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The original intention of writing this novel was to materialize the wild imaginations in my mind, and I also hope to share my thoughts and insights on various things with everyone through words. Since this is my first time trying to write an online novel, I don't have any guidance from my seniors, so I can only "cross the river by feeling the stones" and figure out the rhythm of creation step by step. I know that this work may not meet everyone's expectations, and may even not be in line with the preferences of some readers, but I will always maintain my enthusiasm and continue to tell the story. If readers have any new worlds or unique settings you want to see, you can leave a message in the comment area. I will combine the plot development and try my best to incorporate the content you are looking forward to! I sincerely ask for your support. This is the most precious encouragement for me, a new author!

The plot is not bad. But there aren't many worlds that interest me. As a type of time travel, the biggest advantage is that readers can choose the passages they like and skip the ones they don't like without any impact. However, the author of this novel takes up a lot of space in the realistic paragraphs, and the space occupied by different world travels is not consistent, some are long and some are short. Especially the world of special forces, which takes up almost half of the page. Unfortunately, I am not interested in that world. This resulted in very few passages that I read, which was quite helpless.

I'm an old bookworm. This time travel novel is more immersive than what I've read before. I hope it doesn't end badly.

What you bring out from the super-out-of-control world should be gold, not US dollars. How can the currency be universal if the world and time are different?

I guess the author must be a veteran. Otherwise, I would never be able to describe what it's like to be a soldier. The TV series is a bit too long, and the rating is a bit low because of the stretch. Write down the feeling. Write two less TV series. Little movie time. OK, finished writing. The rating would be better if it were better. Just listen to the book and enjoy it. After a long time, you will have no patience to listen. Well, forget it, let's not talk about it. Come on and write it down. Hope it won't be interrupted🌹🌹🌹

First of all, the plot is well written, but there are too many descriptive words, and the overall story is still enjoyable.

Not bad. More like this.

Looks good, you can take a look

Okay. I have been keeping the book for a long time.

Not bad, good, promising

You can see it in Tomato

Not bad, you can take a look

Encourage sharing, it is the first time for a newbie to write.

The snapshot has become reality. Come on. Highly recommended.

A very good novel [like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

Ok ok ok

That the first novel has such skill shows that the author was also a bookworm before.

The one star is missing because I simply feel that I am a special soldier is too long and I am not interested in reading it.

Just write about the part about rescuing people in Wenchuan, I will give you five stars

After reading novels for many years, there are fewer and fewer books to read. This one can still make me think about it. The ratings are really low. Come on, author, come on.

It's quite novel, the thinking is quite mature, and the emotions are also right. I'm pretty good.

Not bad and worth recommending

Brother, don't stop updating. I haven't updated for so long. Is it because Romance has become popular and has been swept away? ? ? ?

Very good very good very good very good

Overall good! Especially the part about arranging family members! Warmth

Author: Get stronger slowly, don't suddenly go to martial arts and live in a fantasy world Don't make the system intelligent, as this will make the reader feel like the protagonist is a puppet controlled by the system.

Practice power. This ability is a panacea. You can use it from the beginning. It is still very powerful if you specialize.