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Is There Any Article About Two Men, Cultivating Immortals, and Starting from Spiritual Root Testing?
I want to see content similar to "Accidentally Catching Long Aotian's Bamboo Horse into a Crooked Mouth".
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I'm Running Out of Books. I'm Looking for Two Male Protagonists and a Complete Series.
Both BE and HE are fine, don't be too cliche and the plot is too pretentious. I hope the writing is better. I personally like the book written by Sui Wang (Jinwu Zangjiao 99)
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This book officially ends here, thank you readers for your companionship. I have been thinking about this story for the past three months. I want to show too much, but the plot seems to be too delayed. This concludes, thank you Pei Yan and Shen Qingheng for their company. This is a period of their growth, encountering love while growing up. The villain has not been cleansed, he is imprisoned in the void space forever... As for other story lines, they are also written in a more sadistic way, and it is difficult for a young man's unstable love to reach the end. In fact, after writing, I gave Qin Shujun the most outstanding female character. Although she is a mortal, she has a strong heart and dares to love and hate. She can distinguish right from wrong and is not obsessed with one person's love. Su Mingyuan put aside his hesitation in relationships, and he was considered a very positive character. After all, no one is perfect. Pei Yan's love is not enough to redeem a person, but when he met Shen Qingheng, he was given a little sweetness and a little honesty. No matter who Shen Qingheng is, he is always a brilliant person. He has never turned dark, he just hurt himself. So for such a protagonist, I must pull him out of the abyss. Pei Yan's love is actually very shallow, but some people are willing to take over his shallow love. The two hearts are happy and grow old together. Congratulations to Shen Qingheng and Pei Yan on their wedding. That's it! [Almost crying] [Almost crying]
Nice. When I first started reading the first few chapters, I felt that the description was a bit draggy. But the further you look at it, the more vividly the characters appear. Everyone in the story seems to have their own consequences. Just like that Lin Jingyu. In the early stage, he was considered a minor villain who interspersed the story line. I thought he would be cannon fodder early on. Unexpectedly, after repeated conflicts with the protagonist, he gave up his dignity and life for his beloved, took responsibility for the sect, and finally saved the protagonist's life. His character is being polished and shaped step by step. From the initial arrogance, insidiousness and selfishness, regardless of the life and death of his fellow students; to the middle period when he still thinks highly of himself and stands out; to the later period when he is brave enough to take on responsibilities, is calm and reliable, it all follows the development of the plot step by step. The characters in this plot are all flawed. But it's also because of their flaws that make them more vivid. I really like Lin Jingyu's portrayal. It feels like it's not easy for him to grow into a person with three upright views. There is also the emotional line between him and Senior Sister Xu. Even when he died, I felt that he was deeply in love with Senior Sister Xu. Senior Sister Xu must also feel guilty because he saved her life back then. But I'm wondering why Senior Sister Xu didn't marry him but married the fourth male? Moreover, I didn't expect Lin Jingyu to be willing to let go. This makes me think his characterization is better.
It's very real. There is no system or cheats. It's just a person's ordinary experience of going through everything. He doesn't actively and deliberately change many things. It's all normal and ordinary things. It's not ridiculous. It's very attractive to read.
Da Da, a slow-burning author, also writes in a step-by-step manner at the beginning. Two men cultivating immortals has always been my favorite. The more I watch the plot, the more I like it🥰 Da Da, please work hard to update [Top post][Top post][Please update] I read the article very quickly and I won't be full soon [crying]
It's super good-looking. Although I haven't finished it yet, the first few chapters are already very good. The male protagonist is a bit miserable. It's purely a grassroots counterattack... I haven't counterattacked yet, and I'm still working hard... Hahaha! Anyone who has read novels knows that those narrated in the first person are usually not too bad! The front part is still very good, but sometimes some of the story lines and characters are a bit inexplicable, and the senior brother's feelings for the man in the book are also inexplicably hot, which is very strange! In fact, it's good not to have to write emotional scenes.
The author's writing style is very good. Come on, the author is great. The only shortcoming is that sometimes the names and dates are a bit confusing, which makes people want to follow. The pig's feet are also very real. The image of the senior brother is created so well. I really like the senior brother Zhu 99😋😋😋
I have been reading novels for several years. This book feels generally good. The outline is okay, but the emotional line is a bit confusing. The plot is okay. The novel on Tomato🍅 is really good.
Why are there so few people! The author writes so well! Baozi who likes long and detailed writing must read it. [Send heart][Send heart]
Beautiful author and great writing [like]
I just like Senior Brother and Junior Brother [laughs]. It turns out that one chapter has four to five thousand words, so I thought, why is it so satisfying to read?
Not bad, there were a lot of regrets in the process, but fortunately the ending was satisfactory
Except for the timeline and cultivation being a bit messy, the storyline is actually quite good. I feel like this book could actually be better if there were more details [laughing]
I've read a few chapters and it looks really good. I'm looking forward to the next plot hehe😁
The writing is good, I read it earlier and am reading it now
A very favorite book
After reading it, I still want it
It's not like a novel, but more like the protagonist's self-narration, telling a story. Maybe it's because of the first person point of view
There are a lot of typos, and some places are a bit strange, but overall it's pretty good. There are just too few chapters
Although the rating is low, it looks good and is very realistic.
The protagonist is a hard-working character. There are relatively few descriptions of emotions in the front, mainly from Pei's perspective. There are quite a lot of changes later on, but fortunately the ending is happy.