One-Punch Man: Golden Rotation

The idea is good, but the plot is very confusing and confusing. The first is the golden spin. Although it is called a spin, it actually feels like what you wrote is just a long-range bullet, but it has many effects. Of course, this is actually nothing. After all, the golden spin is really based on the original work, which is too restrictive in the world of One Punch Man. The problem lies in the setting of Honkai Impact and the plot account. Continuous battles and reward distribution are actually nothing, but you didn't write it clearly. You have to build a store system and a temporary mission reward system. Just do it, but you don't explain clearly the abilities and The introduction of system functions is like a running account, and the rewards seem to be written down by you suddenly. You can either unify all rewards and make them purchase by the system or get them for free through tasks, or you can give a detailed introduction to the task rewards and the reasons for releasing the tasks when the tasks are rewarded. Then there is the setting of Honkai Impact. In One Punch Man, the S-level threshold is ghost level, the A-level threshold is tiger level, the B-level threshold is wolf level, and the C-level threshold is just to pass the test and not be killed by monsters. But the protagonist can kill ghosts alone. Whether or not to jump to A level is a matter of words. Saitama was suppressed because someone saw Saitama's true strength and didn't want him to be exposed, so he suppressed his hero level. The ghost-level strength is already at the threshold of S-level, and there is still no family. As a result, the protagonist is so NB, and the Hero Association and other S-level heroes have no explanation. The setting is definitely not reasonable. Summary: The plot has serious problems, the setting is unreasonable, the creation is novel, and there is nothing to say elsewhere.