Non-Human: My Girlfriend Is the Jade Rabbit

It's pretty good. After Liu'er's book, I found another good-looking non-human fanfic.

Author, your writing is very good, it is very consistent with the original text, and it still has a sense of the original work. You have made this funny comic come alive, and it feels like it is not much different from the original work. However, I see that some people in the comment area have been wanting to see some knives, and I think You Beast Yan can be added to the list. Reasons: 1. Youshouyan is a collection of knives, one sword per hundred chapters. Although there is no sword in the previous thousand chapters, it is more uncomfortable than writing about knives directly. The author can learn from this writing method to ensure that it is more comfortable to read. 2. The worldviews of Youshouyan and Inhumanzai are consistent. They often make guest appearances in the two comics. The author can also give it a try. 3. Feirenzai is famous for its funny comics, but it could use some knives because the original work also has them. Okay, others, please stop complaining, because the author may not adopt it.

Super pretty! She is my favorite heroine Xiaoyu! The plot is funny, sweet, and more than addictive! Highly recommended!

I am an author, so giving myself five stars is not too much. [Laughing]

The quality is above average and I highly recommend reading it. As for some shortcomings, I can only say that the author's writing skills are not good enough for the first time to understand that he is not talking about those shortcomings. That person is wrong. I just want to say that after all, it is good for the author to write such a work for the first time. As for the so-called shortcomings of some people, I personally feel that it is okay. After all, Feirenzai himself is a comedy. Are you serious about being serious in comedy comics? Do you have enough to hold on? All in all, this novel is still worth recommending.

Good-looking, single female protagonist Xiaoyu, highly recommended

It can be bland and heartwarming, but I feel like the author is not very good at writing about emotions. I was a little embarrassed when Mr. Yu fell in love with the protagonist for no reason, but it got better after the relationship was established. In the subsequent chapters, there is also a little awkwardness in the two-person world chapter. It is not as good as when there were September and them, overall it is okay.

Let me tell you my point of view. From the moment I wake up, I feel a sense of fragmentation. In the first picture, the protagonist is a college student who has passed through the soul. In the rescue, I can also use the sorrow of the Heavenly Father or the world to influence the protagonist and save the world. However, in September after leaving, it is understandable that some of the original characters are younger or inhuman. But how can the older ones, such as the masters, look at them with judgment and call themselves elders? Even if the protagonist is a soul traveler, even if he has just woken up, his personality will not be the same. Change, if you say that the protagonist takes the initiative to regard them as their elders, I also think that after all, the protagonist's consciousness is a college student, and the scrutinizing gaze is also the reason for the scrutinizing gaze. If I want to say it, they are the ones who came later and the protagonist is the master. Unless you covet something but it is impossible, you can't conspire the inhumans. Don't say what is the purpose of interrogating the protagonist as the elder of September? After all, it is written that Zhulong saved the world, so it still needs to be evaluated? This is my point of view and I hope to change it slightly. It doesn't matter if you listen to it or not. I don't have any ill will towards this book. (At least I still gave it 4 stars and didn't mention any problems for novice writers. I just gave suggestions, so please pay attention to this comment. Thank you) [Exploration]

Although there are some places that are not reasonable and there are a few minor flaws, the love plot makes my body warm, Xiaoyu Saigao٩(๑`ȏ´๑)۶

Finally, there is a good-looking non-human article [crying][crying][crying]

Is this finished? I feel like the author could have written more. I've read dozens of chapters so far, and there may be some minor issues in some aspects, but overall it's okay. You can completely add more daily life based on the original plot, and then add some of your own original creations, and intersperse some love lines in the middle. At least I can write more than 1 million words.

Come on, keep writing

Not bad, not bad! Immortal product

Come on, come on, come on, come on!

Very well written. It restores the original plot very well and has its own originality. But I think the only bad thing is that the character Liu Le was funny and friendly in the early stage, but suddenly became serious in the later stage. The video is high-end and different, and there is nothing excessive in the middle. There is also Xiaoyu's feelings. I just caught a cold and suddenly fell in love with it. It's so sudden and random, but overall it's pretty good. It's starting to change. Sorry for the typo.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. I just ask the author to update it as soon as possible.

Cp is pretty easy to beat. The author could please break up the sentence. It's so painful to see the unfinished sentences. But the content is quite interesting. The relationship with Jade Rabbit is very good. It's really beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The writing is really beautiful, but is the heroine Xiaoyu or September?

I think the two of them are very cute and very sweet, but the last dozen or so chapters? It doesn't have the same feeling of making my aunt laugh all the time in the previous chapters. For example, in the last chapter, I personally think it's better to take the initiative to give it away. Some of the common details are different from before. I feel that the post-proposal and the love period are two different things (only the main character, Xiaoyu, has not changed. It's like the protagonist is an old couple, but Xiaoyu is still in love).

Very nice, cheers author

Great publication, good luck to the author

Not bad, the single heroine Mr. Yu loves it

There are some minor issues, but it is still a very good inhuman love story.

It's good. It's very consistent with the original work. I just asked for some creativity. As a result, these characters didn't collapse or make others feel disgusted. I felt very fond of them, as if they should be like this. I hope the author will work harder and create a better work than this book.

It's the best book I've ever seen in Fei Ren Zai. Because there are so few books in it, of course it's great to find one like this.

Good looking. Can the author do it faster? 34 Sticks a day.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, write it down.

It feels quite warm every day

Very beautiful, very beautiful

The plot is a bit too fast, I hope the author can write more details [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]