Devil's Football

First of all, the premise for reading this book is that it is a fictional + passionate drama background (I am an absolute protagonist!! Not a dream girl) The writing style of this book is acceptable, the plot is open and flowing, and the words reveal the passion of young people, which is very touching. In particular, the characterization of the male protagonist Lu Yuan is profound. A young man who was plagued by diseases in his previous life and longed to run freely on the green field. By chance, he entered the hot-blooded series but faced the pressure of survival with huge popularity debts. Faced with the choice between survival and dreams, he unswervingly chose his dreams and fought for his dreams! ! At the same time, the portrayal of friendship in the book is also very brilliant. The friendship between Lu Yuan and the three people is heart-warming. Facing the pressure of Lu Yuan's dark popularity to survive, it is the encouragement and support of his friends that give Yuan the motivation to continue! ! ! However, the description of the animation broadcast in the article is basically the same as the previous article. There is a suspicion of water, and the description of the real audience is insufficient. There is only a few pages of discussion. It is recommended that the author change the description of the animation plot and add real-life barrages in a more concise and intuitive form. The faults do not hide the faults, so please give the author a big boost! ! ! I hope that there will be no female protagonist and no male CP (you can be criticized in the forum, but no corruption in the article). The pure and passionate male protagonist will stand up and refuse the love scene between the pendant female protagonist and Qing Shui! ! ! !

I don't know if the author likes to watch football games. Many top players can rely on their own personal abilities. Some force breakthroughs, tear apart the opponent's defense, and score goals with extreme individualism. Some are midfield commanders who rely on their unparalleled vision to turn the team into a bunker. They can attack and defend, and their personal abilities are also super strong (this book is a bit like this, but their personal abilities are too low. Even if they pass the ball well in a real game, it won't matter if they stare a little) Its function is like the Brazilian team's high-position press, you can't pass the ball at all!), Or it can be a defender with a knife, using his super physical fitness and rich experience to intercept the opponent's passing attack route, or disrupt the offensive rhythm, and have a super kick The long shot is also very handsome, but the author of this book gave me the feeling in the early stage that the ability values ​​are a bit too low. Although it needs to grow, those who have played football will really feel desperate. The feeling of not being able to pass the ball out, I don't want to encounter it again. . . . . . Looking forward to the following, very much looking forward to it✩*:.˶˃ ᵕ ˂˵ .:*✩ It is impossible for a tool player who only relies on passing the ball to become a star, let alone a superstar. He can just go to sleep. The next book

The Chinese version of Blue Lock, the highlight of this book is that it does not blindly choose the striker as the protagonist, but sees the brain as the core of multi-player competition, overall planning, and relying on wisdom to make the protagonist's image stand up. It has the potential to be a big hit. I hope the author can update it more

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, so good-looking, I have the talent, calmness, perseverance, passion and bond, and the protagonist is exactly what I dreamed of! This is what I want to see! ! It's just that there are too few words and it's not enough to read. . Author, please keep up the good work, I will always support you, readers are willing to do anything! [Cry][cry][cry]

So far, it looks pretty good. However, the review of the drama is quite artificial and the main paragraphs are repeated many times. However, the plot arrangement is very good. I don't know how the author arranged it later. I only hope that Tang can be controlled by Ms. Lin and become a real protagonist. Secondly, there should be no family drama, especially no brother-sister plot later on. It's the kind of story about her being innocent. It's best to cut it off quickly. For the third emotional drama, I don't have any requirements. It can be dedicated to football or have a female protagonist. But don't do any drama about refusing to welcome a woman or giving away a daughter. I really hate this person surnamed Lin. She is the only person who can make me escape from the hot-blooded sports mentality. Can the author tell me about the follow-up arrangements for her?

I really can't stand the control-freak female co-star who always loves palace fighting. Can you reduce her role a little bit? I'm here to watch the football drama! ! ! Not here to fight in the palace! It's not that there can't be plots, but your proportion is too large. The roles of the two male protagonists have been suppressed. I sincerely hope that there will be fewer such plots! I really like it. I really like watching football and forums. ♥ I really love the male protagonist. I am a big fan of protagonists and love watching the protagonist pretend to be B. I don't have any other hobbies. I only love the protagonist. ♥

The writing is very good, passionate and real. It can make people immerse themselves wholeheartedly and have a sense of pictures in their minds. However, Lin's appearance is a bit abrupt, and it feels inexplicably not integrated into the whole article, and there is some resistance in the heart. I don't have a deep understanding, and I can't understand the author's intention. After reading the comments, some people are also a little disgusted with Lin's existence. I understand that it is rare to find such a good novel in Tomato, and I can't pick any reasons. But when faced with the large number of chapters and words describing Lin, I lost my original interest. The only problem in front of me is the protagonist variable. Because it focuses on the description of Lin, the existence of the original protagonist Lu has long been obscured, so I can't tell who is the protagonist. Rather than watching the development centered on Tang, I am more interested in the true feelings of the young people who are high-spirited and overcome difficulties together. What really attracts me is Lu. He is unwilling to give up, so he challenges destiny. Even though his physical talent is not high, he has unparalleled wisdom and will. He is a true leader and guide, and the overall situation is huge and ambitious. "Or maybe because I am a pure protagonist, I have a strange feeling towards Lu Zhen that I want him to go higher and further and become the most dazzling existence." But this only highlights that the author's writing style is very good, making people really immersed in it, making me forget that Lu is just using his perspective to unfold theater events that have never happened in the previous life. Everyone has different opinions. A work often goes a long way with mixed reviews. Even the best work will be criticized, so there is no need to feel that my writing is not good because of my comments. The above is my personal opinion, and it may not sound nice, but this is my understanding as much as possible. The sky is high, let the birds fly, and we will meet each other if we are destined. I wish the author can achieve more distant goals and become a great writer.

Disadvantages: There is too little content in each episode of the series, which makes the pace a bit slow and not quite like a series. Each episode contains too little content and may not be able to finish one thing. Each episode is too short, and it does not look like a popular drama. Advantages: 1. The main plot of the game plus the daily part is very good, I hope it will continue to be maintained. 2. The protagonist is well portrayed 3. The author chose a good time. The protagonist is about to go to high school and is still growing up. It can write the growth process of the protagonists well and set up challenges well. Suggestions: 1. I hope there will be a transformation of the three protagonists later. The transformation mentioned is that after the protagonist experiences a certain game, one or several values ​​suddenly increase a lot, and he will continue to be strong in the future. But it can be seen that the author wrote that the three protagonists are too young and their physical condition is not as good as that of the provincial team. This is acceptable. So transformation can be arranged later. 2. The protagonist Lu Yuan is too paranoid. I hope things will change later. 3. If you think you can set it up, you can use popularity points to purchase skills. 4. The set opponents have always exceeded the standard, which is unreasonable. If you want to set up a competition with some teams of the same level (age), you can not include the drama, but it is impossible not to include it. 5. In all games, the protagonist's numerical value may increase.

It's good to watch, the plot description is very appealing, the character of the protagonist is also very good, the system's presence is not high, and you don't just rely on the system. The content of the drama is very interesting, and the story is described from another perspective, which has a unique flavor

This is a very good football novel. Anyway, I haven't read such a good football novel in the past two years. It is a refreshing novel, but there are many unreasonable elements in it. However, this unreasonableness does not affect the reading but makes it more enjoyable. I feel that the author has a good grasp of the degree of the novel, unlike other novels that are too exaggerated. This is a book. Very good football novels. Even the ones he has released now can be said to be the best novels I have read in the past two years. However, there are not too many novels here. I don't know what the later ones are like. Anyway, the front part is very good. It has the same feeling of youthful and passionate novels as when I was chasing Foxes in the Zone. But it is just a personal suggestion, don't add a female protagonist, because the novel Fox in the Zone is also like this. Although the author told us a long time ago that there is a female protagonist even at the beginning of the film, but because his writing style is really good. I brought the protagonist into the role of my brother. When I saw that my brother had such a good girlfriend, I really couldn't stand it because the description of the protagonist was so good but his personality didn't match mine, so I brought him into the role of my brother and there were a lot of shitty plots mixed in with him. As a direct result, I almost finished the novel but I didn't want to finish it, so I personally recommend not taking the female protagonist.

According to last year's statistics, I read over 700 novels a year, of which at least 30% were about sports. It is no exaggeration to say that this book is the best novel about football that I have ever seen, bar none! I'm really looking forward to the next plot, and I hope it stays stable and doesn't collapse. Although some people think that watching the drama will make the plot better, but watching it from the perspective of the protagonist is completely different from watching it from the perspective of the original protagonist. Some people think it's too middle-class, but I think it's exercise. If you don't burn it, is it still called exercise? In a real game, scoring a goal will only make the cheers louder, more exciting and more passionate than this! Of course, I only represent my personal opinion. I have also seen those masterpieces about football being a god, but many of them have the same old feelings. They either go to other countries to play football, or they just follow the same plot with the same people. Either way is almost meaningless. What's more, there are some who start a harem in the later period and are not interested in football at all. In short, this kind of thing is a mess. You don't need to write an emotional line if the protagonist is somewhat famous! Do you understand what you wrote? Is that emotion? ! What Te Miao said is realistic. If you get kicked out, become famous and make money, even a dog will have to come up and lick you. This book gives me a good feeling. First of all, it is fresh enough, and secondly, it has the passionate scene after scoring a goal! So burning! ! ! Exercise is all about getting fired up! ! ! ! Finally, please add more updates, Aligado~

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It's pretty good to watch, but the time of each episode is too short. I feel like it would be better to watch a complete game after a game. Moreover, the protagonists of the series have so many roles. They are as good as the protagonists of this book. Is it better to pay more attention to the protagonist's roles? Watching the drama When filming, if there are no highlights, there should be less description and a few strokes. For example, the sister of the protagonist of the drama, I hope she is not the deputy CP. I feel that according to the current style, if there is a deputy CP, there will be no less scenes. This is a bit ridiculous. After all, sports and competitive articles are not about supporting characters (or protagonists) falling in love. (It doesn't matter whether you accept the nonsense or not)

... The low rating shocked me. This is a very good book. It is a miraculous youthful friendship that has been built up through hard work and hard work. It has plots and daily routines, and it is full of elements. It is so enjoyable to read😎Also, it is really great that there is no national football team (hey)

The forum style of this article is very human-machine, the description of the game plot is okay, and you can read it. Among all the popularity-gaining systems in the world of supernatural beings, this is the first one I have seen writing about football. It is quite novel.

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It is a rare original drama with time-travel football stories on Tomato. It feels great. The description of the game also makes people feel immersed in it. The special effects in the drama are also great, and the description of the group portraits is also great. Everyone has their own independent image. However, there are so many people writing about football. Sometimes I can't tell who plays which position. It's a bit sparse and not enough to watch. Please update!!! [Please update]

It is a relatively comfortable article to read, although there may be some parts in the article, especially those about CP fans, that may seem disturbing. However, the author still does a good job in coordinating the relationship between the growth of popularity and the growth of the protagonist's abilities. It should be said that the author has clearly determined the position of the protagonist from the beginning. Compared with some sports novels where the protagonist is perfect without any blind spots, this kind of story with advantages and obvious shortcomings is more memorable. But the only bad thing is that it feels a bit too gentle, or it feels a bit too deliberate to create the last highlight, the sixty-meter super fairy ball... Losing with great vigor may make people feel the charm of sports competition.

The writing is very good. I don't understand football, but I can watch it very immersedly. The rhythm of the game and daily parts is very good. [Like] The idea of investing in original dramas is a good one. It makes it easier to write about football in a pure way and not be bound by reality. But the fan drama part is a bit lengthy. I read it in one go today, and I wanted to skip the fan drama part several times. In the subsequent book pursuit stage, when I see the author writing about the fan drama content, I will most likely skip it and start reading the book directly. The author has indeed written new content, but for the game content that has already been seen, I will subconsciously feel that I have seen it before and it is boring. It is recommended to weaken the description of the existing games in the drama series and focus on the highlights. There is too much content written from different perspectives. When I think about not being able to see the protagonist for several days, I unconsciously want to read. Sports articles focus on group portraits. Internet articles are not traditional literature. The core is still the protagonist. I hope the author can balance this part of the content. The writing is really good [Sending Hearts]

The writing is okay, very good. It's rare to see original dramas or comics in this type of novel, so give me five stars to encourage you [KISS]

There are currently no poisonous points, and the plot is smooth. It is a book that I am looking forward to. The advantage is that the protagonist has a very good personality. I really like the shaping of the protagonist's personality. He is calm and wise, and the setting of the derivative world to increase his popularity and strength makes people very excited. There's nothing toxic about it, but it still feels like it's still a little short of an emotional explosion. Come on.

It's a pretty good sports novel, with a passionate feel. The drama aspect is okay, but the comment section can be controlled a little later. Don't write "hi" in the comment area, it will appear redundant [Learned]

Interesting, mostly refreshing. This kind of system model is relatively rare in sports articles, and it is still empty. This is also a reason why there are relatively few articles about midfielders in football articles. Now the rhythm is also very good, I look forward to the development of the plot later...

It's very, very good-looking. The author must not stop updating. This is the only football novel I read. The other novels that depict the peak matches at the beginning are not detailed enough and are like running accounts, but this one is written with flesh and blood. The author's writing from the end is okay. Although I know that the author gave the protagonist a low-key and restrained character, it is too low-key and there is too little ink to describe the protagonist. Moreover, the attitude of the protagonist's teammates and ordinary people in the outside world do not think highly of the protagonist. He only praises the two forwards. The early writing is very good, low-key without losing edge. Even those who do not understand football can clearly see the importance of the protagonist. I feel that the protagonist is now treated as if he is isolated.

I feel like I'm watching a high-rated sports show (I'm secretly looking forward to the day when Xiao Lu becomes the captain)

I rarely comment personally, it's really beautiful! ! ! [Blowing a kiss] The second dimension does not lie to the second dimension! ! It suits my appetite as an old two-dimensional person who loves to watch sports and hot-blooded shows! However, I feel that the track is relatively niche. Please leave a comment to encourage the author. Please, please don't cheat QAQ.

The visuals are very strong, just like watching anime. Just looking at the text, especially the high-energy scenes, I can automatically add special effects in my mind, just like watching "Blue Reed" or "Blue Prison" [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

As a sports category, you can see the dedication and efforts. The system will not turn the protagonist into a giant all of a sudden, but will visualize the efforts (data values) bit by bit. The creation of group portraits can also help us understand each person's character and story.

This setting is quite interesting. Although there are many repeated passages, it is still good throughout the day. In fact, I think it is good for the first year when Tang Bu fights and then the protagonist slowly grows up. Otherwise, the pace is too fast and it would be too awesome to add more points. If you write it this way, you can try writing a group portrait. If you write it this way, it will be no problem. If you write it this way, it will be no problem. Come on, the author of this book has great potential. One hundred chapters a day is not enough.

This article is not on the same layer as most of Tomato's articles. It is a bit of a dimensionality reduction attack. Every character in it is very vivid, and it feels like a living person, not a labeled puppet. The author's writing style is really amazing. The protagonist is also a rare normal person in Tomato. He is also a normal person with brains, loyalty, sense of justice and his own ideas. He will not kill others at every turn, will not talk trash at every turn, and will not have wild thoughts when he sees beautiful women. It's amazing, we Lu Shen! ! ! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]