Soulless Sword

The rating is indeed a bit low. Please give me some encouragement. I also have some suggestions for the author. The writing style is more suitable for Next Door, with more detailed descriptions and environment descriptions, and the protagonist is always walking a tightrope, with growth, tension, and climaxes. One suggestion is to write down the details but optimize them. Don't be too concise. Don't cram too much information into one sentence. Internet readers' reading habits will not allow them to finish reading large paragraphs of your text. Emphasis should be placed on effective information. For example, in the conversation between Deco and Riel in Chapter 59, Deco said what do you think, and then inserted four or five paragraphs of background before Riel responded. This will make the reading experience very poor. You don't know who the two parties in the dialogue are. Adjust the order. First clarify the information of both parties in the dialogue, and then write the background. The reading fluency will be better. Secondly, you don't need to keep changing or using pronouns (he, that man) It's still the same. Readers won't read all your words. It's normal to skip some words. As a result, I skipped a bit. I don't know who it was. The main perspective is still changing frequently. You can also see that many people are criticizing this problem in the comment area. If you can name someone, then name them. Or have a fixed pronoun. For example, the tuft of hair in front is very memorable. Don't be afraid of repeated names. Don't be afraid of hydrology. This is a web article. Summary I think the author still has great potential and talent, but he still has to figure out the readers' reading habits. After all, this is an online article that must serve the readers' reading habits.

AI article, everyone can see that there is no [eating melon]. The setting is pretty good, but the use of AI to expand the plot is trivial. Wenhuang is quite painful, and now you can read some of them. The author will edit the article after using AI to expand it, but you can still see the description routine of the AI ​​article, after all, it has not been deleted. (I didn't give a negative review. You think four stars is low. I can't help it. All my words are told the truth. Free articles, but we also read advertisements. The author also gets royalties, the platform also makes money, and spends money to send gifts. Who do you think can generate love and then waste time coding?) I'm here to review. The setting is good. I'm also a book reader. Author, please use less AI. When I almost got to the 150 chapters in the third volume when I was listening to the book, I really couldn't stand it any longer. I'd like to revise the text after the expansion. At least you might have deleted it a bit earlier. Although you can see traces of AI, you really let it go in the third volume. Later, because of the listening, I didn't remember the specific chapters. I only remember that it should have been dozens of chapters, or more than a hundred chapters. I can't remember clearly. It was a little better at that time. Do you understand that I listened to the book at 3x speed, but it still felt very slow? If the attributes and skills haven't changed, you don't need to copy the entire paragraph, just write the one with increased points. The writing is not that simple.

I couldn't find such a good-looking Western fantasy novel in Qidian, but I found it in Tomato. The most important thing is that there is no messy harem for the heroine. Every time I read Qidian, I want to say that if you don't know the emotional line, don't force it. Sometimes in order to force the emotional line, I feel that the protagonist has been taken away. This is great. Every judgment is decisive and rational. Come on! Keep it like this! !

This author also has a very miraculous ability. While ensuring that there is a certain amount of content, he also ensures that a certain amount of water is poured into it. Each chapter has content, but overall there is not much content. I recognize his strength [laughing and crying]

It's very good to watch, and the pure technical skills are not as polite as there is currently no romance protagonist. A daily no-CP game that prefers adventure and combat style. To be honest, this kind of show is quite hard to find. I was tired of romance stories before, and the daily casual stories were too bland. If I wanted to find a male fighting show, it would either focus too much on fighting (I can't understand it, but it seems to be very strong) or the protagonist's speech would be unclear. This article is very good. Cheers, author💪

This is a rare good book by Tomato. The protagonist is decisive and not completely cold-blooded. He is lawful and neutral, and he is not greedy when he takes what he should and cannot take. The background setting is detailed, and DND has been integrated so that the current combat power will not collapse. There is a slight gap between the economic system before and after, but mature readers should learn to forget it. Goldfinger is also very enjoyable. Some people say that it has overwhelming combat power, but the protagonist is so strong that people forget that he is a halfling child. It is all hard work and sweat, with risks and rewards. The only criticism is that the protagonist is always passively involved in the storm. I hope there will be a patch in the future or the protagonist's initiative will be gradually strengthened. In addition, the supporting characters are also very well portrayed, with good and bad characters and they are not stupid. However, the settings are a bit confusing. Not only does it not lead to branch plots, but it also lacks the unique characteristics of the protagonist. It can be set in other worlds. After reading the author's previous works, this one has really improved a lot, and it is possible to find suitable themes. I strongly recommend going to qd to prove it.

Starting from the previous book, it did not disappoint, Western Fantasy. The plot point at the beginning is similar to the Western Fantasy with the ranger's combat power because the protagonist is still in the development stage. The rhythm of the novel is particularly good, with tension and excitement, several chapters leading to a small climax, the main line is clear, and the protagonist's image is well established. It does not make people feel that the author is unilaterally piling up adjectives, but through each plot, people feel that the protagonist is extremely smart, good at analysis and observation, and seizes every opportunity to make his life better.

The author's writing style is still so good, and the story is not ups and downs, but it is fascinating. Originally, I didn't like Western fantasy themes, so I didn't read it when I first started reading it. Now that I have read it, I can keep reading without getting tired of it. The author's writing style is really good. Even people who don't like this kind of themes can read it. You will like it after reading a few more chapters. The author's superb writing style lies in the description of the characters. He does not use adjectives, but uses the character's behavior, choices and stories to let readers understand what kind of person the character is. This makes the character very vivid, not so one-sided and false. At the same time, the author is also very good at portraying human nature, with kindness and kindness. Evil (but not one-sided good and evil, in which the protagonist will put himself in danger to save the little gangster, but the protagonist has also tested the little gangster's unholy heart, and will decisively kill the people he has been with in order to survive. Every word and deed shows me that the protagonist is a person who has a bottom line but is equally decisive in killing), and There are the characters' desire for life and the positions of different characters (the people of the Black Mountain Chamber of Commerce also want to live a life of abundant food and clothing for the people in their own land), and the villains are not necessarily vicious, stupid or bad (although they are calculated mentally and unintentionally, they are one step slower than the protagonist, but they can react quickly) Disadvantages: The character dialogue is tiring to read and needs to be contextualized. The title of the novel does not match the novel, and the introduction is average. The author's writing style is not bad no matter where you get it (even compared with those published books), but in this era of fast reading, it is difficult for non-fast-paced and refreshing writing to be liked by the public.

It's very good. I've read Chapter 101 so far. Although I don't know if the score of 7.0 Or so has changed later, but for now it is the best male novel I have ever read. The author's control over human nature is wonderful. We often see many scenes of human games, and the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are well established. There is no harem, no heroine, and no bullshit love. The protagonist is rational, smart, and decisive. He does not hesitate to act but retains a trace of the bottom line for the little beggar who followed him in the most difficult time. Tears are useless when you are powerless, and anger is useless. Emotions are valuable only when you can resist. The protagonist has a setting that I admire very much. He is always getting stronger, always calmly analyzing and decisively killing. In terms of plot, every time I felt a little bored, the plot would have ups and downs, and the rhythm was well controlled. Will continue to pursue it. I saw the latest chapter, but I didn't expect to finish it so quickly with more than 700,000 words. So far, it is non-toxic. This book does not have exaggerated control groups or tool people to set off the protagonist. Many of the descriptions that are so satisfying in other male videos on the Yangshizi platform are described plainly in this book. It looks very comfortable, and there is no brainless slap in the face. The protagonist will not look for trouble to cause trouble for himself, and he respects my IQ. Pure fighting, pure becoming stronger, pure high IQ and rational character design, from a little beggar in the sewer to an extraordinary adventurer, this is my favorite story about upgrading and becoming stronger. There is no harem ambiguity and brain-dead teammates. I don't know why the score is so low. It may be restricted by the platform of Yangshizi. The biggest problem with this book may be that the narration of Shuangdian is a bit bland, although it is consistent with the character of the protagonist. If it can be improved a little bit, I think it can be charged as a Qidian male video article.

Excellent, excellent fantasy. Guaranteed book age of more than ten years. This book reminds me a bit of when I watched Lan Jing's "The Thief". Disadvantages: The novice-style title is really not worthy of the main text of the book. This rating is less than 7 points, okay, now I won't read the book without looking at the rating. Basically, few books with a score of 9 or above are to my liking.

It's quite good. It's a rare good novel among Western fantasy novels without a female protagonist. The plot is slow in the tomato rhythm, but the overall progress is not particularly sluggish. After the early escape period and the pursuit period, it is not so heavy. Both the description of the men and the description of the women are from an objective perspective, without some selfishness or objectionable descriptions, which is very valuable. There are some small flaws, but the overall logic is not a big problem. It does not appear to be contradictory, and the flaws do not hide the flaws. It feels like drinking warm water. As for the character of the protagonist, he must report his flaws, act decisively, and not suffer any disadvantages. At the same time, he has a little bit of humanity and is not too virginal. He is well portrayed. I just have a little doubt, why doesn't the protagonist's intelligence increase first like physical strength and then stop adding points when the points are halved and improve it through other methods? Even after the pursuit period was over and there was enough food, there was no choice to increase intelligence. Or is it that the attributes that are improved by adding points are consuming potential in another sense? Every time you add a point, does it mean your potential is being consumed?

I've finished reading it. It's chapter 2, chapter 97. Overall, it is a good classic Western fantasy novel. The world view, training system, characters and communication are all well shaped. It's just that the novel is on the slow side, and the Novice Village Hell puts a lot of pressure in the early stage. Also, the plug-in is a purely late-stage type, and it's in a very important but not important situation in the early stage, so the fun comes later. The difference between the title and the current text is a bit big. Someone may have been deceived [laughing and crying] But it can be seen that the novel has begun to enter the most attractive stage for readers. Please [please update] In fact, changing the title can reduce the bad reviews of this novel in the early stage [laughing and crying] [laughing evilly]

It's a good book. The author's writing style is very good, and the descriptions of each character are quite vivid. Maybe many readers who are used to fast food and refreshing articles feel that the author is not satisfied enough, but I still think the plot of this book is very exciting.

Very good. So far, the protagonist is very sane and calm. He is worthy of being a time traveler from the wasteland. The plot is also very attractive and relaxed. In terms of language, except for a few errors and omissions in attributive words and sentences (probably because the author updated it in a timely manner and the editor did not make any corrections), the overall writing style is plain and fresh, sometimes a little offbeat. It's a good book, but the pace is slow in the early stages, and the protagonist is a little frustrated due to the situation (constant games, constant calculations, and constant planning). If you like fast-paced and exciting writing, I suggest you skip the chapter and read later. If you don't like to use your brain to reason when reading a book, please take a detour. There are some settings, some hints, and some human heart games in the article. You can't understand it without using your brain. It would be hard for the author to break all of these apart for us to analyze, otherwise it would become an explanatory text. I don't understand those people who like to criticize books despite not seeing the hints and settings. For example, as for the hound part, as soon as the hound appears, it is introduced that he is good at tracking, and this may even have become one of his skills (it is a Western fantasy after all, there is no reason that the protagonist has passive attributes of skills, while others are all blank), or at least has professional knowledge. The protagonist does not have a good disguise, and his identity as a lone wolf halfling is too conspicuous. The long journey along the way is almost transparent (the priest helped him arrange the boat, but he did not promise not to tell others later. Of course, the people on the boat would be very lighthearted when facing a sixth-level adventurer. Yi told where the protagonist disembarked), if you insist on searching hard, you can of course find it (maybe due to the length of the article, many people think that they found it quickly, but the protagonist actually played dungeons in Tieding Town for a while, and the tracking speed is reasonable). In the subsequent several choices of direction, and when the hound was chosen correctly twice, the author seemed to cover it up by adding "I've always had good luck." Linking the setting of the Western Fantasy story with the hound's personal expertise, this was a very obvious "hint" that the hound had corresponding skills or props. But some people use this point to attack the author as unreasonable in writing. I personally cannot understand this behavior.

The writing style is good. Compared with most Tomato authors, he can be said to be a mature writer. There are no meaningless opposite-sex plots or dry conversations between companions with a lot of characters, which is a big plus for me personally. If you don't want to read a fast-paced novel, but want to read a story in a down-to-earth manner, then I recommend reading this book. In my personal opinion, the first chapter is better than the second chapter. In the first chapter, you can feel that the protagonist is a smart person. It is not the kind of author who writes "the protagonist is a genius" and then does a bunch of stupid things. Instead, the text of the plot makes the readers feel that the protagonist has an IQ. I hope that after the plot of the Black Mountain Chamber of Commerce is over, the author can continue to bring us a rich and exciting fantasy world.

A rare and beautiful Western fantasy novel with a reasonable setting. I have read more than 400 chapters and have a few small questions. The first one is about the setting of adding attribute points. I don't understand it. The meaning in the article should be that the more points you add, the more points you need. If you only rely on adding points, the attributes can only approach 10 infinitely, but cannot exceed 10. But the problem is that if the attributes are increased by other means other than adding points, and then add points, won't the points used to add points increase at this time? I don't understand what the law is. Second, there is no clear one-to-one correspondence between attributes, levels, and transcendence, but there is a method in the article to correspond, but the author is not clear. Third, judging from the title of this book, it should be about passives, but now that it has 400 chapters, this is not very clear. Fourthly, the author should be trying to suppress the combat power. The development of the protagonist seems to be a hammer here and there. Before the swordsmanship is fully developed, he will engage in magic. Before the magic is fully developed, he will engage in lance and even carpentry. Fifth, the people in the article are too vindictive. This is how most of the protagonist's troubles come, but he can still barely accept it. Although there are some problems, this book is also a rare good book. I thought that the author would return to the main story later, but I didn't expect that the more he wrote, the more he wrote. It became completely unreadable. What a pity for such a good book.

This is a very delicious novel. The setting is extremely detailed, and the flavor of Western fantasy is pure. It can be seen that the author has put real effort into planning the worldview. What is particularly worth mentioning is that the description of the Western fantasy world in the book is so delicate that it seems real and immersive. The protagonist's origin setting from the wasteland well explains many of his behavioral motivations, and the logic is very consistent. The only drawback is that the progress of the main plot is a little slow, and Goldfinger is not mindless fun, but a sense of achievement that requires slow efforts and gradual accumulation. As for why the protagonist does not choose to stay at a certain level and rack up points like crazy to become the so-called "Shilipo Sword God", maybe it is because that is too boring. But no matter what, the author's control over level promotion and plot advancement is extremely high. It can be said that this is a slow-burning novel in the true sense, and it is definitely not comparable to those poorly written works on the market that claim to be slow-burning. Whether it is the construction of the world view, the creation of characters, or the evolution of the settings and images of gods in classic Western fantasy, they all reflect a very high level.

The character creation, fighting scenes, and plot are all very well thought out and designed by the author; neither the protagonist nor the supporting characters are mindless; the most outstanding thing is the hypothetical conception of life in a different world in the book, which describes a reasonable and detailed different world. There are a lot of span transitions at the beginning of the book, about two or three in one book. Frequent switching made reading difficult for me. I was not used to it in the early part of the book, and I gradually got used to it later. I have a small question, why are there a lot of reminiscences of the protagonist's past life added later? Is there any foreshadowing to enrich the protagonist's personality? I don't know yet and I'm skipping this part. In short, so far, this book is one of the rare fantasy books for me. I give it full marks and hope that the author can maintain the level of plot in the future. To be honest, I was deceived by the title of the book at first, thinking it was a mindless and invincible cool novel.

How to say, it is still readable. You can catch up on it when you are short of books. The author prefers to list data. Sometimes he can list the data by adding a little value. The details are as follows: Skill Stealing (slightly reduces presence) Slashing Master (when using half-hand sword/dagger/armed sword, additional damage is increased by 60% and critical hit rate is increased by 15%) Sword Dancer (When using a half-hand sword/dagger/armed sword, the damage will be increased by an additional 60%, and the skill forward swing will be slightly reduced) Skullshaker (extra 60% damage when using half-hand sword/dagger/armed sword) (2026/10000) Raging Strike (extra 20% damage when using half-hand sword) Varin (slightly increases comprehension when reading Varin) Huika language (a slight increase in comprehension when reading Huika language) Spin Slash (an extra 20% damage when using half-hand sword) Crossfire (extra 20% damage when using half-hand sword) Glance (extra 20% damage when using half-hand sword) Blind strike (20% additional damage when using half-hand sword) Falling strike (extra 20% damage when using half-hand sword) Curved Strike (an extra 20% damage when using a half-hand sword) Pressure Stab (an extra 20% damage when using a half-hand sword) Basic swordsmanship (extra 20% damage when using half-hand sword) Wrist attack (an additional 20% damage when using a half-hand sword) Cross Slash (extra 20% damage when using half-hand sword) Three strikes (an additional 20% damage when using a half-hand sword) Lance Specialization (When using lance weapons, the damage will be increased by 180%, and the armor-piercing damage will be increased by 60%) (709/10000) Skillful (2799/10000) Investigation (6118/10000) Exercise method (1500/10000) Montenegrin (7918/10000) Wave Sense (91/10000) Second Heart (1/10000)

The reason for the low rating is that there were some jumps in the early articles. Readers need to figure out the connection by themselves, which is a very unfriendly point, but after getting used to it, you will find that everything is very good, the character creation, the details of the fights and the arrangement of the scenes, and the development and advancement of the plot are all excellent. Moreover, the description of the atmosphere of social characteristics is very exquisite. This is an outstanding ability that is beyond the reach of most ordinary writers. Only those who possess this can be called writers. This book is worth reading alone!

Looking at the eighty chapters that have been updated now, the fantasy background drawn by the author is detailed and vivid. It is really difficult for the protagonist, but fortunately it does not seem so depressing. It just so happens that the plot also allows the protagonist to escape from the starting environment. It is written in such detail that the protagonist can quickly upgrade later.

With a soft and hard core background, the system's help is not too abrupt, but is well integrated. The whiteboard system ➕ a relatively complete world view (the author has not yet fully developed it) is refreshing because of the caution and caution of the protagonist. The protagonist He Paopao has online intelligence. If he can't be beaten, he will run away. If he can't be beaten, he will show off. No matter from fighting scenes, running scenes, wits, games, it is smooth and smooth. Entering the other world, you actually become a little mouse, crawling all the way. The prologue and setting sail is really thrilling. You embezzle a huge sum of money and abscond. You have to fight both ways among many forces to survive in the cracks. Amomi is decisive and does not delay. It describes a very real other world. Of course, in the end, he takes Mane for a walk, and the real adventure begins here. Of course, the most detailed part is that there are enemies chasing soldiers. I didn't expect that there is even a scene of enemy revenge, which is full of details. All in all, a slow-burning, wise, lone-wolf, and all-out adventure slowly unfolds after the protagonist escapes from Novice Village [laughing]

I came here from Kuchikidensen. The author's writing style is very good. I also praised the previous book, and I also rewarded this one. The world setting of this book is good, the plot is reasonable, the ups and downs, the writing is beautiful and not sloppy, and I am still enjoying myself. I also think that the score is so low because I often copy and paste panel data. Every time I see the complete paste, it is quite discouraging, especially since I am a book reader. A long paragraph of nonsense will waste me several minutes. This may lead to discouraging many readers and the score is also quite low. In addition, the exchange ratio of gold, silver and copper is too different and unreasonable, but everything else is pretty good. Currently following updates! That's right, I am the guy who is number one on the gift list of this book, 😎, for the time being, I hope you can all give this book some love and encourage the author to continue creating. I am over 50 years old and have read countless novels. I can be said to be a bookworm among bookworms. I used to be a beginner, but in the past two years I have been a tomato. This book has a few points that I think are toxic, which I already pointed out in my previous review. The quality is definitely worth reading. In addition, I have a question, why do readers now demand that there be no female protagonist? I really want to see a female protagonist appear, or maybe there are two or three female characters with roles, so that the novel will be more colorful. At the same time, I also hope that the protagonist can recruit disciples and have one or two followers. This is my small suggestion, please refer to the author. Of course, don't affect the author's original setting [laughing]

4 Stars encouragement Advantages: Breaking away from novice writing, the writing style is pretty good Disadvantages: Deliberate The hound is tracking too deliberately. Can be designed so that hounds have tracking magic or skills Rather, luckily It's just a clear sign telling readers that I don't want to write about the tracking process. Just use luck to skip the tracking process. The protagonist moves to several places The hound can find the protagonist just by looking for it with luck It's a magical world anyway, and I can't write a few words about tracking magic.

It's very good. It's not a pure novel, but the protagonist also has clear grudges and will take revenge immediately if he has the strength. The world setting is quite reasonable. Those who are powerful really do whatever they want within certain rules. There is no help without asking for anything in return. The protagonist is really a pure lone wolf. There is no completely safe place. He relies on himself for logistics and intelligence, which makes people feel aloof. It is very realistic. The protagonist often makes a lot of plans, but the plans cannot keep up with the changes and are not perfect. However, the protagonist never complains and just solves the problem silently. The protagonist really feels tough.

For those who watch western fantasy and similar to DND, 8-9 points is definitely no problem, food and drink. He is ambitious and hard-working, but his starting strength is a bit weak and there is nothing he can do about it. It's good to have found a way to survive on your own [shy] It's too slow, plot advancement and updates [laughing evilly]. I will change it back when there are more. (I changed it back, the score is too low, I'm afraid it will kill me [face covering]) Then, there are a bunch of people below who say they abuse the master and suppress their fighting ability. Can you, a little brat, do better in that situation? Personally, I don't think there's anything wrong with it except slow updates. (I will deduct stars for water, literature and water) A bunch of people are used to reading invincible articles [laughing evilly], but still have a fighting ability? He was able to kill the thieves at the first level with great success. Not to mention killing those second-level warriors later.

[Laughing] [Like] The author put too much pressure in the early stage and almost gave up. The protagonist in the first two volumes was almost hiding and swaying around in the hands of big forces. This rating is indeed deserved. It starts to look good in the third volume. As for the plug-ins, they are almost gone. It almost all depends on the protagonist's personal efforts.

The eloquent writing style has the flavor of ancient Western fantasy. Pay attention to the content of the story and the structure of the world view, rather than simply stacking up cool points. Not to mention anything else, I wrote more than 400 chapters against the author, but no character similar to a 'heroine' appeared, not even a supporting actress with a larger role. This shows the strength of the author. The protagonist never showed any attentiveness to any female characters, nor did he pay much attention to any women. It's not like some online articles where the author spends a lot of words describing how beautiful and outstanding a female character is. Then write about the kind where the protagonist looks at it appreciatively, then looks away, and then passersby are surprised that the protagonist is not interested in women. The protagonist of this book really doesn't pay attention to women. . . The author didn't even emphasize this point. The protagonist is just natural and doesn't show any desire for either sex... He only wants to take risks, fight and become stronger. An extremely pure lone wolf western fantasy adventure novel

I think it's well written. It's the type of novel that you can read slowly and carefully. There are a lot of details in the text. I don't think it's hydrology. These small details make the background of the story in the book more real (not to mention that Tomato is free) However, I have to lament that it is really not easy for the protagonist to get out of the "Novice Village". I don't know much about combat power data and the like, and I pay more attention to the story and plot experience. Generally speaking, it is not bad. However, in recent chapters, the main line feels a bit vague, or does the author have his own arrangements? Regarding the future development of this book: Maybe the protagonist will have a main plot, and the goal is xxxx. Maybe the protagonist will have friends, maybe a lone wolf, maybe there will be allies for short-term cooperation, maybe he will save the princess and the prince🤴, maybe he will confront or cooperate with the gods? Looking forward to the protagonist entering a larger world [love] [love] [love]

It looks good, and the details are well described. For example, the main character wants to collect water, and the description of how to collect water is reasonable and reasonable. The villains in it all have flesh and blood and their own thoughts. The protagonist also has his own sense of proportion when killing, and will not kill indiscriminately. There are no vulgar body descriptions for the female characters in it, which is highly praised. It's not that I don't like watching it, I'm really tired of it. Every female character in other novels has bulging breasts, and any one of them looks like a fairy. The biggest advantage of this novel is that it has a golden finger, but it is not big. It has a good sense of adventure and is very vivid and sophisticated. The main character's character is also great.