩(๑`ȏ´๑)۶

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