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The memories and flashbacks seem to make the timeline a bit confusing. The memories of Wu Yingxue's three days when she returned to China and lived with the protagonist, and the subsequent plot of Bai Xi, the online dating partner, meeting the protagonist offline are a bit disconnected. The emotional line is a little depressed. The female character currently appearing, Wu Yingxue (the female character with the most descriptions, is appropriately big). The heroine template, in addition to Bai Yueguang Xiaotian's problems and the identity gap, Wu Yingxue's behavioral logic is really outrageous. He is jealous of the protagonist, will choose not to develop his career abroad for the protagonist, has done a lot for the protagonist, has been accommodating the protagonist, but behind the protagonist's back, he insults the protagonist in front of his friends who are also children of the rich family. , The purpose should be to dispel the idea of ​​his best friend Liu Weiwei towards the protagonist, but it is a pity that the protagonist heard it. It would be unreasonable to just use the protagonist as a substitute. Almost everyone can see that Wu Yingxue's attitude towards the protagonist is different from that of other people, but if she says she likes the protagonist, it will actually hurt the protagonist the most. She is the one who is the deepest, and has the most holes in her body, such as the protagonist's love letter to Wu Yingxue, Wu Yingxue and the protagonist's high school life, Wu Yingxue's true relationship with Bai Yueguang Xiaotian), Bai Xi (the protagonist's online dating girlfriend, except for the identity gap, is the most suitable heroine for the protagonist, and is strong in front of the protagonist) With a bit of humility and flattery, and a complete love brain), Su Yue (I don't know if it counts as one of the female protagonists. The most suitable one for the protagonist at the moment is Su Yue. Her identity and background include all three views. She was interrupted by Wu Yingxue. I don't know if she will have a chance to appear in the future), Liu Weiwei (I don't know if she counts as one of them either). One of the female protagonists, a legitimate little Lolita who is crazy about rich families. She has a crush on the protagonist in high school and is now Wu Yingxue's best friend). The protagonist was born as an orphan and has a bit of low self-esteem in her sobriety. Her current skills are piano, singing and square dancing. Logically speaking, since the protagonist can play the piano, her financial conditions should not be bad. At the very least, you need to have a piano to be able to play the piano, and the protagonist's piano level is not at an entry-level level, which means that he has practiced systematically. However, the protagonist is a junior college graduate. If he has the skills to play piano, it should not be difficult for the protagonist to go to an art school. After graduation, he will become a star or Internet celebrity, and the last time he goes to a bar is The resident singers in similar places should not be in the current state of being laid off. Keep the current rhythm, and fill in the holes without unfinishing or collapse. There are still too few chapters, and many plots have not been fully developed. So far, it is still good. Put it on the bookshelf to watch the follow-up. Give it a four-star support 🤦

At first, when I read the previous plot, it was quite nonsensical. I felt that the male protagonist was childish and immature. Later, the more I looked at the characters, they began to become more three-dimensional. I kind of disliked the character of Wu at first, but I was a little moved after reading the latest chapter, a pair of happy enemies. Bai's role is too thin now, and Su also has some. The only shortcoming now is that the male protagonist's growth is relatively slow, but it has begun to turn around. I heard the author commented that he wanted to cut the book, and I hope the author will continue to persevere and write the story satisfactorily.

Love is the soul's clumsiest and bravest attempt. This book vividly describes the heartbeat, suspicion, compromise and reunion - how we identify ourselves in our lovers, and how to rebuild trust after being broken. It does not praise perfection, but makes those slightly hasty hugs and incoherent confessions the most touching parts of love.

Now that I have read the latest chapter, let's talk about the plot. Wu's next two lines are: Bai Yueguang is bad, he likes the male protagonist and then resorts to a bloody routine (the lowest probability). The second one is probably that Bai Yueguang is good, but he doesn't like Bai Yueguang and likes the male protagonist, or they both like it and then they are eliminated. The gay colleague has been eliminated and is just a tool (it does not mean that there will be no chance in the follow-up, or even if Regardless of other factors, the one with the highest winning rate (after all, they are well matched and have a certain liking), Liu is the most useless, and I won't talk about it later without thinking about it. Then there is Bai, who currently has the highest winning rate and a stable relationship (+ spiritual sustenance). Now these differences will not be a problem in the future. I guess Bai is the single female protagonist and the other female protagonists in the middle and late stages have become tools. They are true brothers. Then let's talk about the style of writing. It's pure and depressing at the moment. It's typical of first restraining and then advancing. It's going to be a happy ending soon. The most important thing is that the biggest contradiction has been pointed out (status gap). I think this is very good. It's not as long as others. Finally, I emphasize that gay friends are real men. One point will be deducted among Wu and Liu duo (the two are the best). Wu is the most defiant.

I have read Chapter 118. The author's characterization of the characters is very delicate, but there are many gaps in the plot. However, for emotional writing, I think the plot is just a way to add color, and the description of the characters is the most important. Therefore, it is an article that cannot hide its flaws. I feel really awkward about the tension in it, but it is this kind of awkwardness that is the core of emotional literature. Come on, author, you have the qualifications to write a hit work. Don't give up on yourself and continue to polish your work. Come on 👍

The male protagonist seems to be a person blocked by class and wealth. He is unwilling to make changes and is afraid of losing, but he longs for love. What creates a "man in a box" is class. Wealth is a future that should not be imagined, and it is also a force that traps ordinary people throughout their lives. In reality, it is difficult to have a female protagonist, but male protagonists will exist in every corner of life. I still hope it's a he, the reality is hard enough. What's wrong with a world without pain!!! 😢😢😢😢

See Chapter 50 The writing is quite good, and the female characters are also very distinct. This is Wu Yingxue. I know that the description should be that she is not very good at dating. I also know that many of her behaviors are very clumsy, which is also the driving force behind many plots. But given the character of the protagonist, he should have made up his mind to avoid her as early as possible. The plot related to her makes people dislike it. One is that she makes the protagonist's life a mess, and the other is that her superior arrangements are extremely disgusting. After seeing 117, the author clearly understands what the readers are unhappy about. When I saw 116, Wu was still so unpleasant, even though he explained a lot. But having the protagonist attend the banquet, the conflict with Xiao Tian, ​​and going to the orphanage with Xiao all showed that Wu knew what Xiao wanted to do, but she just hesitated and pushed. Maybe she didn't think so in her heart, but her behavior was like this. Then I went to explain it clearly at 117. But this way of writing is like giving someone a slap in the face and then explaining.

It's pretty good. From the beginning, I thought Yingxue had a crush on the protagonist and made an agreement to pursue the protagonist. Mainly because of the previous episode, Yingxue was a bit jealous of the protagonist. Later I discovered that it was Bai Yueguang again. But there are no poisonous points like Bai Yueguang's novel, and the protagonist is very self-aware. Now it seems that Yingxue's character is not lovable. She likes that Bai Yueguang Xiao Tian, ​​but now she is a bit ambiguous with the protagonist, and even a little jealous of the protagonist. At present, it seems that the white one is better. But the identities of the protagonist and them are still very different, and I don't know how the author will write it later. If that Yingxue is also the heroine, I hope she will understand early on whether she likes the protagonist or Xiao Tian. Don't be ambiguous with Xiao Tian and the protagonist. Repeated pulling and stuff like that. …No way…. Now that I have seen the latest chapter, it seems that I guessed it right, Wu likes the male protagonist. But there is still no clear explanation. I can only say that the plot is too slow, and about Liu, it seems that the author is also planning to write her as the heroine. To be honest, I am still a little concerned about this character. This character is a monk halfway through. I've played with a lot of men, but I don't really like it. All I can say is come on, goodbye.

It looks okay, but I haven't seen a book in the same genre that is more attractive than this one. It's just that it was a little slow in the early stages, and the male protagonist's character is a bit uncomfortable when he acts like a pig to some female characters. I hope it will change a little later. The current female protagonist, Hua Bai, has a higher winning rate than Wu. Liu has basically found no such person. Wu feels that she is just an arrogant and arrogant character. If she doesn't confess to the male protagonist, she will definitely be ruined. Bai Hua has a good character, but the current length of description is relatively small, and she probably hasn't entered her main chapter yet. What a big boy, he won the MVP

It has been added to the bookshelf. Personally, I feel that the biggest pitfall in writing it so far is Xiao and the protagonist and Wu. At present, I personally feel that Wu likes the protagonist, but judging from the performance, the protagonist and Wu are not suitable. There are relatively few scenes of Su, and so many chapters focus on the relationship between Wu and the protagonist. In addition, I think there will be a satisfactory conclusion to what happened in high school later 🤔 Secondly, the author said that there was a misunderstanding between Xiao and Wu. I am quite curious, and judging from the direction, Wu should be pursued again. So I hope to change the character of Wu. In addition, I think the biggest point of the author is that there are more updates 🤔 🤔 [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] In addition, I also want to ask how many female protagonists the author has?