Classroom of the Elite: Ichinose’s Guardian Knight

It's a very novel theme, which makes up for Ichinose's absurd ending. Society shouldn't be like this. Innocence and kindness are not the factors that lead to defeat. A united group loses to conspiracy and conspiracy. This is intolerable no matter what.

This book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu's attempt to show off Cicada and Sun Wukong Q fought for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was really too Stronger, if it weren't for Noshou's outer ring + Noxus break Headquarters, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you. Other than that, I compare I rather appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain." "Young man, you are so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", showing Zhuge Liang's indignation towards the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, this book The plot of the book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, and the fighting scenes It's like being there, the characters are well described [Chigua]

This book is quite good. There are no poisonous points [eating melons]. It should be regarded as a very good practical teaching fan novel. However, maybe the author's writing habits make a paragraph a bit long, so it is a bit tiring to read. However, it is also very comfortable to listen to the book (because the introduction is very detailed, even newcomers who have not read the original series can also get into it) I read all the comments, and I think I hope everyone will read more chapters. After all, he is a new author, and he is getting better and better [full]. Then some people think that the author is actually very detailed. This feeling may be due to the different perspective of the person (no longer taking Brother Lu as the author) First point of view) [Eating melon] Of course, in order to advance the plot, I still hope that the author will write more about Brother Lu (except for sweet articles, other things that can be written are more group portraits) [Thinking] However, I still have to mention the problematic areas. After all, it is to make the book better [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]

This is a very high-quality practical fanfic. After a long period of updating, it does not have too many negative points. It may be due to the author's inexperience. Some paragraphs are too long, resulting in a not very good reading experience. It should be better to adjust the number of words in each paragraph after subsequent revisions. Also, as a protagonist, the sense of presence is really low. Some of the pages describing the layout of the protagonist are too abrupt and have no foreshadowing at all. The author wants to describe the protagonist as a native who is very powerful, but this strength has no source and is only reflected sideways through scars and darkness. To be honest, it is quite uncomfortable to read. It has been more than 100 chapters. The "birth point" must be exposed at least a little. If the follow-up writing method is always this way, it will take at least more than 2 million words to write it clearly and smoothly. Most readers of Tomato only read the first three or 50 chapters. Some may read about a hundred chapters, and some may leave after looking at the word count in the introduction. More than 140 chapters have passed without touching the theme. The redemption written by Ichinose in the introduction has not yet been reflected. Either there are many interactions in the early stage to pave the way for the emotional line and the heroine will be directly selected, or there will be no heroine at all. The redemption is not only love, friendship is also a good choice, but that degree is difficult to grasp. There are too few fans of Practical Education. Maybe it's because the original work is not popular after all. Other Fans of Practical Education are either unfinished or discontinued, or were shabby from the beginning. In comparison, this book is already very good. I hope the author will continue to persevere. [Salute] Come on [Salute] In retrospect, compared to previous issues such as lengthy paragraphs, the author has made significant progress during this period. As a fanfic, its essence must be a refreshing novel, so that readers can get a sense of satisfaction, and then it will attract readers. This feeling can be reflected in many aspects, and it can be used freely. It does not need to be obvious, but it must be there. Although the technique of suppressing first and then promoting is useful, it cannot appear many times in fan works. Even if it happens once or twice, it will seriously affect the look and feel. Talking about the protagonist, Shinomiya's own character is a big problem. No matter how dark the experience is, it shouldn't be like this. The real education is a campus drama. As an original character, Shinomiya just wrote a dark experience. Let me put it bluntly, how dark can a teenager be in a campus drama? Isn't it extremely poisonous to go to school in such darkness? It's only reasonable to add other settings and label it as a manga from the beginning. Besides, Ichinose, she is Shinomiya's girlfriend after all. If she is treated like this, she must at least fight back and retaliate. Doesn't she have a dark experience? Isn't there a knife wound or something? The angel in her heart is treated like this and is done with a few words of condemnation? It's completely inconsistent with the character design. The cowherd protects the tool and the battle on the rooftop. This contrast is too confusing. Later, Sakayanagi added a drama setting, which is really unnecessary. Without Sakayanagi's chairman Yusaki Sakayanagi, the civil war fantasy god would have become a roadside thing. Then there is the plot progress. It is good to write it in detail, but it is not good to drag it out. Moreover, the first grade is almost over now. Judging from the character of the protagonist, none of the violent incidents directly related to the protagonist have happened so far. This is very unreasonable. Whether it is active participation or forced, there must be at least one or two. Class B is a class for well-behaved babies, but you wrote that the protagonist is not, he is hiding, no He has amnesia, not to mention killing, but his kung fu is still there. When he joined Class B, he really regarded himself as a sheep. It was only a short time ago that he forgot where he came from. It was very annoying when others used off-board moves to slap him. Kanzaki knew how to show his fist when Class B was angry (although he didn't show it) 😔😔 In summary, the sentences are smooth, the logic is more rigorous, and there are fewer typos. It is rare for tomatoes. It is still top-notch among similar works and is worth watching. The above is just my personal opinion and is not meant to be disparaging. I hope the author will get better and better [laughs]

It's so well written. This is the best practical fanfic I've ever seen. It's also written to the second grade (this has surpassed many fanfics, which either stopped early or omitted most of the content). The first grade chapter is not only detailed, but the story of Hira Yukata Airu is also very good. I hope the author can keep writing and add more drama to the passerby characters.

At first, I was attracted by the single heroine of Hanbo, but after continuing to watch, I found that it was unexpectedly good. The fourth house has gone from being indifferent at the beginning to now integrating into the group, being able to show a subtle smile, and being able to listen to one's own inner voice. In my opinion, this is a gratifying change [laughs]. When I saw Zhang Fanbo finally opening up, I always had an indescribable feeling. I was both happy for her and relieved [full] for her. I felt so distressed when I read the part where the rumors were spread. It would be better if this incident could go away quickly (everyone involved in this incident should be punched [crazy] [hard punched]). I hope this book will get better and better in the future. The emotional line must be sweet and sweet [almost crying] (fast forward to Shinomiya and said to Sakayanagi, "Fatal, is your so-called fatal attack just this? Arisu Sakayanagi-san? Right, next I will completely defeat you in the aspect you are most proud of." Ps: Sigong's words are quoted from the comment of "Xia Xiao Z123" in the comment area)

It's a rare fanfic that can actually be read. The characterization of many supporting characters is very good. Too many fanfics rely purely on stereotypes. This is a rare and valuable book. I feel that 7:00 is a little low. A score of 9.0 Or above is no problem. No, buddy, don't you feel that the protagonist's later scenes are a bit too little? Brother Lu has more scenes than him

How can I put it, this is the pinnacle of practical teaching fan fiction. In terms of the plot concept and character arcs, it is really awesome, even better than the original work. The growth lines of the characters of Hirata, Ryuen, Hibami, Lu Ge, etc. And the male protagonist Shimiya Ketsuki are great. There is no single character belittlement, and you have not lowered Lu Ge's strength in order to highlight the male protagonist. The only shortcoming is that the first few dozen pictures are not so attractive, but this book is inherently slow-burning, and the emotional lines of this book are also very delicate. Come on Slime [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's a rare piece of fine grain. Except for the obviously poor writing skills related to the emotional line, there are no poisonous points. The development and growth curve of the characters is very comfortable to watch. The picky thing is that the character design was changed directly in the middle instead of foreshadowing through events, but overall it is very good. I think it has an 8.9 Score.

I finished reading it in one sitting. It was very enjoyable and I loved it. But the protagonist's score of 9.80 In the 100 meters is really outrageous. The first in Asia is only 9.83 [Face covering]. I also feel that the interaction between Fei Bo and the protagonist is a bit lacking. Can the author write more [adoration] [adoration]? Five-star praise is given.