Ye Luo************

Um, isn't Xina's contracted elf called Feiling? I'm confused by the description of Feiling, but it's still pretty good-looking. I hope you can work hard. No, Wang Mo doesn't have the power of telepathy. Why is she still dying of old age? And didn't she go back to the past from the future? Why does it feel like Wang Mo from the future has given her memories to Wang Mo in the past? Also, doesn't she have the power of future fairies in her body? Plus, the power of telepathy itself. Not to mention whether she can beat the King of Death, at least she can beat him on par. Why does she feel like she is not even a small villain? They are so capable of beating them, and the members of Ye Luoli's team are trained in vain. Why can't they seem to be able to beat the Queen's men after upgrading? There is also the tenth level. Didn't we introduce the tenth level members in the previous article? Except for the World King and the Water Prince, none of the subsequent tenth level members appeared. In addition, it was not a foreshadowing that Wu Shen Ling and Jasmine were childhood sweethearts, and the two were CP, but in the end Wu Shen Ling did not appear at all. There is also Fairy Xin Ling and Mandola. Normally, the two sisters at least interacted with each other in the part where they were reconciled. I always thought that Xin Ling was gone. However, she came out to host the wedding in the last few chapters. There was also the King of the World and the Prince of Water. Wasn't it known to Wang Mo that they were the same person before the fusion? Why was he shocked when he saw it during the fusion fight. It's just that a lot of logic is not connected, the plot is also very jumpy, and there are a lot of typos. I hope it can be improved a lot. Other than that, it's pretty good. Keep it up (but the wedding later is still very sweet)

What can I say, my writing is okay

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