A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?
I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.
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I rarely read science fiction literature because I know that my brain capacity is limited and I don't like to discuss things like matter, energy, particles, and data. I still remember that the first article I read was a short story in micro-science fiction. I forgot which third-rate magazine it was from. It was a paper journal with rough printing. I still remember that the article was called "Gaia". The reason why the protagonist discovered the secret of the collapse of the world and persisted in living was "she", the mother of the earth. However, "she" is not a specific person. The author's anchor point is also focused on "her" "eyes". People's eyes are always the most guiding and convey the most intense emotions in urgent situations. I have forgotten the general plot. I only remember that "he" finally escaped from the virtual world supported by "Gaia" as a carrier, only to find that it was nothingness when he walked out. The difference from this article is that that article gave me a more "realistic" feeling. I read this article today and read the first few chapters carefully. I found that it was difficult for me to immerse myself in it. I was more like a bystander, visiting the "collapse, contradictions, collisions, and struggles" of a game world. This world is very novel. It seems to be composed of many data, derived, and then collided with another data, or a "bug" appeared within the data, causing the data to anomaly and the world to collapse. The NPCs in the data began to save themselves, either rebuilding or looking for a new world. After reading a few chapters, I stopped reading because the author stopped updating...
The structure is novel, the logic is rigorous, and the plot and details are handled very well. I look forward to more updates. It's super beautiful! Love watching! More updates soon from the author
The description is very detailed, but I just started it, and it feels like it has a lot of potential. Each chapter is quite long. If this number of words is updated twice a day, it should be updated very quickly.
I like it, keep it up