Juvenile*********

Overall it's okay, but the emotional line is really average. The whole flow of the story is pretty good. Compared to the background, many things are not explained very clearly. It is suitable to be written as a long novel. There are many things that are not mentioned. The content is more along the main plot. The heroine still has the shadow of a nanny novel. From the beginning to the end, she spends most of the time tossing for the male protagonist. Otherwise, according to the normal logic of this background The heroine should be much stronger than Ye Dingzhi in the end. Her master is an expert hermit. The heroine's medical skills are at the same level as Bai Hehuai's when she comes out. In other words, she has both medical and martial arts skills. Even if she falls to the central state to save Yu Shengmo and improves, she should break through quickly. After all this trouble, she still has to arrange a lot of subordinates and influence management. It's a bit strange to suddenly go into seclusion in the middle and later stages. Although it makes sense, the heroine should have more time to practice in this situation, although having children takes up a lot of energy. However, the biggest contradiction in the whole story is that the heroine inexplicably likes the hero and goes to the extent of planning and doing everything for the hero, and then her own experience is gone except for curing diseases and rescuing people. Generally speaking, the heroine design is good, the background design is also good, and it is relatively smooth. All the plot points of Shao Bai are just a reason to continue, so it is still watchable.

The emotional line of this book is a little blurry, but everything else is smooth.