Endless blood stained the pupils, and the whispers of the devil echoed in the ears, so the scale of hatred began to tilt, with the life of an important person on one end, while the other end... Gained strength in equal measure.
Does the so-called pupil technique mean pressing the cherished person into the barrel of the gun, and then pulling the trigger on the trigger with that final and decisive roar?
And when the trigger is pulled, is it the spark of revenge or the last embers of life that splashes out?
In a remote town in the Land of Rain, where the sun never shines, a ragged little boy followed some vague memories of his previous life and extended a helping hand to a blue-purple-haired war orphan who fell on the roadside.
At this point, the gears of fate began to bite together, leaving scarlet bloodstains.
A strange holder of the Samsara Eye who overlooks all living beings, a friend who is also a war orphan whom he meets on the road, the Sannin of Konoha who gained fame during the war, and the legendary and powerful Konoha, the first ninja village in the ninja world...
The whole world is opening up to him step by step——
The lost dragon vein, the war in hell, the fateful showdown...
Along the way, I met many people and many things happened.
"How should this cursed world be changed?" Someone asked him.
"Those who can't give up anything are destined to be unable to grow!" Someone roared at him.
"I don't know what you are still expecting, but this is the so-called reality..." Some people were dismissive.
The voices in my ears gradually became noisy, and finally only one remained,
"I can't guarantee that the end point of this journey will be correct, but I can guarantee that the path you take will be the result of your choice!"
Reader comments
Abba Abba stayed up late to catch up on it. It is a perfect novel. I have read most of the Naruto novels on the market. To be honest, it is just like that. It follows the ninja battle route throughout, regardless of the age of the protagonist. It is a twelve-year-old one-on-one movie. The writing is still poor, and the plot is The plot is too tight, but I admire the author's thinking. It perfectly overlaps with the novel route that I have imagined many times in my mind. The idea in my mind is also the same as the author's. The beginning of the rain ninja, the heroine Konan, Jiraiya later came to Konoha, focusing on bonds and It describes daily emotions. There are too many Ninja War routes. I don't recommend it. It's terrible. The author's writing style is very good. I suggest you focus on daily life and bonds. The Ninja War should be deepened too much but don't write all the battles. To be honest, I personally find it very boring. The heroine suggested that there should be more than three. Collapse, Konan is the salvation of those who have just come to the ninja world, the second is the hope of guiding each other in confusion (suggested Tsunade), and the third is relief from the past (suggested Terumi Mei). Yahiko's death is just right for the protagonist of Mangekyo Kaikai, who is also 14 years old, and is not too abrupt. The bond of Konoha can be written more to about 150, and then return to Akatsuki. At least until the current plot unfolds, my desire to continue watching is very strong. Don't lose the emotion and daily description, otherwise the sense of separation will be too strong. I suggest you control the progress of the heroine. The scale of interaction with Konan is very good to me, but the interaction is a bit lacking. It is still recommended to write multiple heroines, just one, nothing, it would be a waste of the author's talent and writing style. The pull and interaction of multiple heroines is best reflected in these places. Of course, this is my feeling from the perspective of a reader. The specifics will depend on the market trend and the author's thinking. It may be a little difficult to follow the previous writing and control the plot to become a big hit, but it is no problem to promote it and make it a small hit. Thank you, the author, and I look forward to your updates and replies.
The previous plot was very enjoyable to watch. After arriving in Konoha, his personality changed (about 30 chapters later?). There was a short plot that even used the thoughts of when he first left the orphanage.
Evaluation: You can watch the plot before arriving at Konoha [Adoration], and after arriving at Konoha, you Shennong can taste it as you see fit [Sneaky smile]
I have also found the fine grain. The characterization and plot arrangement are eye-catching. I personally think that the most important thing in fan fiction is to establish the connection between the protagonist and the characters in the original world. The bond between the protagonist of this book and the trio of Nagato, as well as Jiraiya and Minato is the biggest plus point. The protagonist can be regarded as a growth-oriented protagonist. In the early stage, the protagonist may be a little unlikable, a bit like the protagonist Rudy of "Jobless Reincarnation", but it is not impossible to understand his mentality. The protagonist's subsequent growth and improvement in strength are also satisfactory.
I don't know why, but it's hard to find a fanfic with delicate emotions no matter which platform you use, but this book is really a rare masterpiece, come on💪.
So far, the author's writing is okay, not that bloody. As for whether it's a single or a harem, it all depends on what the author writes (if you want to be happy, just write about the harem without any brains and then collapse the book; if you want to be single, focus on writing. The single heroine may be Xiaonan. Why is it already given in the book? You can understand it). It's not toxic at the moment.
The most touching Naruto fanfic written on Tomato
Rare fairy grass
Very well written
So far, it's up to Rui Gude, it depends on the author's subsequent plot development.
Keep up the good work, just speed up the pace
Very bright and innovative, come on
It's pretty good-looking. It's more readable than common system stories. The characters are pretty well created.
Abba Abba stayed up late to catch up on it. It is a perfect novel. I have read most of the Naruto novels on the market. To be honest, it is just like that. It follows the ninja battle route throughout, regardless of the age of the protagonist. It is a twelve-year-old one-on-one movie. The writing is still poor, and the plot is The plot is too tight, but I admire the author's thinking. It perfectly overlaps with the novel route that I have imagined many times in my mind. The idea in my mind is also the same as the author's. The beginning of the rain ninja, the heroine Konan, Jiraiya later came to Konoha, focusing on bonds and It describes daily emotions. There are too many Ninja War routes. I don't recommend it. It's terrible. The author's writing style is very good. I suggest you focus on daily life and bonds. The Ninja War should be deepened too much but don't write all the battles. To be honest, I personally find it very boring. The heroine suggested that there should be more than three. Collapse, Konan is the salvation of those who have just come to the ninja world, the second is the hope of guiding each other in confusion (suggested Tsunade), and the third is relief from the past (suggested Terumi Mei). Yahiko's death is just right for the protagonist of Mangekyo Kaikai, who is also 14 years old, and is not too abrupt. The bond of Konoha can be written more to about 150, and then return to Akatsuki. At least until the current plot unfolds, my desire to continue watching is very strong. Don't lose the emotion and daily description, otherwise the sense of separation will be too strong. I suggest you control the progress of the heroine. The scale of interaction with Konan is very good to me, but the interaction is a bit lacking. It is still recommended to write multiple heroines, just one, nothing, it would be a waste of the author's talent and writing style. The pull and interaction of multiple heroines is best reflected in these places. Of course, this is my feeling from the perspective of a reader. The specifics will depend on the market trend and the author's thinking. It may be a little difficult to follow the previous writing and control the plot to become a big hit, but it is no problem to promote it and make it a small hit. Thank you, the author, and I look forward to your updates and replies.
The previous plot was very enjoyable to watch. After arriving in Konoha, his personality changed (about 30 chapters later?). There was a short plot that even used the thoughts of when he first left the orphanage. Evaluation: You can watch the plot before arriving at Konoha [Adoration], and after arriving at Konoha, you Shennong can taste it as you see fit [Sneaky smile]
I have also found the fine grain. The characterization and plot arrangement are eye-catching. I personally think that the most important thing in fan fiction is to establish the connection between the protagonist and the characters in the original world. The bond between the protagonist of this book and the trio of Nagato, as well as Jiraiya and Minato is the biggest plus point. The protagonist can be regarded as a growth-oriented protagonist. In the early stage, the protagonist may be a little unlikable, a bit like the protagonist Rudy of "Jobless Reincarnation", but it is not impossible to understand his mentality. The protagonist's subsequent growth and improvement in strength are also satisfactory. I don't know why, but it's hard to find a fanfic with delicate emotions no matter which platform you use, but this book is really a rare masterpiece, come on💪.
So far, the author's writing is okay, not that bloody. As for whether it's a single or a harem, it all depends on what the author writes (if you want to be happy, just write about the harem without any brains and then collapse the book; if you want to be single, focus on writing. The single heroine may be Xiaonan. Why is it already given in the book? You can understand it). It's not toxic at the moment.
The most touching Naruto fanfic written on Tomato
Rare fairy grass
Very well written
So far, it's up to Rui Gude, it depends on the author's subsequent plot development.
Keep up the good work, just speed up the pace
Very bright and innovative, come on
It's pretty good-looking. It's more readable than common system stories. The characters are pretty well created.