More Women and Fewer Men: I Lick Countless Dogs

There are currently no surprises, and the world view and character structure are okay. The only problem is the early rhythm. How can I put it, the previous rhythm is a bit too aggressive, and all the characters have a tense feeling. Whether it is the male protagonist or other women, at least one of them is in a state of tension, which makes the early rhythm feel too urgent and makes people look a little distracted. It would be nice if the rhythm and atmosphere could be more soothing. Moreover, the change of attitude of the male protagonist is a little bit abrupt, but this is not a big problem.

With less unnecessary description and less exaggeration, the results should be good in writing a serious novel.

A perfect score must be a perfect score.

Very good, please publish more books like this

Very good, not bad

Break the halberd and release the wine to the emperor's uncle

How many women are there in total? It can't be just two!

Delicacy is a good thing, but if it is too delicate, it will cause some ink marks [face covering]

I have to give you a thumbs up for your courage to think and write [please take a closer look]

Good-looking, super good-looking, worth recommending to everyone

This book is so exciting and beautiful. Everyone is welcome to read it.