Xuanhuan: From the Start, I Dropped a Honkai: Star Rail Secret Realm

Some suggestions 1. There is a small detail. The monk learned the name of the internal device of the space station without any information. It's a bit of a drama. 2. I feel like I can let the cultivators properly know the information about the Star God and let them understand how powerful the mind is. This is also a cool point. 3. I feel like I can create a large-scale team battle copy and set the timeline to a certain major event in the Bengtie universe, such as the locust plague in the universe, the war between the Immortal Boat and the Fengrao people, etc., So that these cultivators can properly challenge some bosses, such as the Star-Shattering King Insect. 5. Less Some of my opinions: The author's writing style is indescribably rigorous? I can't describe that feeling. If I really want to say it, I feel like the author is a more rational person. There seems to be something wrong at the moment. The combat power may be due to the author's expression. What the young demon master should not have obtained is the source of destructive power. Like the Duke of Hellfire, he destroyed for profit. It was impure, and naturally there was no "true meaning of destruction" mentioned later. Although it can be explained that the protagonist is not strong enough and can only be released in a weakened version, it is definitely not something that monks can get involved in. If the author wants to write about the true meaning of destruction, he can simply write about a madman who regards the world as a paradise. Not for fame and fortune, but simply wanting to destroy. That is the true meaning of destruction Part 2 The problem of combat power is still unresolved. Not to mention crushing, at least the Anti-Material Legion cannot let out a scream, because the Legion is never afraid. It might be better if the part where the tiger beats the void pawn is changed to the void pawn risking his life to attack.

Okay, here's a little suggestion. I think this system has the function of playing some internal information from a secret realm for the outside world to see. Therefore, some content that cannot be revealed to the players in the original main plot can be appropriately released through those PVs similar to those in "Thousand Stars Journey" that mainly supplement the world view to help outsiders understand. However, this depends on the author himself. I just made some suggestions.

It's okay. Overall, the writing is okay. There are loopholes but they don't affect the viewing. The novel theme shows the world of Beng Tie in the form of a secret realm, which makes it well connected to the world of immortality. It's a good idea to experience the plot of Beng Tie first-hand and gain opportunities at the same time. Let's talk about the bad points again (personal opinion): There is a big problem with Lei Gang's character writing in seconds. A righteous character kills Xing indiscriminately, which means he is a bad guy or a villain. I put aside my personal filter of Xing and look at the whole process from the perspective of an uninformed ordinary person. Xing did not hurt anyone in the process from his appearance to boarding the star train, and he could risk his life to save a person he just met. Because his power comes from the star core, he will be recognized as a demon. Is he crazy or am I crazy? I I don't know where I saw this sentence: The power a person uses cannot be the reason to judge whether a person is good or bad. If I use the power of the devil to save people instead of killing anyone, can I be defined as a devil? Good or bad is not determined by The type of power is determined by what he (she) has done. If you can't tell the difference, then he will be like this for the rest of his life. The only positive effect of Lei Gang's character in the text is to prevent me from fainting due to low blood pressure while reading this novel. Also, the author, you can read more paragraph reviews and read more readers' opinions. There is a lot of room for improvement. This is the first time I have said so much in a book review. I really like the subject matter of this book. The reason for only giving two stars is also that the character Lei Gang's approach really stepped on my minefield. But I am not the kind of person who deliberately gives a low score just because I hate a character. I will re-score it based on the subsequent situation.

It's a bit interesting, and quite thoughtful. Just get in line. The main plot is a bit out of line from the beginning. However, what I am more concerned about is how high the upper limit the author intends to give to your world of cultivating immortals. The Iron Beng Iron Universe is big and broad enough, so they can also understand the ordinary civilization of immortal cultivation. It is easy to write about the interesting point of the immortal civilization being hit by advanced science fiction dimensionality reduction. But in turn, the upper limit is raised to the point where the multiverse can be created and destroyed with one hand, and the core of the book is lost. The interesting point of the collapse iron dimension reduction attack is still depends on the author's ideas.

I'll give it four stars. The subject matter is very novel, and I have never thought of it. Although there are some parts that I don't like very much, it's still very good to watch. There are a lot of cuts in the dialogue, but it's pretty good. It's a bit watery, and it's impossible for the protagonist to remember every detail. Well, let's leave it like this for now. There are also people who say that the protagonist has not passed 2.0, So what will happen after 2.0? I'm curious, can anyone give me some analysis? Today I read the comments, and I think I suddenly thought that the reason why I don't like it is that some of my favorite characters are a little uncomfortable being scolded. Of course, the subject matter is the same, so the author's words do not need to be changed based on my words. Personally, there are still some highlights. Don't worry about me. Please support this book. If you don't rate it yet, I will change it to five stars.

It is not an excellent book. The novel subject matter is the only motivation for you to read it.

Chapter 6 is actually the kind that can kill people. When I first started playing Secret Realm, there weren't many dead people. Especially when the Secret Realm stream started to rise, the ones I watched were basically death-exit games. In the beginning, this Secret Realm flow was brought about by Internet cafes. It's gone, but it's not bad. It would be better if it was the immortal type. I like the cheerful type.

You can't see it without poison resistance 😄

The theme is novel, but there are a lot of caves At least for me, it's a little bit toxic

It feels so inconsistent. Is this a behind-the-scenes flow or a movie-viewing flow? Being the protagonist of the behind-the-scenes stream is boring, and being the movie-watching stream doesn't make readers feel happy.