Reincarnated as an NPC, but My Brother Is a White Dragon!

I like the setting of twins. The possessive compromise between the two protagonists makes me crazy. But the writing style and plot need to be improved. It gives me a sense of the setting of an old-fashioned story where the two protagonists gather divine power to defeat evil and evil does not suppress good. But with the game setting, it seems It is relatively novel, and I hope the plot will be more ups and downs, full of excitement and oppression. In fact, when I saw how many days until the game comes, the sense of urgency is very low, and it does not give readers a sense of substitution. I hope the author can work harder ^ω^[Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

It looks good. I have imagined that when the main storyline ends and the game is about to close, the players will be shocked to learn that this is the real world and that they have saved a world. In front of them, the protagonists bow together, "Thank you for your dedication to this world, chosen ones. See you later."

Very nice! ! A book with potential However, the emotional line can be described more delicately. It feels a little hard to accept being with a brother for a while. This tangled process can be written out, as well as Wipers' perspective and so on. I think the plot is a bit... Draggy now? I don't mean narrative, but there are too many descriptions of battles, giving people the feeling of looking for plot in the battles (but the battles are well written), which can be moderated. Could the characterization be more profound? Lin Ling's character is still a bit thin But the author is doing it for love, it's great! ! Come on! ! (Don't break your teeth) (If you see it, you can reply to me, meow meow meow) This is my second review, and I feel that these chapters are much better! ! Come on

Seeing now, there are two possible reasons for giving up. 1. "Reject! Classmate Lin Ling has detected the contract trap, which is dragon essence and blood! The loss will permanently reduce the upper limit of HP, which is irreversible! Wake up!" Xiao Ai's words seemed to have an effect. "Bloodline... Essence blood?" Lin Ling's consciousness recovered somewhat, and his voice was filled with resistance. He instinctively wanted to retreat. "The price... Is too great! No..." "He's still waiting... Just three drops of blood can save him. What are you waiting for?" "No, you can't die. You can't die. You just protected me." Lin Ling roared desperately, and the dam of reason completely collapsed. "Here you go, I agree, here you go." The two dragons have been holding up the sky for more than a week since they were born, and then the protagonist was deceived into 3 drops of blood essence under the illusion of Xue Po. However, Vipers saved (?) The protagonist before, so it was okay, as the protagonist values love and justice. 2. Xiao Ai's voice became clear and meaningful: "Help? Of course we can help! There is a way to speed up his awakening of consciousness." "Strong emotional fluctuations! He can clearly sense your existence now, Lin Ling!" "Your words, your emotions, your calls can help him." "And the more pleasant you speak, the more you can touch his inner desires and obsessions, and the more you can awaken his sleeping will and accelerate and stabilize his state!" "This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity... Well, I mean, this is the only shortcut to saving him!" "The plan is very simple!" Xiao Ai pretended to be profound and commanded: "Now just pretend that you are still seriously injured and unconscious and unable to move." "I will... Mislead classmate Lin Ling appropriately to make him 'worry' about you more." "When his emotions reach the peak and he needs to pay a 'price' to wake you up..." Xiao Ai deliberately prolonged his tone. "You just have to make some small... Response when he calls you!" "The more you make him feel that his calling is creating a miracle, the more he can force out his truest emotions! Do you understand?" The only shortcut! " This system was saved by the protagonist. If the protagonist hadn't saved it, it would have been formatted. Then he kept teaching Vipers how to make the protagonist fall in love with him (? It's a bit hard to describe...) ("Vipers, Quiet, I am Xiao Ai, you don't have to be hostile to me, listen to me and do as I say, I will make Lin Ling fall in love with you again.") ("Be partners?" His ice-blue eyes suddenly burst into astonishing brilliance, with a pure and stubborn persistence, "Then... Let's be partners!") (At this time, Xiao Ai's electronic sound sounded in Lin Ling's mind again, with a burst of encouragement to Lin Ling. "This kind of thing is only temporary. Your previous relationship was too close. How about you promise him first and stabilize him." "Just tell him first and don't let him touch you. Dragon nature is inherently lustful. When he grows up and finds a new love, he will naturally forget about you.") And this time, knowing that the protagonist is extremely worried, he still does this... Some people think it's normal to assist in the matchmaking, but I personally feel it's a bit weird... I hope the author will get better and better in the future, come on

I finished reading this book in two days. I think this book is relatively outstanding among the Tomato Dragon novels. Let me talk about some personal evaluations of this book. 1. Settings This book is a dragon novel set in a Western fantasy world. The protagonist is a white dragon. It tells the story of the protagonist traveling through this world to collect power and fight against the abyss. To be honest, it's a bit cliche (such as "Dragon, Dragon Realm"), but the theme of twins and the arrival of players makes up for this very well, a bit like the magician version of "Super Mechanic" 2. Writing style The author's writing style can be considered to be absolutely above average in Julong Wen. The speed of two updates a day is average but very stable. I will mention some points below (too many words and I have to swallow the comments again).

I give it four stars because there is a thunder in Chapter 7 and no explanation has been given. Is it made up for later, recaptured and fully recovered, or is it not recovered but just gaining some energy and barely making up for it? I don't know, I feel like there is a rock in my heart that is not stable. You should also put Chapter 7 in the introduction. The author is probably not a noob. The author probably changed his name. If that part of the upper limit is taken back, let me make it clear. In addition, the loss of the upper limit of the protagonist's growth. Is it the loss of growth from the time it was taken away to the time it was taken back with the loss of the upper limit of the protagonist's growth? Or is it just the previous point? ? ? , If this is just the previous point, I won't say it anymore,

It's quite beautiful, but why does it feel like there's no one there? Author, come on ٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶

It looks good, I love it, the pseudo-orthopedics is so sweet to me😋😋😋

After three years of Yamos, I finally have a book about Bai Long that I can read. The two little white dragons have to live a good life [crying]

It's good-looking. It's rare to see two male protagonists like this. Both protagonists are inhuman and even have a bit of pseudo-orthopedic elements. They are also behind the scenes of the mainstream male channel's fourth natural disaster upgrade, and they upgrade at the same time. In short, it is very fragrant [Adoration]