Don't Be Afraid, Poor School Belle, Your F Card Can Draw the Sword of Betrayal

The writing is very good, but there are some minor problems (I don't know if they have been corrected). There is everything in the King's Treasure. There should be as few plots as possible about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and don't hold on to an F-level one. There isn't much of a problem with the protagonist's template ability, and he doesn't directly change into someone else's appearance. I really can't stand some people turning into corresponding characters' appearances to fall in love. The protagonist has his own characteristics. It does not say that he will directly become a golden character as he progresses. After all, there will be other templates in the future, so that the protagonist will not look like a split personality after the subsequent ability switch. In team battles, I don't know where some people are. Isn't it rare to fight together in Fate? In "Destiny-Grand Order: Absolute Warcraft Front: Babylonia", Wise King Shen also fights with other heroic spirits. Together they fight against the Gorgon who calls himself Tiamat, and finally transform into a bow to use flash to hit. Therefore, this book is not as bad as those who gave it low scores said. It has advantages and disadvantages. Come on, author. I will change the rating after improvements are made later.

Let me give a true explanation of the situation of this book. The first five pictures are a bit toxic, but these pictures are to cover up the excessiveness of the protagonist who has just obtained the template. I think it is reasonable. Secondly, this book has more than 70% of Jin Shining's character structure. This tomato question is already considered excellent. Those who say that the character is wrong have not seen the latest few pictures. Then he has no combat power. Everything in the King's Treasure House is available, including the Omniscient and Almighty Star. It was not available at the beginning because the template was not unlocked enough, and the Omniscient and Almighty Star is originally a skill, and we can see that the author is actually working hard to write the King's Treasure House. , Almost no single battle will use a Noble Phantasm. In the last two group battles, there are tens of thousands of golden waves. The reason why those defensive Noble Phantasms are not used, such as the one that completely avoids one damage but can only be used once a day, of course uses the Seraph. Finally, the progress of this book is very fast, with only more than 40 pictures, and the first template has reached 70%. At present, the smoothness of how the protagonist changes from the character of the previous template to the character of the next template is still open to question. If the author can write this well, then this book can definitely be read by more people.

Jin Shining is pretty strong. It would be good if the next character at least goes back to Izayoi.

The writing is pretty good, and it's different from Next Door. What I don't like the most is having to pretend to pick up girls in front of other people's faces [laughing] But I like both books, so hurry up and read more [laughing]

The writing is good, but when will the real names be liberated?

It's wonderful, it's simply wonderful. There is nothing poisonous about this book. The plot has changed a lot. The protagonist has all kinds of cheats and cheats. It's a really cool story. Not only the supporting characters but also everyone is very clever. I can only say that the author is really a fucking genius. He can actually come up with such a plot. I strongly recommend everyone to read it! Let's eat naked without forgetting the well digger [smile]

In the third chapter, the poisonous point starts to come. The character Jin Shining is starting to lose her temper. I will continue to look at it and give 4 stars first. Personally I don't like it, it's too cheesy, it depends on what you like. After reading it, I just felt like I had a mouthful of history, but there are relatively few articles on this subject, so if you like this subject, you can read more, but don't have too much hope.

It looks okay, although it's a bit poisonous, but people kill people. Anyone who messes with the protagonist will be killed.

The character of Jin Shining is well written, a subject not often seen on Tomato.

At least it's pretty good so far. After all, Jin Shining is a relatively big challenge as the initial template.

It's very interesting. The author is very talented [laughing]

It's a good no-brainer

I feel like the author is also making progress. It's actually pretty good after surviving the first few chapters.

Not bad, come on! Will there be other templates behind the protagonist?

He is very good-looking,

Very nice looking

There are some shortcomings, but they are acceptable. The only thing I think is not good is that I am not crazy enough.

The author forgot that Shiny Flash also includes Old Shiny. Let's find out more about the Terminator Sword [laughing]

It's great. Come on, I hope you don't stop following me.

Overall, it's pretty good. Except for some differences between some settings and the original work, the writing is also pretty good. I just feel that the plot is advancing a bit too fast. Ea is unlocked in Chapter 24, and the villain is still doing something.