Haikyuu!!: Oikawa and the Pro Player

There are a little too many private characters... I hope the teacher can make up for it, because there are too many private characters, and it looks really uncomfortable, and the long paragraphs affect the reading a bit. I hope that some of the original characters can be restored. When I saw Chapter 35, all the junior high school opponents were really private 😢, and Kageyama should have appeared in the third year of junior high school, and there were no scenes like Owl Valley, Chidori Mountain, and Snow Hill. In this way, it would be difficult for readers to get involved. I really hope that the author can listen to my suggestions. To be honest, the author does not need to update every day. What readers want more is a high-quality reading experience. The connection of the competition is also a bit stiff. It may be that the author has little writing experience, which is understandable. Therefore, I would like to give the author the following suggestions: 1. Don't have too many private settings 2. Be strict with the original timeline 3. Try to cut down on large paragraphs 4. Don't seek efficiency, only seek high quality. If I said something wrong, just pretend I didn't hear you [Stacked Armor]

The description of the protagonist is very real, and he is very strong. It is not brainless and very interesting. The part where the coach invites you to eat barbecue is very exciting. Oikawa has no OOC, and the protagonist is very patient. The whole story is very interesting. The full text is of high quality, but there are very few reviews, but they are basically five stars. It is a good book worth reading 👍

I've been reading this for a long time. I give it five stars. The writing is very realistic and delicate.

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