Book 16 of Jumuzhi

This is purely an article by Liu Bei. I kept standing [covering my face] [covering my face] while reading it.

To be honest, if the author is in good condition, you don't need to set your score too low. After all, if you lose too low a score, the review will look at why you got such a low score. The author's writing skills are good and his writing style is also quite good. There is no so-called reading point and the plot is very smooth. It can be seen that he is an experienced foodie [Like][Note] So just leave a five-star review

It's the first time I've seen this kind of adaptation of a fairy tale, The Little Emperor, and it's pretty good [laughing]

Chapter of breaking the halberd and passing away the emperor with wine, The sword points to the zodiac and stirs with kerosene. Songs of the dead on the threshold, The road where people pass away refers to the smoke. Broken Halberd, Wine and Poetry, After surveying the cloth house, he killed the immortals. The knife penetrates the clothes curtain and wets the hair, Go to hell with bleeding from your neck. This flower is full of passion, It is difficult to determine poverty by right and wrong. The clouds of the Yellow Desert fall between the mountains, Falling leaves feel the autumn breeze.

[Laughing awkwardly] How can I put it this way? Although the setting of this book is novel, the process is not good and makes people feel irritable. Why not the author take a look at the two books next door, "People in the Original God, Double-Transportation Fairy Tales" and "People in America, Double-Transportation Fairy Tales" to enrich their own works! [Understood] It's not that the writing is not good, but the plot is not very smooth, but there are very few of this type, so I have the courage to try, so come on, author! ! ! [Full][like][like][like]

It's a pity that in some places there is no need to add a few more scenes to make up for the word count, such as soldiers searching the body. These too many scenes did not make the plot fuller, but instead made it a bit awkward and stiff in the old days.

Good looking, love to read, update soon Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

I can only say that from Liu Beiwen's perspective, there is nothing wrong with this book. The plot may have been borrowed a bit, giving people a feeling of déjà vu, but it can be read as an enhanced and improved version of a book that has been read before.

Love to watch Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

Good book, you won't regret it after reading it It won't work in the later part. The main character is the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. It doesn't matter to him if others want to kill him. What's even more outrageous in the later part is that even the women who helped the main character can be killed in front of him and run away safely. It's so unbelievable later [vomit]

I am a member of the Han clan! This is Liu Bei!

The score is definitely high, it's not the kind of mindless and purely cool thing, but the author's writing skills are a bit lacking and he can't really describe the ugliness of people. It's just an accumulation of emotions, and the true meaning behind it can't be clearly seen.

Didn't no one read this book before? Suddenly, tens of thousands of people appeared out of nowhere [laughs][laughs]

It's well written and the car drives well, but it's a little bit toxic and could be improved.

Is that holy spear a cold weapon or a hot weapon?

Liu Bei looks good, come on

This is my favorite Liu Beiwen again, so interesting [cool]

It's free and not picky. Even though it's a little bit poisonous, it's already very good.

Good looking. Love to see more.

Liu Bei's literary talent is good-looking and I love watching it.

Not bad, quite like Liu Bei

It looks good, no need to say more

Oh my God, you can see them standing up and down every step of the way [covering face] If you give a high score, you will be investigated. I feel sorry for this book and feel embarrassed [face covering].

This book is very good. I hope the author can work hard to update it so that it doesn't end badly.

A little poison doesn't hurt, Liu Beiwen

Yes, please give it a try, author!

After reading this book, I was tied to the plane and took off. Come on, the big brother who wrote Liu Beiwen [smile][smile][smile][please pay attention]

This is Uncle Liu Huang [laughing evilly] However, the way the pig's feet are pretending to be pigs and eating tigers seems a bit aggrieved, but if it's directed at Uncle Liu Huang, let's see if you can accept it [Thinking]

Entering the dark room again [covering face][covering face]

Yes, it's a classic little black fairy tale. It's not as scary as Zhen Hei, but it's also not as innocent as a fairy tale.