After My Dao Companion Was Injured, the Immortal Maidens Came After Me!

It's very good-looking, raise it first, don't be a cow. Qingluan must also wake up. He has a different feeling from other fantasy immortals. Now he has reached the state of becoming a god, and Yuanying is also walking around. It makes people feel that the protagonist is ordinary, and the one from Hehuan Sect is okay. There can be as many women as possible, and Shuang Jie is fine.

Really, I didn't expect that fairy tales could be written like this, a very humane world of immortal cultivators, four close relatives, Taoist couples who love each other, silently guarding elders of the sect, and an ex-girlfriend who is a bit yandere but is in love with her miserably. Especially the human relations between the immortal cultivators shown in Tiannan Dabi are better than The intrigues and predatory stories I usually read are much more comfortable. Although the emotions between each character and the male protagonist or between characters are not much written, they are all very profound. From the few words interspersed in the text, you can feel their lifelike past. I was moved by the stories of the characters several times. The only flaw is that there are two beauties in Cangguo. The progress is really fast. I feel like they have a crush on each other within a few days of meeting each other. Maybe these are succubi.

This book has 200,000 words, so I will give you a review. Four stars. Below three stars is too unambitious. Now that I have started a book, I must write it well. But this book definitely has shortcomings. The five-star rating is due to the brothers, and I will work hard for it. This is my first Xianxia light novel. I used to write about cities. I borrowed some themes from several books I had finished reading before, but the writing method was different. I thought it was very interesting. The Taoist couple was injured, the protagonist redeemed, faced temptation, and the biggest inner demon. These were the points that I really wanted to write about, so I started this book. I will revise it before publishing chapters, but sometimes it is really difficult to avoid... After all, it is a serial novel, so I hope everyone will forgive me if there are any mistakes or omissions. In fact, it is recommended that you read this book at night to calm down and you may have a different feeling. Finally, the good and bad reviews are all testimonials of reading the book. Everyone can discuss it rationally, and I accept them all. It's just that I will reply if I see four or five stars. After all, I can't let the brothers who like this book think that I can't see it. 😏😏😏 Oh, by the way, if you have an AI picture that suits the character, you can leave it here. If I have the opportunity to be promoted to lv4, I will select the appropriate one and paste it into the text. It also counts as everyone participating in character creation. ❤️❤️❤️

The writing is very good [please take a closer look]. The male protagonist has a very charming personality and the emotional connection with each female protagonist is very clear. The harem story can clearly explain how each female protagonist knows and falls in love with the male protagonist. It can also be written in such a smooth manner without giving the reader a sense of repetition. This very well reflects the author's skill in character creation and emotional logic arrangement, although it is still in the stage of flirting and confiscation. Also, who is the male protagonist's first time? Is it the saint of the Hehuan Sect? Huang Jiuyin has to eat it for the first time and still has questions about virginity. I hope I can write about it in detail next time😏

A god among gods, a rare masterpiece in a niche field. Pure Love is another classic. "If there is no test, you don't know how strong this relationship is." The most attractive thing about N is that it never really takes away the male protagonist, nor is it that the original heroine's final defeat is as miserable as possible. On the contrary, many excellent works still have a happy ending in the end, and the male protagonist and the female protagonist are still together. But the reason why readers feel satisfied is not because of the ending, but because "before heading to the ending, the author allows the male protagonist to truly experience a weighty enough test." The core of this book is not "taking away", but "temptation and choice." When other women appear, create a situation where "the male protagonist could have been shaken", and then see how the male protagonist faces temptation, how to persevere, or how to make a choice after struggling. The author's writing style is also the best among gods. The male protagonist has the foundation to be tempted (the drag female protagonist), the other female protagonists have real competitiveness, not tool people. The male protagonist's feelings are sublimated when being tested, and the female protagonist's value is confirmed through the male protagonist's choices again and again. Looking at the details, 1. The male protagonist is just right. In a book, if the male protagonist says from beginning to end, "I only love the female protagonist, other women are just air," it would be really meaningless. It's just a loyal dog male protagonist who existed more than ten years ago. Because there is no test. The male protagonist is a role model in mainland China in terms of morality and cultivation, and in teaching his disciples. If the male protagonist has nothing worthy of being liked by others, then no matter how many female characters pursue the harem stallion routine, a truly attractive reverse-N male protagonist is a person who is charming, attractive, and has the emotional fluctuations of ordinary people. The male protagonist admires his senior sisters, he recognizes the charm of other female protagonists, and he briefly struggles. But in the end, you still make a choice, and this process is the core. The result is not important, what is important is the process. 2. Whether it's the shaping of the heroine or not, the other heroines complement the heroine's "little" personality, Cang Feng's domineering, junior sister's quirkiness, and Bai Ning's junior sense; they also have special experiences with the male protagonist, and in some aspects are more suitable for the male protagonist than the female protagonist. These give them a strong sense of competition rather than being tools. On the whole, the setting is reasonable, the world view and upgrade system are the background, and the character relationships and emotional games are the main dishes. The world view is just to make the relationship between the characters more tense. If you create a copy and introduce a new realm for dozens of consecutive chapters, no matter how novel the setting is, it will be difficult to attract readers who are bombarded by the "different world" of a certain TV master. That's why the author dared to spend dozens of chapters writing about the relationship between the four peaks, instead of writing a copy of dozens of chapters, which made it more attractive to stay. And this book really achieves that "a test for the male protagonist is far more exciting than a big battle." An alternative kind of male protagonist's growth narrative. Shaking and testing are not the purpose, but the medium for character growth. Recommend everyone to read it. ❤️

Okay, this Huang Jiuyin is quite funny, the Blue Light Sword Immortal is so famous, and his name is also Ji Bo. It's blue, and it has the same name. This woman is still having a deep love affair, searching everywhere, making me laugh 😄😄

After reading it for a day, I came across the latest chapter. The writing is very interesting and good. The author is also very diligent in updating. One star was deducted because of the poisonous point of the mask mine. After the protagonist changed his appearance, he went to find a healing elixir. During this period, he kissed the new female character Bai Ning. It stands to reason that the protagonist in Chapter 44 has become ordinary. If he helps Bai Ning casually, it is impossible to have a crush on him immediately. It is another matter with the original appearance of a male succubus. My suggestion is to change it to something like cognitive impairment. Others still see this face, but they just don't realize that he is the Blue Light Sword Immortal.

First of all, I would like to comment in one sentence, a good book that is non-toxic. If the score is low, then fewer people will read it. 🤔🤔 Secondly, let me talk about my feelings. The author's writing style is fresh and it is very comfortable to read. The plot is clear and the emotions are delicate. The early pull was very heartbreaking. I don't know if Lao Bai is a new account of the old author. Starting from the second volume, the quality of Lao Bai has improved significantly. It writes about cultivating immortals but not only about cultivating immortals, true feelings in the world, and flashy ideals. The worldview expands horizontally and vertically, and the characters become more three-dimensional and fuller. Most importantly, the speed is also very fast😏😏. Finally, I would like to make a small suggestion: the narrative can be multi-threaded in parallel, and multiple perspectives of time and space can quickly achieve the narrative purpose (act within your ability), that is, write the protagonist's perspective of the main plot, or you can also look at other people's present or past perspectives. Then while promoting the plot, you can add more atmosphere to make people empathize or impress. Finally, I really like Master Yaoyue. Can the author add more scenes? 🥺🥺 It's all my fault @qu. The level is too low. If there are character pictures, more readers can be retained. But you must stick to it, you will definitely become popular. ❤️❤️❤️Code quickly! Don't let us down [punch hard] [punch hard] @qu Is Laobai restricted? 🥺🥺Not popular yet...

It's well written. I thought it was about conquering the male protagonists one by one, but it turned out to be all involved. I actually care about every good person getting a good ending, and the harem is just pure love among several people. I just feel that there are too many female characters. Although it will lengthen the length of the story, it is too difficult to balance. I am not talking about the protagonist here, but the author. Now the male protagonist is now the ultimate goal is to save his wife. It revolves around the female protagonists who have already met and those who have just met. However, several of them are difficult to plan for the scope of Taoist companions in the current male protagonist's setting, because the resources are unevenly distributed. The main plot felt unattractive in the early stages, but the author's writing style and emotional life are good. I feel that this is what keeps people interested, and I hope the author can do his best.

The writing is very good, especially the emotional aspects. The portrayal is very good. There is only one request. I hope that I won't be eaten up by the female characters later. It will be very boring. The pull between emotions is interesting.