The Youth Story of the Defeated Dog Hero

I quite like the setting, but I think the plot is a bit unnatural, and the details need more polishing. It feels like there is less foreshadowing, and it feels vague and not so delicate. But here's five stars, I hope you can write better, keep up the good work [laughs][laughs]

Man, I just want to read a sweet article on Tomato to feel refreshed. Why do you have to force me to think of the past? I once liked someone, but in the end I just couldn't get it. From secret love to lovelorn love, all it takes is blind courage; from lovelorn love to relief, what is needed is countless self-denials, countless times of belittling the other person, and countless times of self-reconciliation. The first stage is when you feel that you are too bad and deserve not to be liked. The second stage is when you deceive yourself and feel that the other person is not worthy of your likes. However, what obligation do others have to respond to your likes? The third stage is to feel disgusted with the second stage self. It is obviously just a humble and sincere love for the young man. To belittle her is actually to belittle the self who likes her. The last stage is the first time in youth that one truly feels the trick of fate. There is nothing wrong with liking her, and there is nothing wrong with her. The two together somehow become a mistake. It is cruel, humorous, and beautiful.

It's good, but it's impossible in reality. It's similar to my elementary school. At that time, I was in Class 1, the best class in the school, but I was the last one. At that time, I didn't know what liking meant. I only knew that I liked the monitor. There was a boy who I usually played well with, but I didn't even say a word. One night I told people in the dormitory that I liked the monitor. Maybe I said it too quietly. They heard the deputy monitor, and the next day the deputy monitor came to ask me. I was panicked, nervous, helpless, and ashamed, but I still hurriedly denied it. She didn't say anything, but I knew he Everyone was laughing at me. I was young and had no self-confidence at the time, so I didn't speak much. I never fell in love until I was 18, especially when other people's families have money. They look at you completely differently, you and they wear different clothes, and they talk in a way that you don't understand. Topic, most people look at you with strange eyes, how do you get your confidence? Everyone, be realistic, be filial to your parents even if you have money, your mother is the woman who loves you the most in the world, no one else, and she is also the woman who misses you all the time. This is something that others can't do, and they can't do it either [get it]

I think it's quite interesting. Although some of the worldviews are a bit difficult, the pain point of youth is still well written. The protagonist and Lingxi remind me of Keita and Ajiuri from the video game Cafe. They are also my two favorite characters in the video game. I have read the IF line many times. If possible, I hope the author can write a longer IF line between the protagonist and Mingxuan in the future. I have already fantasized about it, so why not be more bold? Anyway, they use words to fill up the regrets of the past and give readers some imagination. It's too early for me to say it. Let's release another Mengdie IF line, and then release a harem IF line. One fish can eat many things and satisfy everyone's fantasies.

The ending to this game is very clever. Various details hint at the future. Lingxi set up a trap to make him tell the regretful answer, and took five steps barefoot (with high heels in hand), leaving his ankles stained with dust and his toes red. Use actions to break this regret with your own hands. She put down her high heels and walked five steps barefoot without stopping until she walked up to him and held his face. Finally, she said a courageous invitation: "You idiot, let's run away together." But the male protagonist kept standing there during this process, waiting for her to come step by step. [Laughing][smiling][laughing and crying] After all, it was Lingxi who paid more. Her contribution was to take the initiative to break the deadlock. She had the courage to face the uncertainty of possible rejection. This is a powerful ability, not a concession by the weak. [Like][Like][Like] "Who do you want to be?" This is an important question in the novel. Bai Xinjian never answered. I think: It depends on what you have and don't have in the past and present The future can probably be determined. Want to change? It's very difficult! One destiny, two luck and three feng shui... But Bai Xin Sword has a tacit understanding! ! Envious! ! ! Maybe in the end he can... [Blowing kiss] But no matter what, there will always be someone by his side...

I would like to call it the strongest. I haven't seen enough. I hope there will be another 100 chapters [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Like Looking forward to the extra episode dedicated to our youth

It took a few days from the discovery of this book to the latest chapter. The overall pace of this book is slow, but it didn't feel too draggy for me. There were many side descriptions and environmental descriptions that made me feel very profound. The length of the latter part was very depressing. I have a strong ability to empathize, and the author's writing is also very profound from the side. The above-mentioned description can better understand Bai's state of mind, what ordinary people think, how a teenager behaves, and the writing is very good. The author also said that the ending will be he. I hope the author will not finish it too hastily and give Bai a satisfactory ending. It is best to make some extra stories to write about the lives of several protagonists after they become adults. Come on!

The author is great. In the end, is the heroine Lu or Xia?

I think this novel is quite enjoyable, but it feels a bit depressing at the beginning, but it gets much better after reading it. The characters are well-written and the writing is more delicate. I hope the author will write more.

The bad boy Bai Xinjian and the little goddess Lu Lingxi

The writing style is okay, and I can write so much with little traffic. Maybe most people don't like this kind of book, but I think the author's writing style and persistence are worthy of this star [Thinking]

Who is the heroine? I don't want to buy the wrong stock The heroine should be on her way, but I feel that she is still more arrogant than coquettish in the early stage, a bit like Chen Rui, but in the later stage, Li will not be a success or failure dog. I am quite optimistic about Du and Li. If it is a success or failure dog, the subsequent plot will be a bit cliche. I will fall in love with the male protagonist later. , Then the male protagonist and Lu were still a bit ambiguous and did not understand each other. Li did not want to give up the male protagonist, and was reluctant to let go of his friendship with Lu. Finally, seeing that Lu needed the male protagonist to choose to push the male protagonist to Lu, it felt quite similar to Dragon and Tiger [face covering] I hope it can be a little different in the later stage.

Warm water boiled the general's dream, but reality crushed the young man's shoulders

Yes, you can get it from some obscure descriptions [full]

This is my favorite type of light novel

It's very real and heartbreaking. Can the author create a group chat? It's best to discuss the plot. Don't be.

It's a good book, the writing is good, and the characters are well-drawn.

Please support me more

A little more, it's really not enough. Can the author write four pictures a day? If that's not possible, three pictures a day would be fine.

Overall, this book has a lot of fireworks and an immersive feeling, but the polishing of the plot is still lacking. It can be seen that this book incorporates a lot of the author's personal shadow, and the author should not be old. Very good, very nice

The author is so miserable [cover face] [eat melon] You should live a good life [cover face]

It's well written and feels immersive. It's a timid secret admirer, so who is the heroine?

Author, I really like this book. After reading the latest chapter, I hope you will continue to update it. I think this book is among the best in Tomato. I have been a bookworm for 8 years and I actually read it. My heart is quite shaken. Some of the plots really touched me. Author, I hope you will continue to write.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A very good book

Who is the heroine?

Looks pretty good

Let's raise it first. If Mengdie doesn't end well, I won't come back.

Since there is a connection between hearts, then it would be better for Lu Lingxi to be the heroine [shy]

It's good to watch. I don't know why I like this kind of declining protagonist. It feels like Lu Mingfei. The bickering with Lu Lingxi is also very interesting. I like this feeling of rejoicing with enemies.