The young man who saved the little girl came to the world of Heicao by accident, and he will live a wonderful life in this life.
"Is this the power of the Stand? Things are getting interesting."
After joining the Knights, his life also took on great meaning.
"Dior, we are competitors."
"That kid Dio is really awesome."
"Dior, I like you."
"How can a mere human have such power?"
In this world, the enemies he has to face are never limited to the original enemies of the Black Grass World. There is never a shortage of enemies in the JOJO world.
"I will carry out my path and stick to it unswervingly."
This is the story of a man who was empty in his previous life and gained everything in the new world.
Reader comments
Highlights
- The fusion of themes is innovative: combining JOJO's "Stand" with the "Magic Knights" world view of "Black Clover", retaining the passionate bond of the original work, while adding the strategic nature of Stand fighting, fans are satisfied with the interaction.
- Non-invincible flow growth line: clearly marked "not invincible flow", the stand-in ability needs to adapt to the magic world environment (such as spicy red pepper lack of power), emphasizes growth and strategy, in line with some readers' expectations for "reasonable combat power".
- Restore the atmosphere of the original work: The plot revolves around the characters of the original work, involving classic plots such as the border maze and the devil in the Kingdom of Spades. It has a "five-leaf clover flavor" and is suitable for readers who want to read parallel stories based on the original work.
Insufficient
- The writing style and rhythm need to be optimized: readers reported that the proportion of dialogue is high, the scene description is dry, the rhythm is loose, there is a sense of "running account", the characters are flat, and the details are not polished enough.
- The setting presentation needs to be improved: key settings such as the integration logic of avatar and magic, "whether the avatar can be seen by others" are still being adjusted, and some plot connections are not natural enough.
Suitable for the crowd
- Fans of two-dimensional fandom who also like "JoJo's Bizarre Adventure" and "Black Clover";
- Readers who prefer time travel + passionate growth and can accept serialized works;
- Readers of Shuangwen who have requirements for "non-invincible flow" and "reasonable combat power".
Comprehensive suggestions
As a fan and fan, the subject matter is sincere and the core setting is bright, but the writing style and rhythm are obvious shortcomings. If you can accept the immaturity of the early stage and want to see the collision of avatars and magic in the original world, you can try to read it; if you are looking for mature narrative and delicate description, it is recommended to wait and see the quality improvement in subsequent chapters.
The author is purely motivated by love. Two unpopular works combined [laughing and crying] are quite beautiful, with a five-leaf clover flavor [like]
It's okay so far. What kind of heroines are there currently?
It sounds fine so far, so keep writing it, it will definitely be on the recommendation list.
Hey, it looks good, I love watching it⌓‿⌓
The author must not stop updating [laughs]
Come on, come on, come on, it looks great!
The real author, generating electricity for love
It's a pretty good book, but why doesn't anyone review it?
The fusion looks pretty good, but the downside is that no one sees it.
Ah, so far it doesn't seem to have too many problems, it's still very interesting. I'm looking forward to the parallel universe war in the future.
Highlights - The fusion of themes is innovative: combining JOJO's "Stand" with the "Magic Knights" world view of "Black Clover", retaining the passionate bond of the original work, while adding the strategic nature of Stand fighting, fans are satisfied with the interaction. - Non-invincible flow growth line: clearly marked "not invincible flow", the stand-in ability needs to adapt to the magic world environment (such as spicy red pepper lack of power), emphasizes growth and strategy, in line with some readers' expectations for "reasonable combat power". - Restore the atmosphere of the original work: The plot revolves around the characters of the original work, involving classic plots such as the border maze and the devil in the Kingdom of Spades. It has a "five-leaf clover flavor" and is suitable for readers who want to read parallel stories based on the original work. Insufficient - The writing style and rhythm need to be optimized: readers reported that the proportion of dialogue is high, the scene description is dry, the rhythm is loose, there is a sense of "running account", the characters are flat, and the details are not polished enough. - The setting presentation needs to be improved: key settings such as the integration logic of avatar and magic, "whether the avatar can be seen by others" are still being adjusted, and some plot connections are not natural enough. Suitable for the crowd - Fans of two-dimensional fandom who also like "JoJo's Bizarre Adventure" and "Black Clover"; - Readers who prefer time travel + passionate growth and can accept serialized works; - Readers of Shuangwen who have requirements for "non-invincible flow" and "reasonable combat power". Comprehensive suggestions As a fan and fan, the subject matter is sincere and the core setting is bright, but the writing style and rhythm are obvious shortcomings. If you can accept the immaturity of the early stage and want to see the collision of avatars and magic in the original world, you can try to read it; if you are looking for mature narrative and delicate description, it is recommended to wait and see the quality improvement in subsequent chapters.
The author is purely motivated by love. Two unpopular works combined [laughing and crying] are quite beautiful, with a five-leaf clover flavor [like]
It's okay so far. What kind of heroines are there currently?
It sounds fine so far, so keep writing it, it will definitely be on the recommendation list.
Hey, it looks good, I love watching it⌓‿⌓
The author must not stop updating [laughs]
Come on, come on, come on, it looks great!
The real author, generating electricity for love
It's a pretty good book, but why doesn't anyone review it?
The fusion looks pretty good, but the downside is that no one sees it.
Ah, so far it doesn't seem to have too many problems, it's still very interesting. I'm looking forward to the parallel universe war in the future.