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This is a really great hero novel. As a player, the protagonist truly embraces the heart of a hero to help others - whether they are locals from another world or the vest hero himself. He may be hesitant and have the flaws of an ordinary person, but at least through this computer, he can be a real hero without any distractions. The official force of the different world is also well written. I have seen too many mentally retarded and tough people who have no eyesight. This kind of different people's opinions and firm stances have written different character arcs. Maybe there will be important development in the next development? The most important thing is Spider-Man, he is so cute and fun, almost not OOC. In short, ignore the quarrels and competitions in the comments. You wrote the book, and you are the most qualified person to arrange how the hero will appear. Come on!

Very good! ! ! There is no heroine! ! ! We are saved Beautiful! ! ! Keep it up! (I hope I won't turn into Little Head Man in the future, I'm really scared of being punished) By the way, the author ヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ" Can Ni update four times a day? (˘❥˘)

A very good superhero novel. It's rare to see such a correct view of the world in a Tomato novel. As a child who grew up watching Kamen Rider and Ultraman, I feel very good about the correct view of the world. It is recommended to give the protagonist more convenience, but it would be a bit unsatisfactory if you just play the game as a bystander. I saw some enthusiastic citizens giving things to Spider-Man, and I thought that these things could be transferred to the protagonist, at least to give them something actual, rather than just fun. The real life of the protagonist is already very difficult. He has to socialize but not socialize, and he needs money but no money. If he only relies on games as a support, he will collapse.

Spider-Man without too much poison. Yeah, but the details give it an old feel. For example, the descriptions of "the school security guards who were as powerful as three iron towers" and Su Xiao who was "stomping his feet anxiously" give people the feeling of an urban novel from many years ago.

It's good, but there is no main plot yet. There are hostile forces but they are not obvious (which is distracting), so the story is relatively slow now (maybe it is because the previous plot is trying to set the stage, and there are many unclear things to serve later). However, the perspective of the protagonist's description of Spider-Man is a bit small, and the progress of the plot is very positive.) I look forward to more exciting ones, and the character description is quite good. There is no too embarrassing plot. Maybe some of Spider-Man's voices are a little awkward, but they're not poisonous. Come on and look forward to the next plot. 👍

This book is really great 👍. It is a very good novel. There is no so-called decisive killing in it. The protagonist's three views are very upright. At least he is not a fish that slipped through the net in the nine-year compulsory education. However, some plots also have shortcomings. For example, an inexplicable plot is inserted abruptly and Spider-Man's past is placed elsewhere. The local effect will be better. There is no need to let a telepathic person go. Well... Even if he says it himself, I actually think there is no problem. However, it is still very good. A book cannot be too perfect, right. I will read it later... In short, I highly recommend that you give this book a try.

I am very good-looking and fits the character very well, and the portrayal is very touching. The small details and stories in the plot are very rich. I already like Spider-Man, but I didn't expect to find such a book on Tomato that suits my taste. Come on, the author wrote it so well👍

I never expected to see such a restored Spider-Man in Tomato. The author must continue writing [Like][Like][Like]

The protagonist controls Spider-Man. Spider-Man in the game is in other worlds. The protagonist is similar to the game. The whole game is very similar to the Spider-Man in the game or animation. Other American comic characters will be inserted as the hero of choice for the protagonist. Now there is Baymax. The character controlled by the protagonist has certain autonomous behaviors and will do things in line with his original setting. For example, Spider-Man's speech is the talkative super moose. Zen, but it has not yet been revealed whether it has a complete sense of autonomy. The overall writing and arrangement are quite good. The characters are relatively reasonable and there is nothing very brainless. Especially the character substitution is very good. Apart from the update and subsequent completion of the book, I don't think there are any big problems. By the way, the character image created is indeed rare and deep. It seems that I like Spider-Man very much.

Super pretty! I am just waiting for the update and want to see the book end one day (in reality, I am a high school student who can only play with my mobile phone for more than an hour a day and spend it reading this book! It has been exactly one week and I finished it today to write a review. The Spider-Man written by the author in this book is super charming! For example, Spider-Man's witticisms made people smile knowingly, and the moose was cute, so I couldn't stop watching "Team of Three". The people watching it together were warm, and the plot design was also good. (I didn't see it when Zhou Zheng appeared, but I already knew it was Diga's later. I was very excited. I like the spirit conveyed in the book. I like the advice in the book. I will always fall in love with the hero. After reading it, I felt like I couldn't walk away for a week. In the book, Parker gets a game to control heroes in the real world and save another world (the world view is also very novel. Parker's world has no heroes and Parker has no superpowers. His spirit controls Spider-Man to be a good neighbor in that world and help others. (Parker is a bit miserable, but he is also lucky. Parker's character is also very good. The operation is done by him. Good and evil are also separated by one thought. Parker will think about the flaws of ordinary people when faced with them, and he will face them. Parker is also very good. I believe that there will be more charming characters behind this superhero vest (of course the little spider is also very good! The little spider that runs through the whole text is very good and cute! And the combat power is not broken, it will not make people look invincible, it can be read with a brain! [Send heart] I like this smooth format, I like to read this kind of behind-the-scenes article, not the kind of role-playing article. It is a very good book. Finally, I hope the author will finish updating this book. The writing is really good [Blow a kiss] (It's my first time to write a long review. Please forgive me for any shortcomings [I'm about to cry]

To be honest, I was a little disappointed that the second character drawn was the moose, because its weaknesses are too great. Secondly, the plot felt too long, and the multiple heroes should probably appear later. But I personally recommend this book, it's very correct! The three views are very good, and if there are no surprises, it will be a masterpiece of this genre.

Fantastic, never had such a perfect start. Can such a positive outlook on life really be seen in a Tomato novel? Now you see it! Marvelous! The description is great! Both the character description and the plot are very good! Looking forward to future performances!

After reading it, my heart felt warm. To be honest, I have had huge doubts about the world recently. All kinds of outrageous things have happened, and I no longer know what is true and what is false. Like a huge grassroots team, it feels completely different from the education I received when I was a child. Has the world really changed, or have I been too naive before, but I always feel that everything shouldn't be like this. Maybe I think too much, and there are too many comments on the Internet that are difficult to distinguish between true and false. But it doesn't matter. If you really want to lie to me, please keep lying. I want to live in an orderly world full of love and kindness. Even if it is false, it is rare to be confused. My emotional pursuit is actually very simple. Just like today, I read this novel that made me feel warm. This positive and happy feeling will follow me throughout the day, and the corners of my mouth will rise when I think of it occasionally.

. . . . . It's so good-looking. It's really good-looking. By the way, I suggest you find some game companions for the protagonist. Teammates with good relationships should be able to solve the problem of too many characters in the later stage. If you think your strength is good, you can shape the reality a little more, such as getting to know other superheroes who are frequent peers, and writing some plots where they get together at Parker's house to play games. Friends are the most important resource for playing games.

It's quite interesting. I don't know how the author will choose the teammates behind him. Is it a spider team or something (Spider Woman, Venom, etc.). I personally hope that some spider heroes can be added to form a spider team, such as using Q to fight. It's true in this book! The strongest single combat power [laughing], undead special attack (can seal), Kadoda Superman Damons, special attack against demons, the addition of Jerami from the Insect King team, special attack against giant creatures, the carrot may not be as powerful as the carrot of the 400 aunt, but it is handsome! The original can also temporarily form the Ultimate King. At present, they are all auxiliary heroes that are no more than Spider-Man. If the author is afraid of the limelight of Spider-Man, he can write them as limited-time ones. After all, real demons, undead creatures, and giant monsters will appear. Spider-Man's current strength is simply impossible to handle. It's just some suggestions. It's okay if the author doesn't adopt them. The main thing is to see the three spider heroes above appear.

Although I can't tell how it will develop in the future, the front is really good. It's been a long time since I've seen such a comfortable hero novel.

Congratulations to the author for taking a vacation. I wonder how long the daily update will last? [Please update][Blow kiss] If new heroes are to be released, I would like to recommend some characters: Penguins from Madagascar, Optimus Prime from Proof of the Leader, Po from Kung Fu Panda, Stitch from Lilo and Stitch, Zero from Mega Man Zero, Genos from One Punch Man, Knight from Hollow Knight, Murphy from RoboCop. Can these characters be considered? [Blowing kiss] In addition, I would like to recommend a very interesting fan animation series to the author: "INDIE CROSS", which is translated as Independent Cross. You can search it at Station B. The theme is that characters from different games come together to have a brawl. The plot is very exciting. I highly recommend you to take a look. Maybe it can bring some inspiration to the author. @Evil teacher

I'll give it four stars first. The main reason is that the author's writing of Spider-Man is really good. I still prefer the three-dimensional Spider-Man, and I especially like the plot between Spider-Man and the old lady. It doesn't feel like an AI-simulated Spider-Man, but a person who has the soul of Spider-Man.

It looks good, looks good, looks forward to the follow-up plot of Spider-Man, and looks forward to the appearance of more Marvel and DC heroes in the future (for example, Bat and Spider perform on the same stage, and their styles influence each other. The worldview merges and expands). Keep watching, and update soon! Chapter 23 is a bit unclear emmm

Five-star praise, novel subject matter and smooth writing. Spider-Man's chatty nature is described very well. There is nothing poisonous or unreasonable about it. And he is a rare Wei Guangzheng protagonist. And because it's Spider-Man, I don't feel disgusted at all. Highly recommended.

Spiderman, Spiderman, Spiderman spiderman Great, it's Spider-Man, we are saved, um, and it fits the character very well. Spider-Manism is very good, but I hope the protagonist can also be redeemed and gain Spider-Man abilities, um, not bad, not bad

It looks good (it's just two words but I can't pronounce it)

I like Spider-Man, I like heroes, the characters are not OOC at the moment, I hope the author will continue to work hard

Great, this is the hero I want to see [Adoration]

It feels good, but the plot is too little and there is no standard main line. Or maybe Spider-Man's life is the main line (?) The language and characters are very three-dimensional and distinctive, and the pit they dug gave me an inexplicable sense of anticipation for the next plot. It's just that there are too few chapters and it's not enough to read. I finished reading 57 chapters in less than an hour. I look forward to a big update from the author.

So pretty! There are no words to describe it! This is what I want to see! ! ! The real Spider-Man! A true hero! !

Very restored Spider-Man

Hello my friend, you are the real hero! .

Very good, vest-type superhero The front part is okay, but the main character in the back part is too redundant. It's always like time pause. During the game, I suddenly run to the window to look at the scenery or do other things. And I have clearly felt that there may be a world on the other side. Especially realistic descriptions are too frequent, such as computer mouse and keyboard designs. In addition, I am not sure how to achieve such an abstract feeling. The summary is that there are too many small actions in the real world. Totally unimmersed

It's really good. I can't think of any words of praise. In short, it looks good and that's it.