The Memory Command Picked up at the Beginning of Star Railway Makes Star Dome Train Numb.

The old plum blossoms in front of the court are fragrant with new fragrance. The old friend from that time is not here now. When I wake up, I may be in a dream. I have forgotten all my life. Where is my hometown?

The setting is consistent with the original work. The setting of the amnesiac memory envoy and the beginning of the encounter with the train set are very tense. The gaze of the Destruction Star God foreshadows the plot. The reading has the familiarity of the original work and the suspense of a new story.

The protagonist's empty burning eyes, the flowing tears of lava, the Honkai elements in the memory fragments, and the connection with Walter's hometown. Every detail has hidden foreshadowing, which can not only echo the original work but also pave the way for the new plot. The logic is OK [get it]

The plot revolves around the "Memory Envoy", the core suspense is reasonably set, the interaction between the protagonist and the members of the Star Dome Train is tense, and the "numb" reaction of the train crew is very consistent with the original character design, without any obvious sense of OOC.

The foreshadowing is very delicate, including clues about Honkai energy, Walter's reminiscence of his hometown, and the vague appearance of Kageryu. Every doubtful point is not abrupt, and slowly makes people want to follow it.

Oops, this book is really good, but it's a bit short. The author should update it more. The setting is very interesting. I'm looking forward to the subsequent stories and hope that the Golden One can have a good ending.

The integration of Honkai Impact and Star Iron's world view is very smooth. The scene where Walter feels the atmosphere of his hometown from the mysterious man cleverly connects the relationship between Honkai Impact and Star Dome, and the foreshadowing is subtle and not obtrusive.

The emotional portrayal is not deliberately sensational. Mo Danxin's obsession with "Teacher Ji Zi" and the unspoken regrets about saying goodbye are all revealed naturally through fragmented memories, and the empathy points are very real.

Overall, I read it very smoothly, but the number of words is too small. I really think it's pretty good.

I'm still very satisfied with watching it, and I hope The Golden One can have a happy ending.

I like Ahua's books

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Why is there no rating yet? [Almost crying]

The character of the main character is so lovable, I love it!

Teacher Himeko's obsession is revealed naturally, and the characters are not OOC, which is rare.

Each blessing image is corresponding with great care, and the group portrait scene is very tasteful~

The continuation of the legend of Omphalos is very graphic, and the writing skills are amazing!

Echoing the settings of Golden Cocoon and Curtain of Eternal Night, it can be seen that the author knows the original work very well.

I was attracted after reading the introduction. The story is warm and suspenseful, and it is worth reading.

The birth of Duchenzhiyu is so romantic. I'm waiting for the author to unlock more plots~

Mo Danxin's fragmented memories are portrayed very delicately, and the unspoken farewell is too poignant.

A story that contains both pain and warmth is true. The more I read this fanfic, the more I get addicted to it!

It's so wonderfully written, stay tuned for the follow-up plot~

Everyone has different tastes. This one is to my liking. It looks great. I silently give you my five-star praise.

The intertwining of rationality and romance makes the protagonist's image very three-dimensional and the emotional line is not artificial.

The setting of the amnesiac memory envoy is very innovative, and the interaction with the train crew at the beginning is quite interesting.

It's really good. I can be emotionally invested in it. I can feel the warmth and the pain of betrayal.

I like the subject matter, plus the author's writing style is good and the imagery is super strong. Recommended.

So I feel that the protagonist has a lot of intentions when building this world view, and overall it looks very good.

This kind of narration is very comfortable, suitable for reading slowly before going to bed, without using your brain.