Mr. Qi************

This book is super sweet. It ignores the confusing plot timeline, the same important plot is written in two or three ways, the rainforest grassland live broadcast trailer has no corresponding plot content, and there are a lot of repeated descriptions. The rest is great. The image positioning of the protagonist's family of three and the sweet story are all very well written. It really captures the love of gods and martial arts loyalty. I insisted on watching two-thirds of it, but I couldn't stand it anymore. The plot was so confusing and confusing that I couldn't stand it🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ I hope the author can optimize it. I will come back to read it after the revision is completed👀[shy][shy]

It's very interesting, but could the author improve the details of the article and make it logically coherent? Repeating the same plot but with different details affects reading. I believe that after the revision, this book will attract many readers to read it. After all, the plot frame design and character structure of this book are quite outstanding!

Lovely author, please come on, come on, come on, come on!

Come on come on come on come on

Crazy sweet, too sweet

Why does each chapter go a little further back?

It looks good, but the details are a bit repetitive, but overall it's pretty good [Blowing Kisses]