When the protagonist awakens, he is surrounded by black and red flames, and everyone is shocked. The soul type is called "Jue Yuan". He is born with dual attributes at the beginning. Every time he awakens, he awakens two attributes. Let's see what kind of world the protagonist can break out of.
Reader comments
This change is okay. The male protagonist is at the decisive point of killing. Since he has some memories of the time-travelers, the destructive power to his own abilities should have a psychological value, rather than knowing nothing. Also, the update is too slow. I hope to continue writing.
Not bad, the plot seems to be okay so far [shy]
It's well written. It's very good. It's written with great literary talent. It can be used for writing essays. However, if the plot is different from the previous original work, there is still a lot of comparison. I recommend reading the author. Keep up the good work!
Hmm... The plot is not bad, but the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. The author should work hard and practice again. I think you will be fine. I will give it 4 stars first, so as not to make you proud [laughs]
Very good, but every time Mo Fan or Zhang Fan can't tell the difference
Can you change the name back to the original?
The word count in the first few chapters is a bit short
The writing is good, the personal setting is interesting, and the plot is novel. It's worth watching.
Very good, very well written
It's interesting, it follows the plot, and the psychological portrayal of the characters is also very delicate, with real feelings.
The plot is quite consistent with the original work, but anchors should not always think about the end, push the rules quickly or else I will send you a blade [Punch Out][Punch Out]
This change is okay. The male protagonist is at the decisive point of killing. Since he has some memories of the time-travelers, the destructive power to his own abilities should have a psychological value, rather than knowing nothing. Also, the update is too slow. I hope to continue writing.
Not bad, the plot seems to be okay so far [shy]
It's well written. It's very good. It's written with great literary talent. It can be used for writing essays. However, if the plot is different from the previous original work, there is still a lot of comparison. I recommend reading the author. Keep up the good work!
Hmm... The plot is not bad, but the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. The author should work hard and practice again. I think you will be fine. I will give it 4 stars first, so as not to make you proud [laughs]
Very good, but every time Mo Fan or Zhang Fan can't tell the difference
Can you change the name back to the original?
The word count in the first few chapters is a bit short
The writing is good, the personal setting is interesting, and the plot is novel. It's worth watching.
Very good, very well written
It's interesting, it follows the plot, and the psychological portrayal of the characters is also very delicate, with real feelings.
The plot is quite consistent with the original work, but anchors should not always think about the end, push the rules quickly or else I will send you a blade [Punch Out][Punch Out]
Finally found a full-time mage fanfic
Very nice, highly recommended
Very good, looking forward to the follow-up
My last name is Shao, like the protagonist.
It's the best I've ever seen in France!