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Give some suggestions 1. There is a small detail. The monk learned the name of the internal device of the space station without any information. A little bit of drama 2. I feel like I can let the world of cultivation know the information about the Star God properly and let them understand how powerful the mind is. This is also a cool point. 3. I feel that I can create a large-scale team battle dungeon, and set the timeline to a certain major event in the Bengtie universe, such as the locust plague in the universe, the war between the Immortal Boat and the Fengrao people, etc., And let these immortal cultivators challenge some bosses appropriately, such as the Star-Shattering King Insect. 5. Less Some of my opinions There is something in the author's writing style that is indescribably rigorous? I can't describe the feeling. If I really want to say it, I feel that the author is a more rational person. There seems to be something wrong at the moment. The combat power may be due to the author's expression. What the young demon master should not have obtained is the source of destructive power. Like the Duke of Hellfire, he destroyed for profit. It is impure, and naturally there is no "true meaning of destruction" mentioned later. Although it can be explained that the protagonist is not strong enough and can only be released in a weakened version, it is definitely not something that monks can get involved in. If the author wants to write about the true meaning of destruction, he can simply write about a madman who regards the world as a paradise. Not for fame and fortune, but simply wanting to destroy. That is the true meaning of destruction Part 2 The issue of combat power has not yet been resolved. Not to mention crushing, at least the Anti-Material Corps cannot let out a scream, because the Legion is never afraid. It might be better if the part where the tiger beats the void pawn is changed to the void pawn sacrificing his life to attack.

Okay, here's a little suggestion. I think this system has the function of playing some internal information from a secret realm for the outside world to see. Therefore, some content that cannot be revealed to the players in the original main plot can be appropriately released through those PVs similar to those in "Thousand Stars Journey" that mainly supplement the world view to help outsiders understand. However, this depends on the author himself. I just made some suggestions.

It's a bit interesting, and quite thoughtful. Just line up in front. Once the main storyline started, I followed the main storyline a little bit. But what I'm more concerned about is how high the author intends to give your world of cultivating immortals. The Bengtie universe is big and broad enough, so they can also understand the ordinary civilization of cultivating immortals. It's so easy to write about how a civilization that cultivates immortals is hit by advanced science fiction dimensionality reduction. But in turn, the upper limit has been raised to the point where the multiverse can be created and destroyed with one hand, and the core of this book has been lost. Collapse of Iron Dimensionality Reduction is a bit more fun It still depends on what the author thinks.

I'll give it four stars. The subject matter is very novel, and I have never thought of it. Although there are some parts that I don't like very much, it's still very interesting. There are a lot of cuts in the dialogue, but it's pretty good. It's a bit watery, and it's impossible for the protagonist to remember every detail. Well, let's leave it like this for now. There are also people who say that the protagonist has not passed 2.0, So what will happen after 2.0? I'm curious, can anyone give me some analysis? Today I read the comments, and I think I suddenly thought that the reason why I don't like it is that some of my favorite characters are a little uncomfortable being scolded. Of course, the subject matter is the same, so the author's words do not need to be changed based on my words. Personally, there are still some highlights. Don't worry about me. Please support this book. If you don't rate it yet, I will change it to five stars.

Chapter 6 is actually the kind that can kill people. When I first started playing Secret Realm, there weren't many dead people. Especially when the Secret Realm stream started to rise, the ones I watched were basically death-exit games. In the beginning, this Secret Realm flow was brought about by Internet cafes. It's gone, but it's not bad. It would be better if it was the immortal type. I like the cheerful type.

The theme is novel, but there are a lot of caves At least for me, it's a little bit toxic

It looks good, but there are few updates. If you are just starting out, it is best to update more. A bunch of settings are not working. The magic way directly eats the energy of the anti-matter army. The anti-matter army will be afraid and hesitant. The result of just exploring the intelligence is consistent with intelligence. If it weren't for this subject, no one would watch it.

It's quite novel, but there are some places where the left and right brains are fighting each other. For example, when the world gate is closed, it is said that there will be three days of evolution. Then later on, everyone seems to have forgotten about the three days of evolution, and they only remember that the world gate is about to close. The left and right brains are really fighting each other [face covering] Also, the situation has been maintained for such a long time. If external forces could really destroy this sect, they would have destroyed it long ago. They just closed it in a secret realm and launched a crazy counterattack. Genius.

I finished reading it in one sitting. So far, it can be called a masterpiece. I just wish there were more details. The Glimpses of the Destruction Star God is not well written and is a bit inexplicable. The game plot can be advanced slowly, with more descriptions of the reactions and discussions of the characters in the fantasy world after the backstory of Bengtie's character is revealed. Some of the better ones have more sub-plots, are good-looking, and I love watching them. The description of the Blood Evil Sect's acquisition of the destructive power of the Anti-Material Legion could be lengthened a bit, gradually and gradually. It's too fast and feels like the Destruction Star God is a bit stretched. Finally, we must maintain the strong character of the characters in the world of iron collapse, don't pull, don't pull, don't pull! Say important things three times.

It's okay, but the setting is a little bit toxic. You can compare it with the settings of other similar works. For example, if you recruit characters from the Iron Breaking World to come and work, you can open the secret realm for a limited time in a day and then get off work. If you encounter a newbie with monster strength, you can just add a balance. If you are not afraid of death, you can also cancel the balance manually. Then add more interactive props, such as the Black Tower manuscript, Miaomiao props, some texts, etc.

No, why can they get snacks when they break into Beng Tie's secret realm? You should only be able to get things from the Bentie World, such as technology or destiny.

The author left out a lot of details, but overall it's okay.

Beautiful and well written so far

A new theme that I have never seen before, very interesting

I think it's pretty good

Not bad, keep up the good work

Wonderful, so wonderful

This is totally not enough! ! ! !

When was Lei Gang sanctioned?

One word is good-looking, two words are still good-looking

Yes, it has potential, I hope it doesn't collapse later.

The subject matter is novel. If you haven't seen it before, please give it a five-star support and see what happens next.

Overall it's pretty good, don't let it suck.

The subject matter is quite novel, I like it Apart from the novel subject matter, there is nothing special about it

Keep up the good work, author

Good-looking. Good-looking. Very sad

Good idea, looking forward to it

It actually works if you throw away your brain.

When will Ruan Mei and Screw Gumu appear?

Very interesting, the locking and the characters are very interesting Sorry, I made a typo. It's the setting.