Reincarnation************

Secretly give yourself a score ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧, this book is the author's first work in his life. I am not trying to make money on this platform, but I want to share my inner story. The whole story currently has a complete outline. If you really like the plot, you don't have to worry about the eunuch in the middle. (If the update is interrupted for a period of time, it may be due to academic problems. Crispy college students also need to prepare for various exams [currently working on the manuscript] [currently working on the manuscript]) Here, I sincerely thank every reader who wrote a book review and gave a score. You objectively pointed out the advantages and disadvantages of this book and let me know how to write it better next. However, I still have a few words to say to you. In this era of the rise of various short videos, I hope everyone will not be too impetuous when reading. Maybe most people prefer novels with more dialogue, which also leads to longer and detailed descriptions that many people find annoying. However, in my setting, this book is positioned as a Western fantasy + adventure, and it is impossible for most of the chapters to be filled with daily conversations. Take the first few chapters as an example: the protagonist starts in a relatively desperate environment, and he is the only one around him. Under such circumstances, I will definitely use a lot of environmental description and psychological description to highlight the main tone of the entire atmosphere, and "how" the protagonist will do rather than "how to say". However, such long and detailed descriptions decrease linearly in the later chapters, because the protagonist meets all kinds of people later, and there will inevitably be a certain degree of connection between all the characters. At this time, a lot of dialogue is needed. I will read both book reviews and paragraph reviews, and thank you for your active interaction with me🙏🙏But when writing a review, it is best to read it for more than an hour before writing, otherwise there will be many subjective factors mixed in without knowing the full picture. If you read the plot carefully, you may find that there are many foreshadowings in the early stage, and some seemingly unreasonable places are explained later, so it may be too early for you to complain about some minor plots. [I understand] [I understand] Maybe my writing method is destined to be unpopular, but as a debut novel, I still want to write a story that I like, rather than turning it into a commodity. Next, I will continue to optimize my writing style and try to add long dialogues to give you a better reading experience. Thank you all for seeing this. So far, the main characters of the first volume have gradually been completed, and the story has also entered a relatively climax stage. Thank you for accompanying me all the way. Finally, I wish everyone a happy reading and a happy life~ (Inner OS: Maybe not many people will finish reading such a long paragraph [face covering] [face covering])

Chapter 1 of "Dream of Red Mansions": Zhen Shi conceals his dream consciousness and is psychic, while Jia Yucun is a prostitute and a beautiful lady. A piece of stubborn stone left by Nuwa to mend the sky was turned into a psychic gem by the monks and brought into the mortal world. Zhen Shiyin met a monk in his dream and learned the story of the "Mushi Qianmeng", that is, Shenying's waiter irrigated the purple fairy grass, and the fairy grass wanted to repay the kindness with a lifetime of tears. After waking up, Zhen Shiyin got acquainted with Jia Yucun and helped him go to Beijing to take the exam. During the Lantern Festival, Zhen Shiyin's daughter Yinglian was abducted and her home suffered a fire. As a result, Zhen Shiyin became a monk out of pessimism and world-weariness. Later, I accidentally met a Taoist priest. After hearing "Women's Song", I became enlightened and followed the Taoist priest. At the same time, Jiao Xing was remembered by Jia Yucun because she looked back at Jia Yucun a few more times, and later became his concubine and supported her. This episode is the outline of the whole book and sets the emotional and philosophical tone of the story.

Not bad, not bad. The protagonist's high IQ is the best online. He is trying his best to stay alive and thinking about strategies is very attractive. But I was a little tired later, or after being captured by the princess, I could only do small actions, and I was a little lazy (IQ became stupid and sweet). I hope I can continue to adjust it later.

It's a very good-looking work, but I think the abuse of the main character has to be in the middle stage. I feel that there is basically no element of abuse of the main character now or it is simply not qualified [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

The plot is very good, and the details are very vivid, but I feel that the details are a bit too complicated. I hope it can be simplified with more concise words. The long-term repeated details prevent the plot from advancing normally, but overall it is very good. In fact, the author must have racked his brains when using these detailed words. I think it should be more detailed like those in famous novels, and describe them in more classic words and in a more accurate way. Generally speaking, it's good. If you like this kind of book, you can buy it. I haven't finished it yet. I wonder how fast the update is? It is obviously well written, but maybe this is convenient for the small audience, and the author is not interactive enough. I hope the author can interact more.

I originally planned to watch it for a while from the beginning of the meal to before the lunch break, but when I saw the end of the lunch break, I was still unsatisfied.

It's beautiful. I really like this kind of lily. Good luck to the author!

The author's writing is so good😆hehehe😈 [shy]

At least I didn't trick anyone into killing him [smile]

It's very interesting. It would be better if there were more stories like pirates sharing their gold.

To see such a wonderful battle of wits, even if you die, it's worth the price of admission!

It looks good so far, I hope I can keep it up

Two days ago, the author told me that the pace was going to speed up. Unexpectedly, I fast forwarded to the end of the update. What a pity for this book [I almost cried]. I wish the author can adjust his mentality as soon as possible. See you in the next book.

Hope to continue. Please, I will do anything!

A very good novel, but it's a pity that it's no longer updated. I hope the author will continue to pursue his small hobby of writing.

It's good-looking and has strict logic. Although the protagonist is living under someone else's roof, he doesn't seem to feel aggrieved.

Beautiful language, sincere emotions and clear logic! I just like this kind of delicate description, the image is very strong [like][like][like]

Medieval Western Fantasy Herb

Why is it over...

What I want to see is the cruel abuse of the master's mouth and teeth Very nice [like]

Looks good, it's the mouth teeth I want to see! Even if the magic ring has been broken, please win this damn thing!

There are too many details, and it's so tiring to watch [grieved] The plot is good, I hope it gets better and better