[Atonement➕High IQ does not reduce intelligence➕make up for the regrets of the original work]
My name is Uzumaki, a Konoha ninja who was "brainwashed" by the Third Hokage himself and responsible for taking care of Uzumaki Naruto, the "son of the demon fox".
I would cook for him clumsily, I would shield him from all the garbage when he was bullied, and I would take him to eat the most delicious Ichiraku Ramen.
I am the only light in Naruto's life, the most reliable "wild" brother.
…
The above is what I want the world to see.
And my true identity is Uchiha Obito, a revenant who should have died, a sin-bearing redeemer.
On the surface, I was playing with Naruto in Konoha, but secretly, the subordinates I conquered, the Akatsuki Organization, were fighting for me on the other side of the world.
I deceived everyone just to achieve a crazy goal: I wanted to unify the entire ninja world and recreate a perfect world that would allow her to return with peace of mind.
They call me the devil, or the savior.
But everything I did was just to... Atone for my sins.
On the battlefield, everyone in the ninja world was no match for the mysterious masked man. Just when everyone was in despair, Naruto, a perfect Jinchuuriki, turned the tide, fought back and forth with the mysterious masked man, and shattered the mysterious masked man's mask with one blow.
But the true appearance under the mask made him tremble.
"Brother Ye... Brother!"
Obito looked at him calmly and pointed to his forehead with his finger.
"I'm sorry... Naruto... This is the last time."
Reader comments
Very average, there are no surprises so far and it is very interesting, but I feel that the article lacks a hint of fireworks. It can only be said that the rebirth of war criminals is too authoritative, but it is better not to make Brother Zhen too tired. He is already atonement. He will be very tired if he has to bear everything on himself, right? I suggest you write about the daily life of the three of them that warms each other. It makes people feel warm when they see their bodies. Come on, author! 😌
The front is pretty good, look at the back.
It's pretty good. Thank you Obito and Naruto for their close relationship. I think it was a lot of fun in the later stages.
Very average, there are no surprises so far and it is very interesting, but I feel that the article lacks a hint of fireworks. It can only be said that the rebirth of war criminals is too authoritative, but it is better not to make Brother Zhen too tired. He is already atonement. He will be very tired if he has to bear everything on himself, right? I suggest you write about the daily life of the three of them that warms each other. It makes people feel warm when they see their bodies. Come on, author! 😌
The front is pretty good, look at the back.
It's pretty good. Thank you Obito and Naruto for their close relationship. I think it was a lot of fun in the later stages.