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It's a very novel theme, which makes up for Ichinose's absurd ending. Society shouldn't be like this. Innocence and kindness are not the factors that lead to defeat. A united group loses to conspiracy and conspiracy. This is intolerable no matter what.

This book is quite good. There are no poisonous points [eating melons]. It should be regarded as a very good practical teaching fan novel. However, maybe the author's writing habits make a paragraph a bit long, so it is a bit tiring to read. However, it is also very comfortable to listen to the book (because the introduction is very detailed, even newcomers who have not read the original series can also get into it) I read all the comments, and I think I hope everyone will read more chapters. After all, he is a new author, and he is getting better and better [full]. Then some people think that the author is actually very detailed. This feeling may be due to the different perspective of the person (no longer taking Brother Lu as the author) First point of view) [Eating melon] Of course, in order to advance the plot, I still hope that the author will write more about Brother Lu (except for sweet articles, other things that can be written are more group portraits) [Thinking] However, I still have to mention the problematic areas. After all, it is to make the book better [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]

This is a very high-quality practical fanfic. After a long period of updating, it does not have too many negative points. It may be due to the author's inexperience. Some paragraphs are too long, resulting in a not very good reading experience. It should be better to adjust the number of words in each paragraph after subsequent revisions. Also, as a protagonist, the sense of presence is really low. Some of the pages describing the layout of the protagonist are too abrupt and have no foreshadowing at all. The author wants to describe the protagonist as a native who is very powerful, but this strength has no source and is only reflected sideways through scars and darkness. To be honest, it is quite uncomfortable to read. It has been more than 100 chapters. The "birth point" must be exposed at least a little. If the follow-up writing method is always this way, it will take at least more than 2 million words to write it clearly and smoothly. Most readers of Tomato only read the first three or 50 chapters. Some may read about a hundred chapters, and some may leave after looking at the word count in the introduction. More than 140 chapters have passed without touching the theme. The redemption written by Ichinose in the introduction has not yet been reflected. Either there are many interactions in the early stage to pave the way for the emotional line and the heroine will be directly selected, or there will be no heroine at all. The redemption is not only love, friendship is also a good choice, but that degree is difficult to grasp. There are too few fans of Practical Education. Maybe it's because the original work is not popular after all. Other Fans of Practical Education are either unfinished or discontinued, or were shabby from the beginning. In comparison, this book is already very good. I hope the author will continue to persevere. [Salute] Come on [Salute] In retrospect, compared to previous issues such as lengthy paragraphs, the author has made significant progress during this period. As a fanfic, its essence must be a refreshing novel, so that readers can get a sense of satisfaction, and then it will attract readers. This feeling can be reflected in many aspects, and it can be used freely. It does not need to be obvious, but it must be there. Although the technique of suppressing first and then promoting is useful, it cannot appear many times in fan works. Even if it happens once or twice, it will seriously affect the look and feel. Talking about the protagonist, Shinomiya's own character is a big problem. No matter how dark the experience is, it shouldn't be like this. The real education is a campus drama. As an original character, Shinomiya just wrote a dark experience. Let me put it bluntly, how dark can a teenager be in a campus drama? Isn't it extremely poisonous to go to school in such darkness? It's only reasonable to add other settings and label it as a manga from the beginning. Besides, Ichinose, she is Shinomiya's girlfriend after all. If she is treated like this, she must at least fight back and retaliate. Doesn't she have a dark experience? Isn't there a knife wound or something? The angel in her heart is treated like this and is done with a few words of condemnation? It's completely inconsistent with the character design. The cowherd protects the tool and the battle on the rooftop. This contrast is too confusing. Later, Sakayanagi added a drama setting, which is really unnecessary. Without Sakayanagi's chairman Yusaki Sakayanagi, the civil war fantasy god would have become a roadside thing. Then there is the plot progress. It is good to write it in detail, but it is not good to drag it out. Moreover, the first grade is almost over now. Judging from the character of the protagonist, none of the violent incidents directly related to the protagonist have happened so far. This is very unreasonable. Whether it is active participation or forced, there must be at least one or two. Class B is a class for well-behaved babies, but you wrote that the protagonist is not, he is hiding, no He has amnesia, not to mention killing, but his kung fu is still there. When he joined Class B, he really regarded himself as a sheep. It was only a short time ago that he forgot where he came from. It was very annoying when others used off-board moves to slap him. Kanzaki knew how to show his fist when Class B was angry (although he didn't show it) 😔😔 In summary, the sentences are smooth, the logic is more rigorous, and there are fewer typos. It is rare for tomatoes. It is still top-notch among similar works and is worth watching. The above is just my personal opinion and is not meant to be disparaging. I hope the author will get better and better [laughs]

This book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu's attempt to show off Cicada and Sun Wukong Q fought for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was really too Stronger, if it weren't for Noshou's outer ring + Noxus break Headquarters, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you. Other than that, I compare I rather appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain." "Young man, you are so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", showing Zhuge Liang's indignation towards the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, this book The plot of the book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, and the fighting scenes It's like being there, the characters are well described [Chigua]

It's so well written. This is the best practical fanfic I've ever seen. It's also written to the second grade (this has surpassed many fanfics, which either stopped early or omitted most of the content). The first grade chapter is not only detailed, but the story of Hira Yukata Airu is also very good. I hope the author can keep writing and add more drama to the passerby characters.

At first, I was attracted by the single heroine of Hanbo, but after continuing to watch, I found that it was unexpectedly good. The fourth house has gone from being indifferent at the beginning to now integrating into the group, being able to show a subtle smile, and being able to listen to one's own inner voice. In my opinion, this is a gratifying change [laughs]. When I saw Zhang Fanbo finally opening up, I always had an indescribable feeling. I was both happy for her and relieved [full] for her. I felt so distressed when I read the part where the rumors were spread. It would be better if this incident could go away quickly (everyone involved in this incident should be punched [crazy] [hard punched]). I hope this book will get better and better in the future. The emotional line must be sweet and sweet [almost crying] (fast forward to Shinomiya and said to Sakayanagi, "Fatal, is your so-called fatal attack just this? Arisu Sakayanagi-san? Right, next I will completely defeat you in the aspect you are most proud of." Ps: Sigong's words are quoted from the comment of "Xia Xiao Z123" in the comment area)

It's rare to see a single female protagonist, and there's no big bad points. It's good to watch and I hope it can be completed [I'm about to cry]

It's a rare fanfic that can actually be read. The characterization of many supporting characters is very good. Too many fanfics rely purely on stereotypes. This is a rare and valuable book. I feel that 7:00 is a little low. A score of 9.0 Or above is no problem. No, buddy, don't you feel that the protagonist's later scenes are a bit too little? Brother Lu has more scenes than him

I finished reading it in one sitting. It was very enjoyable and I loved it. But the protagonist's score of 9.80 In the 100 meters is really outrageous. The first in Asia is only 9.83 [Face covering]. I also feel that the interaction between Fei Bo and the protagonist is a bit lacking. Can the author write more [adoration] [adoration]? Five-star praise is given.

A very good novel, I think it can be said to be one of the top fan fictions. In this book, there is no blind crushing of the protagonist, but it allows me to see many character arcs of other characters that may not be shown in the original book. Here I saw the growth of Horikita, Sudou and even Hirata. In this book, the supporting characters such as Ryuuen and Katsuragi all showed their personality charm, and the heroine Ichinose was also okay. The protagonist is a very unique and warm person. His emotions suddenly don't fluctuate much, but his inner kindness and understanding of people and the system are really upright. His appearance is bright and beautiful, which is something I admire very much. If you like practical teaching, you really must read this book. Ps: The single female protagonist is not a prostitute

I caught up on the update, and it was my first time reading a Shijiao fan novel. I unexpectedly stumbled across this book. Before the special test at the beginning, I was tired of reading it, and it was not exciting or exciting. When it comes to survival in the wild, the author's ideas and designs are good, and they will get better and better in the future. There are also some minor flaws during the period, but they are not major problems. The author is relatively good at handling the theme of this book. As a fan novel, it doesn't have a particularly otaku flavor, it's just a middle-class novel, and it's really rare that it doesn't play with those two-dimensional bad jokes. The evaluation is Liangcao+. If you like to read fan fiction, you can check it out.

It is really well written. I read the latest chapter in one go. I feel that the writing is very consistent with the character, no OOC, and it is very suitable for me. I hope the author will continue to work hard (also when will the male protagonist and Ichinose get together)

Commander's Tower, the final plot of chess. And all the character creations have always been very good, and they are very impressive. Waiting for the fight between the protagonist and the Road King, such as... Kendo [laughing]

It's a rare piece of fine grain. Except for the obviously poor writing skills related to the emotional line, there are no poisonous points. The development and growth curve of the characters is very comfortable to watch. The picky thing is that the character design was changed directly in the middle instead of foreshadowing through events, but overall it is very good. I think it has an 8.9 Score.

There are very few single-female protagonist practical teaching books, which are readable. Compared with other books, the minor shortcomings in it are acceptable. Little Angel is still too authoritative. It's really sad to see the little angel in the original work completely transformed into a little devil because of the road. I really like the appearance of the little angel in the original work. This article can achieve a better ending for me for the time being.

Beautiful writing, beautiful content. I haven't seen a fan like this for a long time. Coincidentally, I had some knowledge of this light novel before, so I was even more impressed by it. I'm not very good at expressing it, but I sincerely hope that the author can let us enjoy this story to the end. (PS. More extras would be better [sending heart] [sending heart]~~) [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This novel is really good, a practical masterpiece. I have only read a little bit of the anime. I didn't expect Ichinose to be so miserable later on, so I don't dare to read other fanfictions now. However, it is true that none of the other fanfictions can compare to this one. This one only has too many words from the author in the early stage, but the later ones are much better. The plot is smoothly connected and not stiff at all. I have not read the original novel, but I feel it is more interesting than the anime.

The author has lost his talent. I have read 20 chapters so far. I am just a person who has been following practical teaching novels for four years. I have followed the latest volume from volume 16 to the latest volume, which seems to be 25 or 26. I forgot. Before reading this novel, I had no hope. The name is also very simple. After all, foreign persimmons know everything. But after reading the first three chapters, this book has attracted me. The character setting, plot, and even the entrance test. Author The plots are all made up after rigorous deliberation, and there is no OOC. The characters are very consistent. The plot is as exciting as the original work. The writing style and plot structure feel that it can be a light novel similar to a practical education. However, the author chose to write about fandom for love and wrote more than 2 million words. I really admire it. I will follow it slowly. I hope this book can bring me more surprises and make up for the regrets of the original work.

Finally, I can see a single female protagonist with fat boobs. Overall, it's good, but the pace is a bit slow. I hope the author can work hard!

It's good to read and there are too few good readers who can actually teach it. This one is really good. But the more I watch, the more I want to see a possibility, which is Fallen Angel and her Ghost Rider. Wouldn't this be quite interesting (it seems to provide extra material)

Great fanfic Make a wish! I hope Sakura Airi has a happy ending I hope Shinomiya gives Nayunya a hard blow. Hope Lu Hui 99 I hope anyone who bullies Fei Bo will be severely stomped on by Shinomiya! ! !

I feel that Class A has been weakened too much, although it may be necessary for the plot... It has a lot more emotional descriptions than the original work. Teaching from the perspective of Class B is not so cold and has a lot of different flavors.

So far, the plot is okay. It is understandable that there are some shrinkage and changes in some places. After all, if it is too similar to the original work, it will be criticized by Tomato Nori, but it does not rule out that it will not be Nori. This is the fourth Ichinose single-female protagonist I have read. The previous three have been killed. I just hope that this book will live longer and not be inexplicably in charge of the dark room, and then be inexplicably removed from the shelves.

It's still very interesting to watch. There are no problems with the basic plot. It's relatively smooth. The relationship line starts in Chapter 150 and comes together in Chapter 170. After that, there is a sweet romance. You need some patience. Sometimes some characters will suddenly become mentally retarded and leave an excuse for class fights. The protagonist is very awesome and reliable. It's worth watching.

Although the word count in the first 40-odd chapters is too dense, it is a bit tiring to read, but the transformation of each character in the subsequent chapters is not abrupt at all, and each character goes from inner struggle to change. In short, this book can be regarded as one of the few excellent fans. The subject matter is very novel and beautiful.

Although I don't know why this book has such a low rating, it is a very good book and there is no doubt about it. From the protagonist's enrollment to communication with people, we all grow and progress together.

The overall plot and character design are great, but it feels a bit slow and the wording used to describe the characters is a bit too deliberate. Overall, it's still a very good fan, please support the author [please update]

This book is good to read. I have read Chapter 40 and there is nothing too toxic at the moment. If I give it less than one star, I would be afraid that the author would be too proud. I don't know what the main character's hands-on ability is like. It feels like a low-end version of Godza Izuru [Thinking]

Although the beginning looks a bit like AI, I read the book review and said that the writing at the end is okay, so I kept reading. After about 100 chapters, I can see obvious progress. The group portraits of this book are well written, and the suspense is also well laid out. The battle against Sakayanagi around chapter 150 is also a very interesting climax. Moreover, each special exam will introduce the situation of each class in great detail. The article on class voting later is also very exciting. I will give it a five-star praise.

I have already started reading 2 episodes. At first I just watched it for Honami Ichinose, but later I found that the plot written by the author is also very exciting. The daily life and the plot are perfectly integrated, and it is not boring at all after watching the same subject for a long time.