The focus is unsystematic.
Li Yuan was hit by a driver with a Sharingan on the way to surf the Internet with his roommate. He traveled to the world of Ye Luoli's fairy dream and became a classmate of the protagonist group. After that, he awakened the Sharingan and started a life of pursuing power.
It's your first time writing a novel. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.
The Sharingan may be different from the Hokage's. In this way, level promotion can be achieved by absorbing mental power. It is not as confusing as the original version.
Reader comments
You can write. It's the protagonist's character. Not great.
You can write. It's the protagonist's character. Not great.
Big cheers for the author