Wearing a Book, Being Kissed by the Hero's Brother Until He Was Out of Oxygen

From an objective evaluation, the written plot line is very good and excellent, but to be honest, I think the sub-CP in the main plot is very average, even boring. Therefore, I did not read the sub-CP line after watching the finale of the male and female protagonists. I was too dull to watch it. Secondly, the family relationship line is also very average, really quite average. Why do you say that? After the heroine traveled back in time, she only missed her grandmother briefly in the first few chapters and then disappeared. It was still the kind that was overshadowed by one stroke. Secondly, how could a child with such loving parents be raised like Zhu? With a character like Ci, this is not the main thing. The main thing is that the heroine's care for Zhu Ci is almost invisible. However, after her sister comes back, she changes drastically. The subsequent description of the relationship with her sister is very natural. This is well written, but Zhu Ci is average. There is absolutely no sense of the heroine's feelings for her adopted sister who has been with him for 17 years. This is the reason why I think the description of family love is not good. In the end, the love between the heroine and the hero is very inexplicable. In fact, there are many logical problems. But there is no denying that the plot line is well written and very novel and imaginative. If the score goes up, I think 8.8 Is already the upper limit of this book. If the logic is passed and the other lines are written naturally, I can get a score of 9.0 Or above.

Can there be a side story between the male and female actors? I want to see their scenes.

No, the rating of such a good work is so low. I almost missed it and it was OMO. Both the male and female protagonists opened their mouths and there was no misunderstanding. The male and female protagonists were very horny and lustful throughout the whole process. It was really amazing.

It's so good [crying][crying][crying] It's been a long time since I read the whole book. There is no separate plot throughout. The male and female protagonists go in both directions and love each other. It's natural and sweet in daily life. It's not a special kind of candy.

It's so beautiful, and the whole process is super sweet! There is no misunderstanding. The male and female protagonists have a good mouth, and the friends around them are also very good. Both pairs of love lines are super beautiful. [Love] [Love] Just... Can you make a sequel? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's so beautiful, the love between the male and female protagonists is super sweet, and the characters are also very touching! ! Super invincible and beautiful

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It's really beautiful, I really like it 😍

Good looking Family, friendship, and love are all described very well in the book. There will still be some annoying and disgusting characters. But unconditional trust can conquer everything I really like the emotional progress of the male and female protagonists. It's very fast. It's great [love] The deputy CP (sister's one is also good, and there are extra chapters to fill in the gaps [like] Push one [like]

I think that in terms of Bai's living environment and growth process since he was a child, Bai cannot be a smooth person from the inside out. Being smooth and gentle is just what he shows to others. His inside should be that kind of depression and struggle. Anyway, I can't describe it well. I think this kind of Bai is very full and has both an outer self and an inner self. However, the heroine's counterattack against the female counterpart makes me feel a little aggrieved, but I can still accept it.

I like it very much. I haven't seen such a book that suits my taste in a long time.

It's so good that I stayed up until two in the morning, the writing is so good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's very interesting to watch. I like to see the male and female protagonists talk a lot, and the story is not clichéd or complicated! The other characters are also well portrayed, everyone is just right, recommended! !

It's a very good book. I especially like the male and female protagonists. I don't like the sub-character line. Don't be scared away by the score. At first, I didn't plan to read it because the score was so low. But the plot is really attractive and not cliche. It's worth reading.

It's beautiful, but it's a pity that it's still being serialized, only Chapter 68 [crazy]

I stayed up all night and watched it. It's very sweet. The male and female protagonists are very good. They are both open-mouthed types. No misunderstanding. It's sweet.

Very beautiful, the author writes so sweetly, sweet love

It looks good, and the male and female protagonists are well designed.

Looks good, I like the sub-cp

It's so beautiful, the little couple is so sweet [love] [love] [blowing kiss]

Oh my god, it looks really good.

I like it very much and am looking forward to the new book [sending my heart] @

It's so beautiful. I hope I'll be motivated to keep updating. Come on!

I like the male protagonist very much. The writing is very good and sweet. Please rate it.

It's really well written. The connection between the deputy CP and the main CP is very novel. I just feel like I haven't seen enough. I want to see more of the interaction between the two CPs.

I like it very much. I like the sweet daily routine of the male and female protagonists. I have a good time. I hope it won't be too cruel later on.

It's really beautiful and sweet, and there's no bloody misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists. Big cheers for the author⛽

There will be typos, but the overall story is good.

I think it's pretty good. Is it just released? The rating is so low.

Not bad, but I haven't finished watching it yet. Anyway, I personally like it.