Is Tianzun Ruthless? but I Am His Bai Yueguang

This is Mo Caihuan in my imagination. As a mortal, he is tough enough and has a "Bodhisattva heart". In fact, she and Han Li are very interesting comparison groups. One is a weak mortal with a benevolent heart who saves lives and heals the wounded, and the other is an immortal cultivator with absolute power who is "a dead Taoist friend but not a poor Taoist" and an "extreme egoist". The gap in identity and attitude towards the world make the two people's relationship full of contradictions, but within this contradiction, there is a seemingly invisible pull and emotion that is very exciting.

After reading several people's writings, the author's writing is not 00C. I feel that it is quite consistent with the character, and there are no cheats. Even if he is a down-to-earth doctor, Han Li's character has not collapsed! I hope the author can continue to develop the plot in the future! I think Mo Caihuan is a very determined girl. She will not be attached to anyone. Although she is only a mortal, her core is very strong. Even without Han Li, she can live the life she wants!

I have read it for the second time. The writing style is great. I really like this fanfic written by Da Da! Real! (Although it is not finished, it is the beginning of a new article [Send Heart] [Send Heart]) After reading novels and fan fiction for so many years, this is the first time I have such an impulse. I have always adhered to the concept that everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables. There will always be some point in reading a novel where I feel uncomfortable and cannot read it, but I will continue reading it as if I ignored it. In novels, you cannot pursue perfection in your own mind, so when I read this article, it really made my eyes light up! After all, it's really not easy these days to meet someone you like, look comfortable with, and meet your own needs! I really think this article is very good, so I will give all my first comments and gifts to Tomato Novels! [Laughing][laughing] Finally, I really hope that I can stick with it and finish this article. [Top post][top post]

Now it's tied. The Li Huan written by my wife is really the most beautiful fanfic I've seen so far. I can tell that my wife put a lot of thought into writing Li Huan, not only in terms of character and personality, but also in terms of plot and timeline, all of which can be matched one by one. The Lihuan you wrote really fits the image in my mind, especially the Mocaihuan you wrote, which is tough, brave, kind, and able to stand alone. Han Li's character is also very full, and of course the supporting characters also fit the image in my mind. Watching your fandoms, especially the plot, makes me feel like I'm watching a TV series, and a big drama is going on in my mind, which makes me want to stop... Unfortunately, one chapter a day is really not enough, madam, I beg you to update online... I will always follow you, please don't stop updating😭.

A well-written book, the characters are similar to the original, and the encounter plot is not abrupt. I like it, I like the original feeling.

The author's writing style is very good. The description of Caihuan is more vivid and vivid, which is in line with the character and logic of Xiu Xian Zhuan. Moreover, other characters also have their own characteristics. The author may consider writing this into a novel, because the world view and story line are quite grand. The author's writing style is very good.

It's very close to the characters in the original work. It's so beautiful. I really like this couple. Come on, the author. It's just that the updates are too slow and not enough to watch. 👀

The drama version made me cry enough, so I came here to find a HE ending. The author's writing is good, and the characters are not OOC. It's nice to watch [Like]

It's awesome. It's really well written. It's not OOC at all.

I found good articles, but the pitfalls are still shallow [crying]

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful, but why did it cause me so much pain when there were only so many chapters? Author, please, you must keep writing.

The writing is very good, I like it very much. It is an independent and tenacious Cai Huan, a Cai Huan who cares about the common people and practices medicine. The author will give me more encouragement!!!

Looks great, come on

So well written. Come on, author

The writing is really great. I have read it back and forth several times. Come on, come on.

This is the fanfic that best fits the character's personality

It's written in big letters and looks really nice. It's really nice. [Sending Hearts]

The best standing fanfic! The author's writing style is really good. I sincerely recommend all Lihuan fans to read it! Is he not coming back? Author

It's so beautiful, I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot [Sending my heart]

It's very beautiful, very close to the characters. I really like the colorful rings in this big pen, and the writing style is also very good [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The logic of the fan fiction story is clear, the language expression ability is good, the characters are realistically drawn, and the situation setting and plot derivation are innovative. Worth a look!

The writing is very good. Keep up the good work. By the way, does the author want to follow the timeline of the original work and write to the fairy world?

Good-looking, fits the character very well

Don't stop updating [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] I just found this article with such good writing

Looks good, author, please don't leave woo woo woo

It's beautiful. It captures Caihuan's true character. Han Li is also very suitable. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development. To the end of the world, in the wind and rain, madam, I'm waiting for you [crying] [crying] [almost crying]