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It's very good-looking, raise it first, don't be a cow. Qingluan must also wake up. He has a different feeling from other fantasy immortals. Now he has reached the state of becoming a god, and Yuanying is also walking around. It makes people feel that the protagonist is ordinary, and the one from Hehuan Sect is okay. There can be as many women as possible, and Shuang Jie is fine.

Really, I didn't expect that fairy tales could be written like this, a very humane world of immortal cultivators, four close relatives, Taoist couples who love each other, silently guarding elders of the sect, and an ex-girlfriend who is a bit yandere but is in love with her miserably. Especially the human relations between the immortal cultivators shown in Tiannan Dabi are better than The intrigues and predatory stories I usually read are much more comfortable. Although the emotions between each character and the male protagonist or between characters are not much written, they are all written very profoundly. From the few words interspersed in the text, you can feel their lifelike past. I was moved by the characters' stories several times. The only flaw is that there are two beauties in Cangguo. The progress is really fast. I feel like they have a crush on each other within a few days of meeting each other. Maybe these are succubi.

This book has 200,000 words, so I will give you a review. Four stars. Below three stars is too unambitious. Now that I have started a book, I must write it well. But this book definitely has shortcomings. The five-star rating is due to the brothers, and I will work hard for it. This is my first Xianxia light novel. I used to write about cities. I borrowed some themes from several books I had finished reading before, but the writing method was different. I thought it was very interesting. The Taoist couple was injured, the protagonist redeemed, faced temptation, and the biggest inner demon. These were the points that I really wanted to write about, so I started this book. I will revise it before publishing chapters, but sometimes it is really difficult to avoid... After all, it is a serial novel, so I hope everyone will forgive me if there are any mistakes or omissions. In fact, it is recommended that you read this book at night to calm down and you may have a different feeling. Finally, the good and bad reviews are all testimonials of reading the book. Everyone can discuss it rationally, and I accept them all. It's just that I will reply if I see four or five stars. After all, I can't let the brothers who like this book think that I can't see it. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Oh, by the way, if you have an AI picture that suits the character, you can leave it here. If I have the opportunity to be promoted to lv4, I will select the appropriate one and paste it into the text. It also counts as everyone participating in character creation. [Love][love][love]

The writing is very good [please take a closer look]. The male protagonist has a very charming personality and the emotional connection with each female protagonist is very clear. The harem story can clearly explain how each female protagonist knows and falls in love with the male protagonist. It can also be written in such a smooth manner without giving the reader a sense of repetition. This very well reflects the author's skill in character creation and emotional logic arrangement, although it is still in the stage of flirting and confiscation. Also, who is the male protagonist's first time? Is it the saint of the Hehuan Sect? Huang Jiuyin has to eat it for the first time and still has the issue of virginity. I hope I can write about it in detail next time [laughter]

A god among gods, a rare masterpiece in a niche field. Pure Love is another classic. "If there is no test, you don't know how strong this relationship is." The most attractive thing about N is that it never really takes away the male protagonist, nor is it that the original heroine's final defeat is as miserable as possible. On the contrary, many excellent works still have a happy ending in the end, and the male protagonist and the female protagonist are still together. But the reason why readers feel satisfied is not because of the ending, but because "before heading to the ending, the author allowed the male protagonist to truly experience a weighty enough test." The core of this book is not "taking away", but "temptation and choice". When other women appear, create a situation where "the male protagonist could have been shaken", and then see how the male protagonist faces temptation, how to persevere, or how to make a choice after struggling. The author's writing style is also the best among gods. The male protagonist has the foundation to be tempted (the drag female protagonist), the other female protagonists have real competitiveness, not tool people. The male protagonist's feelings are sublimated when being tested, and the female protagonist's value is confirmed through the male protagonist's choices again and again. Looking at the details, 1. The male protagonist's degree of vacillation is just right. In a book, if the male protagonist from beginning to end: "I only love the heroine, other women are just air" That's really boring. It's just a loyal dog male protagonist who existed more than ten years ago. Because there is no test. The male protagonist is a role model in mainland China in terms of morality and cultivation, and in teaching his disciples. If the male protagonist has nothing worthy of others' liking, then no matter how many female characters pursue the harem stallion routine, a truly attractive reverse-N male protagonist is a person who is charming, attractive, and has the emotional fluctuations of ordinary people. The male protagonist admires his senior sisters, he recognizes the charm of other female protagonists, and he briefly struggles. But in the end, you still make a choice, and this process is the core. The result is not important, what is important is the process. 2. Whether it's the shaping of the heroine or not, the other heroines complement the heroine's "little" personality, Cang Feng's domineering, junior sister's quirkiness, and Bai Ning's sense of junior; they also have special experiences with the male protagonist, and in some aspects are more suitable for the male protagonist than the female protagonist. These give them a strong sense of competition rather than being tools. On the whole, the setting is reasonable, the world view and upgrade system are the background, and the character relationships and emotional games are the main dishes. The world view is just to make the relationship between the characters more tense. If you create a copy and introduce a new realm for dozens of consecutive chapters, no matter how novel the setting is, it will be difficult to attract readers who have been bombarded by the "different world" of a certain TV master. That's why the author dared to spend dozens of chapters writing about the relationship between the four peaks, instead of writing a copy of dozens of chapters, which made it more attractive to stay. And this book really achieves that "a test for the male protagonist is far more exciting than a big battle." An alternative kind of male protagonist's growth narrative. Shaking and testing are not the purpose, but the medium for character growth. Recommend everyone to read it. [Love]

Okay, this Huang Jiuyin is quite funny, the Blue Light Sword Immortal is so famous, and his name is also Ji Bo. It's blue, and it has the same name. This woman is still having a deep love affair, searching everywhere, making me laugh [laugh][laugh]

After reading it for a day, I came across the latest chapter. The writing is very interesting and good. The author is also very diligent in updating. One star was deducted because of the poisonous point of the mask mine. After the protagonist changed his appearance, he went to find a healing elixir. During this period, he kissed the new female character Bai Ning. It stands to reason that the protagonist in Chapter 44 has become ordinary. If he helps Bai Ning casually, it is impossible to have a crush on him immediately. It is another matter with the original appearance of a male succubus. My suggestion is to change it to something like cognitive impairment. Others still see this face, but they just don't realize that he is the Blue Light Sword Immortal.

First of all, I would like to comment in one sentence, a good book that is non-toxic. If the score is low, then fewer people will read it. [Thinking][thinking] Secondly, let me talk about my feelings. The author's writing style is fresh and it is very comfortable to read. The plot is clear and the emotions are delicate. The early pull was very heartbreaking. I don't know if Lao Bai is a new account of the old author. Starting from the second volume, the quality of Lao Bai has improved significantly. It writes about cultivating immortals but not only about cultivating immortals, true feelings in the world, and flashy ideals. The worldview expands horizontally and vertically, and the characters become more three-dimensional and fuller. What's very important is that the speed is also very fast [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]. Finally, I would like to make a small suggestion: the narrative can be multi-threaded in parallel, and multiple perspectives of time and space can quickly achieve the narrative purpose (act according to your ability), that is, write the protagonist's perspective of the main plot, or you can also look at other people's present or past perspectives. Then while promoting the plot, you can add more atmosphere to make people empathize or impress. Finally, I really like Master Yaoyue. Can the author add more scenes? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] It's all my fault @qu because the level is too low. If there were character pictures, more readers could be retained. But you must stick to it, you will definitely become popular. [Love][Love][Love] Code words quickly! Don't let us down [punch hard] [punch hard] @qu Is Laobai restricted? [Almost crying] [Almost crying] Not popular yet...

It's well written. I thought it was about conquering the male protagonists one by one, but it turned out that they were all involved. I actually care about every good person getting a good ending, and the harem is just pure love for several people. I just feel that there are too many female characters. Although it will lengthen the length of the story, it is too difficult to balance. I am not talking about the protagonist here, but the author. Now the male protagonist is now the ultimate goal is to save his wife. It revolves around the female protagonists who have already met and those who have just met. However, several of the characters are difficult to plan for the scope of Taoist companions in the current male protagonist's setting, because the resources are unevenly distributed. The main plot felt unattractive in the early stages, but the author did a good job in writing and emotional life. I feel that this is what keeps people interested, and I hope the author can do his best.

The writing is very good, especially the emotional aspects. The portrayal is very good. There is only one request. I hope that I won't be eaten up by the female characters later. It will be very boring. The pull between emotions is interesting.

For now, pure love is invincible It's rare to find such a novel on Tomato that can make my nose feel sore and my eyes warm. I wonder if we can update this faster, I'm so anxious [smile]

It has the feeling of leaving traces of time as the years pass by. Based on this, it has surpassed 90% of the novels about cultivating immortals (or those fast food that advertises novels about cultivating immortals). The delicate emotions are also a highlight. Not much else to say, they are all above the passing mark.

The writing is first-class, in Tomato, it is definitely top-notch, the rhythm is also super well controlled, the characters are detailed, it is a super good book, you can check out other book reviews on my homepage, I have always been picky, but this book should not be buried, so it must be praised.

It's super good-looking, but I still hope that the male protagonist can have the feeling of being able to get but not have other female protagonists. The wife is the main character, and the other female protagonists have a good relationship with the male protagonist.

I have no words to say, it's absolutely fine. I actually came here with the intention of reading a mindless harem story, but I was careless and fell into it. The author's writing of emotions is so delicate. The character of the male protagonist is the most surprising to me. Although he is in the harem, he is very pure and sincere. How about discussing feelings with your imperial sister? Zhang is so gentle and responsible. The chapter on the journey to the mortal world written later on the road to Tianbei is more exciting and warm than the last chapter. Da Gouzi is the real sword god, Shuang Luan's sisterly love is deep, and the wedding of Zhenzhen and Fengzi is really well written. I must continue to read without risking my life.

It's really good-looking, and the characters are full-bodied. It's not the same as those out there. It's so real and emotional. Just because I was about to take the postgraduate entrance examination and saw it so late, I knew it was really good-looking. The author must work hard.

After reading most of the book, I really overturned my initial understanding of this book. At first I thought it was just a harem chronicle for traffic, but now I really feel that the title of the book is deceiving. The depth of this book really made me sigh. At first, I thought why the heroine should not wake up earlier, but then on the journey to Tiandong, a series of short stories started with saving the heroine as the main line. Almost every little story made me sigh in my heart, and my mood was affected. I wanted to cry while reading it. The writing is very good. It seems that Tomato still has good books.

Generally speaking, not my thing [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

I haven't read much yet, but I think it's a good book. It combines immortality and love well, and the writing is quite tasteful. The author handles the details well. Some brothers in the comment area said that it was too slow to eat. I think it's okay. For now, I have to eat two. The male protagonist is not a eunuch, and the pull between him and the female protagonist is not forceful. It all makes sense.

It's really well written. I haven't seen a loving and righteous male protagonist in a long time. Other fairy tales are still egoistic to put it bluntly, which is not wrong, but I just want to read Pure Love Cultivation.

It's very beautiful. It's not awesome from beginning to end. It seems to be pure love so far. The male protagonist has very positive values. The second volume is also very touching. I think the process of saving my wife is very well written. I don't know if it will be finished after the third volume. I suddenly went to the hospital. It seems that I will have to save it for a long time before reading it.

The writing is really good, but the rating is too low. I stayed up all night to read it. The writing is also very good, the emotions and details are very delicate, and there is nothing poisonous about it. But there is one bad thing. Please stop peeking into my life. I will no longer provide materials about Blu-ray Sword Fairy [smile]

The author is very thoughtful. It's a very good book. It's very interesting. The details and plot are good. However, the latest 107 chapters are not enough to write enough! One more chapter is fine! You think that girls and everything have stories, so why is it that one chapter of the discussion is a bit scratchy and not satisfying?

I give you five stars. I have a wish. Thank you all. Apprentice, sister, sister, and master. Thank you all. This may be a bit presumptuous, but no one should want to care about themselves. The people you care about leave you. Thank you. Please be satisfied with the world in the novel. Reality is already uncomfortable.

Brothers, let me find gold again [Adoration]

This protagonist is awesome, and his second brother has a name

Surprisingly, it's okay. I'll watch [Eating Melon] first and I'll change it after watching it. I don't know why, but the character of the main character was wrong from the beginning of Huang Jiuyin's scene. It shouldn't be my problem [what]

Come on, big brother who writes pornographic articles

I feel that this book is at least a nine points. It is very well written, but it is not popular. So few people have read it. The author probably wants to give up [face covering]

I saw the latest chapter, let me comment. Very good to watch and recommended. (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤