Stack Passives Like Crazy, Then Crush the Boss

AI article, everyone can see that there is no [eating melon]. The setting is pretty good, but the use of AI to expand the plot is trivial. Wenhuang is quite painful, and now you can read some of them. The author will edit the article after using AI to expand it, but you can still see the description routine of the AI ​​article, after all, it has not been deleted. (I didn't give a negative review. You think four stars is low. I can't help it. All my words are told the truth. Free articles, but we also read advertisements. The author also gets royalties, the platform also makes money, and spends money to send gifts. Who do you think can generate love and then waste time coding?) I'm here to review. The setting is good. I'm also a book reader. Author, please use less AI. When I almost got to the 150 chapters in the third volume when I was listening to the book, I really couldn't stand it any longer. I'd like to revise the text after the expansion. At least you might have deleted it a bit earlier. Although you can see traces of AI, you really let it go in the third volume. Later, because of the listening, I didn't remember the specific chapters. I only remember that it should have been dozens of chapters, or more than a hundred chapters. I can't remember clearly. It was a little better at that time. Do you understand that I listened to the book at 3x speed, but it still felt very slow? If the attributes and skills haven't changed, you don't need to copy the entire paragraph, just write the one with increased points. The writing is not that simple.

The rating is indeed a bit low. Please give me some encouragement. I also have some suggestions for the author. The writing style is more suitable for Next Door, with more detailed descriptions and environment descriptions, and the protagonist is always walking a tightrope, with growth, tension, and climaxes. One suggestion is to write down the details but optimize them. Don't be too concise. Don't cram too much information into one sentence. Internet readers' reading habits will not allow them to finish reading large paragraphs of your text. Emphasis should be placed on effective information. For example, in the conversation between Deco and Riel in Chapter 59, Deco said what do you think, and then inserted four or five paragraphs of background before Riel responded. This will make the reading experience very poor. You don't know who the two parties in the dialogue are. Adjust the order. First clarify the information of both parties in the dialogue, and then write the background. The reading fluency will be better. Secondly, you don't need to keep changing or using pronouns (he, that man) It's still the same. Readers won't read all your words. It's normal to skip some words. As a result, I skipped a bit. I don't know who it was. The main perspective is still changing frequently. You can also see that many people are criticizing this problem in the comment area. If you can name someone, then name them. Or have a fixed pronoun. For example, the tuft of hair in front is very memorable. Don't be afraid of repeated names. Don't be afraid of hydrology. This is a web article. Summary I think the author still has great potential and talent, but he still has to figure out the readers' reading habits. After all, this is an online article that must serve the readers' reading habits.

I couldn't find such a good-looking Western fantasy novel in Qidian, but I found it in Tomato. The most important thing is that there is no messy harem for the heroine. Every time I read Qidian, I want to say that if you don't know the emotional line, don't force it. Sometimes in order to force the emotional line, I feel that the protagonist has been taken away. This is great. Every judgment is decisive and rational. Come on! Keep it like this! !

This author also has a very miraculous ability. While ensuring that there is a certain amount of content, he also ensures that a certain amount of water is poured into it. Each chapter has content, but overall there is not much content. I recognize his strength [laughing and crying]

It's very good to watch, and the pure technical skills are not as polite as there is currently no romance protagonist. A daily no-CP game that prefers adventure and combat style. To be honest, this kind of show is quite hard to find. I was tired of romance stories before, and the daily casual stories were too bland. If I wanted to find a male fighting show, it would either focus too much on fighting (I can't understand it, but it seems to be very strong) or the protagonist's speech would be unclear. This article is very good. Cheers, author💪

This is a rare good book by Tomato. The protagonist is decisive and not completely cold-blooded. He is lawful and neutral, and he is not greedy when he takes what he should and cannot take. The background setting is detailed, and DND has been integrated so that the current combat power will not collapse. There is a slight gap between the economic system before and after, but mature readers should learn to forget it. Goldfinger is also very enjoyable. Some people say that it has overwhelming combat power, but the protagonist is so strong that people forget that he is a halfling child. It is all hard work and sweat, with risks and rewards. The only criticism is that the protagonist is always passively involved in the storm. I hope there will be a patch in the future or the protagonist's initiative will be gradually strengthened. In addition, the supporting characters are also very well portrayed, with good and bad characters and they are not stupid. However, the settings are a bit confusing. Not only does it not lead to branch plots, but it also lacks the unique characteristics of the protagonist. It can be set in other worlds. After reading the author's previous works, this one has really improved a lot, and it is possible to find suitable themes. I strongly recommend going to qd to prove it.

Starting from the previous book, it did not disappoint, Western Fantasy. The plot point at the beginning is similar to the Western Fantasy with the ranger's combat power because the protagonist is still in the development stage. The rhythm of the novel is particularly good, with tension and excitement, several chapters leading to a small climax, the main line is clear, and the protagonist's image is well established. It does not make people feel that the author is unilaterally piling up adjectives, but through each plot, people feel that the protagonist is extremely smart, good at analysis and observation, and seizes every opportunity to make his life better.

The author's writing style is still so good, and the story is not ups and downs, but it is fascinating. Originally, I didn't like Western fantasy themes, so I didn't read it when I first started reading it. Now that I have read it, I can keep reading without getting tired of it. The author's writing style is really good. Even people who don't like this kind of themes can read it. You will like it after reading a few more chapters. The author's superb writing style lies in the description of the characters. He does not use adjectives, but uses the character's behavior, choices and stories to let readers understand what kind of person the character is. This makes the character very vivid, not so one-sided and false. At the same time, the author is also very good at portraying human nature, with kindness and kindness. Evil (but not one-sided good and evil, in which the protagonist will put himself in danger to save the little gangster, but the protagonist has also tested the little gangster's unholy heart, and will decisively kill the people he has been with in order to survive. Every word and deed shows me that the protagonist is a person who has a bottom line but is equally decisive in killing), and There are the characters' desire for life and the positions of different characters (the people of the Black Mountain Chamber of Commerce also want to live a life of abundant food and clothing for the people in their own land), and the villains are not necessarily vicious, stupid or bad (although they are calculated mentally and unintentionally, they are one step slower than the protagonist, but they can react quickly) Disadvantages: The character dialogue is tiring to read and needs to be contextualized. The title of the novel does not match the novel, and the introduction is average. The author's writing style is not bad no matter where you get it (even compared with those published books), but in this era of fast reading, it is difficult for non-fast-paced and refreshing writing to be liked by the public.

It's very good. I've read Chapter 101 so far. Although I don't know if the score of 7.0 Or so has changed later, but for now it is the best male novel I have ever read. The author's control over human nature is wonderful. We often see many scenes of human games, and the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are well established. There is no harem, no heroine, and no bullshit love. The protagonist is rational, smart, and decisive. He does not hesitate to act but retains a trace of the bottom line for the little beggar who followed him in the most difficult time. Tears are useless when you are powerless, and anger is useless. Emotions are valuable only when you can resist. The protagonist has a setting that I admire very much. He is always getting stronger, always calmly analyzing and decisively killing. In terms of plot, every time I felt a little bored, the plot would have ups and downs, and the rhythm was well controlled. Will continue to pursue it. I saw the latest chapter, but I didn't expect to finish it so quickly with more than 700,000 words. So far, it is non-toxic. This book does not have exaggerated control groups or tool people to set off the protagonist. Many of the descriptions that are so satisfying in other male videos on the Yangshizi platform are described plainly in this book. It looks very comfortable, and there is no brainless slap in the face. The protagonist will not look for trouble to cause trouble for himself, and he respects my IQ. Pure fighting, pure becoming stronger, pure high IQ and rational character design, from a little beggar in the sewer to an extraordinary adventurer, this is my favorite story about upgrading and becoming stronger. There is no harem ambiguity and brain-dead teammates. I don't know why the score is so low. It may be restricted by the platform of Yangshizi. The biggest problem with this book may be that the narration of Shuangdian is a bit bland, although it is consistent with the character of the protagonist. If it can be improved a little bit, I think it can be charged as a Qidian male video article.

Excellent, excellent fantasy. Guaranteed book age of more than ten years. This book reminds me a bit of when I watched Lan Jing's "The Thief". Disadvantages: The novice-style title is really not worthy of the main text of the book. This rating is less than 7 points, okay, now I won't read the book without looking at the rating. Basically, few books with a score of 9 or above are to my liking.