E-Sports: Crazy Criticism of AD That He Only Listens to Support

The writing is pretty good, but the author needs to bring emotion when writing [sending my heart] I think this article is overall good, the setting, hehe, I like it. The only shortcoming is that when I read it, I couldn't relate to it. It seemed that they had no emotions, or the emotions were too unified. It felt like all the characters had similar personalities and no distinctive characteristics. (This is my summary of my feelings after reading five chapters) Dear author, please keep writing, I will keep reading the first one [Blow a kiss] I didn't continue to read it. The author may have improved the shortcomings of the character's unclear personality in the follow-up. You can read other people's comments and then decide whether to read it or not. If you have any questions, you can ask them. As long as you see them, they will be answered. If it is about this book, it has been a long time ago and the reference significance is not very great. You can try to read a few chapters by yourself.

I write book reviews with both praise and criticism. I hope it is useful to you. The first part was very frustrating, but the second part was a lot better. The first part made me want to punch those people (I won't spoil who they are, and the writing in the beginning was so compact, it was a bit tiring to watch). If you can't win, don't force yourself to do it. E-sports is the original sin, but the dictatorship of the main attack is so exciting. The characters should have been improved, but there are still some characters that are a bit flat, and the first half of the book is a bit depressing. You can skip chapters if you don't want to read it after you understand it. I skipped chapters and I didn't find anything that I couldn't understand. I really like some of the descriptions of e-sports in this book. The kind of playing style where you just listen to others' instructions and don't use your brain can only be known by experiencing it. You can win easily without doing anything. It's very easy to play. I'm so envious😭😭😭 The setting of the protagonist is also very good, and it is not perfect all at once. I really appreciate the protagonist's performance in facing setbacks/things. The relationship between the team was written in my eyes again and again. The idea is really good (from the perspective of the protagonist's ideological and character shaping). In terms of the overall plot, this event is also a good springboard. After all, it is really difficult to accept a completely different concept and style of play. The concept of this book completely hit my favorite point. Whether it is his description of human nature or the overly rational fragments, this is a plus point for me. But I don't know why it feels a little awkward. Maybe it's because some things are a bit complicated to write. I keep mentioning one feature over and over again during the game. It feels very verbose, and the same point is expressed in the same way. You can try writing it from different aspects. That's not right. It's clearly written quite well, but I feel like it has some shortcomings. The current character development of the other protagonist is still a bit monotonous, but it's very cool and it can be seen that it is slowly changing as the writing progresses. 🌟🌟🌟Oh oh oh oh! I know why I feel that the protagonist is strange. Until now, I feel that there is a slight disconnect between the protagonist and the entire team. It is a sense of detachment and erratic. I have some ideas but I can't write them. If they are really the ideas in my mind, I have to praise the author's care in the characters. I hope to be able to write some relationship plots, group portraits, etc. In the future. This kind of business-like thing is fun, but it feels very boring without the emotional ups and downs. Getting along within the team gives people a lifeless feeling. The pride of young people should not be like this. The low rating may be because someone was disgusted by the previous plot (after all, I really want to kill those people in the early stage, but writing this way is essential. The best way is to skip chapters) Here are some things that I feel are unreasonable, for the author to see: I really don't understand physical training. A person with very poor physical fitness who has never practiced at all starts training with such high intensity. This is completely making fun of his body. It is a joke to say that he is a professional coach. To allow a person with such a high risk of sudden death to complete twice as many exercises as a person with better physical fitness is to kill someone maliciously. After all, he is not wearing clothes. His psychological problems can be ignored, but the accumulated physical fitness problems are still related to the body.

This e-sports novel is full of ignition. The players go against the wind, trust each other, and break through difficulties with never-give-up efforts. The blood and bonds are intertwined, making it a hearty read. The bright moon in the Qin Dynasty is so beautiful. Do you think it's a coincidence? No, that was all designed by me

Hey hey hey hey, this is definitely the most enjoyable e-sports novel I have read on Tomato. The two-male protagonist is particularly enjoyable. The author is so awesome, how can he write the ordinary combat links so passionately? It is really second-guessing and enjoyable (yes, I admit that it is very intermediate, but it is also very enjoyable). How can I put it, the writing may not be the best, and the feelings may not be the most delicate, but it is definitely the most enjoyable one. I love it very much😋

It's good-looking, and I'm very satisfied when I finish the main text. There should be no sub-CP in this article (I didn't notice if there was one). Both babies are very sweet. Although the progress is a bit slow, this is also an advantage. The highlight of the book for me is the tactics of playing e-sports (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

I stayed up late reading this book. Overall, this is the most detailed and exciting book about combat among the e-sports articles I have read on Tomato. Shi Yan's overall command is different from traditional command, and his calm command is very charming. For me, his character is a bit awkward in the early stage, but! The attack is really good! And this book makes people excited every time they watch it! So excited! I have read this e-sports article many times. I hope the rating can be longer so that more people can read it. It goes up again, I can't do it anymore, and suddenly I found that I made a typo

Although I only watched half of it, it was very comfortable [laughs] It's rare to see this kind of situation in e-sports articles. Every player is indispensable. Their growth is the nourishment for the team's victory. Haha, I like the author's interpretation of each position. It's not really like in some games where you just squeeze out all the lanes to create a god with top skills. MOBA games themselves rely on teamwork. This is a point that I'm very happy to see after watching it for a long time. Although I have seen many people being dissatisfied with the process of easing the relationship between Sky and the team and making all kinds of complaints that reflect reality... But I personally think that since Sky has made corrections later and sincerely integrated into the team, it is already good. If you have to put it into reality, no player is perfect. You have to work together to become a better player. Generally speaking, the interaction between the main CP is very sweet, the game part is also well written, and the personal growth is also very good (Ci Qianqian) Anyway, it looks good [blowing kiss]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ! ! ! In the end, Qin Feng Shiyan will be a long-lasting, happy couple for hundreds of years, and will be happy forever｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

The rebirth part is handled very well. There is no sudden change in ability, but the ability of the original owner plus the ability of the male protagonist. The combination of powerful forces can be regarded as an invincible opponent in the world. The storyline is on point step by step without any delay. I haven't read such a heart-warming story in a long time.

It feels so good, okay? It feels like the best novel I have read among all the novels I have read. I have never played League of Legends but it feels inexplicably cool. I like watching the two male protagonists and I also like the feeling of being evenly matched.

It's really super good. I've read the second book of the boss. The plot is very good and the characters are three-dimensional. The two protagonists are also strong. It made me feel at ease. For Qin Feng, this book is also known as "I Chased the Crush Who Resurrected from the Dead" [Like][Like][Like]

This is the first time I read a book that describes game battles in such detail. It feels like I am actually there, as if I am playing a game. Just reading and imagining it makes me very excited. I have to say that the author's writing ability is really strong. Very powerful, very powerful, ahhhhhhh! The plot is also very good and interesting. This is the most satisfying e-sports article I have read. It is not awkward at all and is very real. Moreover, the author's writing ability is really strong and can make people immerse themselves in the situation. I'm short of words and don't know what to say. Oh, it's just very beautiful. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Nice! The plot is very exciting and exciting. I was really excited, frustrated and happy with them. Whether Shi Yan and Qin Feng are the ADC and support in the main line, or the mid laner and jungler in the if line, they are evenly matched. Just like if said, they are twin stars. Even if they choose to retire later because their hand speed and physical functions are declining, their glory will always exist!

I was really amazed. From my personal point of view, I am actually extremely controlled and don't have any books that I like to read. However, I found this essay on Douyin, and I just changed several platforms to search for it. I really didn't expect it to be so good. Yes, it's really amazing. The plot is really amazing. I really like reading e-sports articles. It's the only one I've been following for so long. It's really good. Can you all read it? It's really amazing. I hope it will become popular, but I also hope it won't be too popular. If it's too vague, it will attract a lot of brats and cause trouble. The author is also very gentle and nice.

This is immortality. There are two extremes in e-sports writing, one is shit, and the other is this immortality. The logic of the game is clear, and the game is not neglected because of emotion. The full text is full of passion and contains the spirit of e-sports. Everyone has not forgotten their original intention. Thank you to the author for giving me a passionate feeling. And the full text has been completed, you can feel free to send [send your heart]

It's super sweet. It's rare to see a main story that doesn't focus on love. Career and love are everything. Mutual achievement, the old couple is so beautiful, even though it is e-sports, it shows me the pleasure of Mr. And Mrs. Smith.

It's very passionate and really makes you feel like you're on the scene. I finished it in two or three days. The more I read, the more I get hooked. This is the third (not sure) e-sports article I've read. The author's writing is very good. We only had a kiss in Chapter 133. The emotional line is not progressing very fast. Qin Shi Mingyue 99

This is really super pretty and has great stamina When Shi Yan returned from time travel, he was insecure, lonely and inhumane. When Qin guided him out, he used his strength to convince his arrogant teammates. During one game, he told his teammates to unite, and by then he was completely reborn. He is a person with feelings, flesh and security. When he was on the if line, Shi Yan was lonely and had no one to trust him with. Until Qin appeared, he became an art

Sweet, very sweet. This book is the most enjoyable e-sports article I have read since reading Tomato. Then the rebirth part was also handled very well. It didn't say that the original owner's ability disappeared or anything like that, but the original owner plus his ability, the powerful combination. It's really beautiful. Highly recommended.

It's quite passionate, although I don't understand some of the words. In the first few chapters, I felt a little angry while watching the solo, but I can still understand it. It gets better later on, the characters are all very well created, and the protagonist is not a smooth sailing type. There are hardships, and there are some very strong opponents. Overall, I feel pretty good.

It's good to watch~The exciting showdown runs throughout the whole text~There are disappointments, excitements, and pleasures~It's very well written! The young couple is quite sweet in the middle and later stages. The extra is super sweet~ (I haven't watched the if line yet) I like it, it's good to watch I've finished reading~ I've finished reading them all! The extras of the if line perfectly make up for all the regrets in the previous life! Very touched! Very sweet! I am so happy that I want to cry! This is one of my favorite eSports articles!

I casually ordered a book without high hopes. I didn't read it seriously at first. After reading a few chapters, the more I read, the more I read. The cooperation and trust in each other during the game really attracted me [snickering][snickering][smirking][shy][shy][shy]

When I first read it, I felt embarrassed because some of the author's words were a bit chubby. But the further I read, the better it gets! ! ! Author, you are so awesome! ! Please update quickly! !

Good-looking👀Good-looking👀Good-looking👀Good-looking👀Good-looking👀Good-looking👀Good-looking👀Good-looking👀, author, I love you! ! ! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing being being being being having being being' having being so sweet and.) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This book is really good to read. It is different from previous e-sports articles. It is very novel and the storyline moves forward quickly. I like it very much and look forward to the next chapter.

It looks so good and so exciting. Although I have never played League of Legends, I have watched others play it. The author's writing is very specific and the content is very exciting. I still like to play Honor of Kings hahahaha [Thinking] [Cool]

It is a very good novel. It is not like a traditional sweet novel. The author wrote about their competition very well, which made me truly feel the passion of youth. When I finished reading the whole text, I felt a little reluctant, but I knew that the story I showed us was over, but their story had just begun.

This is a good book. It was gathering dust on my bookshelf at first. I picked it up at lunchtime and now I regret not reading it earlier. It's really cool, and it's both crazy in attack and reception. It's crazy and powerful at the same time. These two together make it a cool novel among cool novels. I personally like this kind of persona [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] TG is a group that makes me feel a little frustrated and not very happy. Then the game later on is not good at all. I can't stand people like Chu Tian. I will read it later. If there is no change, I will change this article. I have also finished reading that paragraph here, and I can only say that I wrongly blamed them [crying] Everyone is a good baby, just a little tempered. The author is very sorry. In the end, everyone was in harmony, and the cause of Shou's death was also found out, Qin Shi Mingyue 99

The plot is okay and passionate enough, and the protagonists are very excited every time they win the championship. Especially since the obsession of the last two lives has finally come to an end, I wish "Qin Shi Mingyue" a long life, and that in another world it will always be as good as now. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][send heart]

Wow, it's so good. It's my savior when I'm in a book shortage. Come on, don't stop updating, and don't stop updating. I rely on this book to survive!