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The subject matter, the character of the protagonist, etc. Are all very good, but some parts are a bit abrupt. For example, the protagonist recognizes his relatives for only one paragraph, and there is no emotional foreshadowing in front of it, which makes the scene seem a bit abrupt, as if he recognized his relatives out of nowhere. There are also some descriptions. Don't just rely on the character's language to highlight the character's personality. You can fill in some descriptions of voice, demeanor, environment, etc. (It only represents my personal opinion, you can delete it if you mind)

Uh, not bad. Come on, author.

How many chapters does the author update a day? @ Author, your book is very beautiful and of good quality, but the update is a bit slow. I hope the author can ensure the quality and update more. Come on! [Eat melon]

Big cheers for the author

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking