Dream of Red Mansions, Dream of Red Mansions

It seems good so far, the writing style is fresh and natural, and the logic is flawless. But at present, it is not enough for the male protagonist to only cook delicious food for his sister, enlighten him, and take revenge on Wang Xue and others. The most important thing is to keep Father Lin alive and let Daiyu tell the truth to Lin Hai. Don't just throw her into Jia's house. Let me also make a guess: If they are to be together, will the male protagonist bring his sister back to modern times? Otherwise, in ancient times, the male protagonist would not have an identity that could be disclosed and match Sister Lin's identity. I think the plot of Sister Lin entering the modern era will be very interesting. Because with her intelligence, she can definitely attract the attention of the world in the soil of freedom.

I feel that it is more appropriate for the male protagonist to have a background in college. After all, there seems to be nothing else to do in college except professional classes and playing with mobile phones.

The interaction between the protagonist and Daiyu is well written, but the male protagonist's understanding of love has never grown. For now, the protagonist's love is always selfish and fanatical, which leads to a character that is not very likable. Looking forward to further developments.

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After reading it, it's a complete and good story! Apart from the fact that the protagonist seems a little selfless in the early stage, and that he completely breaks away from modern society in the later stage, and that modern society does not explain these two things, it is difficult to comment, but there is nothing wrong with the other plots!

It's quite novel for me. Almost the whole book is filled with love lines. The rest is either in the imperial examination or making achievements, which accounts for 70% of the page. The love lines only account for about 20%. It was very unsatisfying before, but this book is satisfactory. If there is anything bad about it, the background setting of the protagonist is not very good. Now I see that Lin Daiyu has traveled back to the protagonist's era. The current perception is quite good. See Lin Daiyu will fight back when she is wronged. Although she has never done anything to the big-faced baby, she does not feel aggrieved. Other Red Mansions fanfics just have a feeling of being aggrieved, either in career or emotionally. This book is very satisfying, but the background setting of the protagonist is not very good. She is a high school student (if there is a full love line similar to this, can you recommend it, Lin Daiyu, single heroine)

It's really beautiful and the emotions are very delicate. The author writes Sister Lin very well, not OOC at all, and the male protagonist is also very good. I feel that Sister Lin deserves such a male protagonist! ! ! When two people are together, they feel as solid as wearing long trousers tucked into socks! ! ! !

Good-looking, the characters are very vivid, Xikang [Like][Like][Like][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The author is particularly talented. The writing is interesting and poetic.

The subject matter is novel and well written. Hope it sticks. Don't write Lin Ruhai to death Except not enough to watch [crying], everything is good [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] Very delicate

Very fresh subject

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It's very well written!

It feels like following a drama. Whenever I have free time, I think about the next development of the plot. Who knows.

Nice! ! ! It's super beautiful. Both books written by the author are invincible to me.

Daily Life has been very well written recently, and the descriptions are very detailed. The male protagonist can actually be a college student. If the male protagonist is a high school student, will it be inconvenient to go back and forth?

[Shy] What does it mean to be different and unique? Take a look and you will find the answer in the book.

It's very good. Except for the protagonist who feels a little bit dazed in the beginning, the writing in the back is getting better and better. What did you write at the end of the text❓[smile]

Really well written

The writing is exquisite and I love reading it.

The writing is quite good, but are we no longer planning to write it in modern society, or can't continue writing it? [Thinking], isn't it hard to explain? I can't make up the extras, hahahaha

It looks good, more updates, but I don't know how the author let the male protagonist go there in person

I feel that the author's big soul is like a book with rich experiences and a jug of old wine. Every time he opens the book and takes a sip, his lips and teeth are filled with fragrance and endless aftertaste. Perhaps this is an interesting soul.

The author's writing is very good. The writing is smooth, the thinking is clear, unique and interesting. I can't stop reading it, but there are not enough updates. Please update it! [Like][Laugh][Like]

It looks good and aroused my interest in Dream of Red Mansions Is the flow rate difference a little too fast at this time? Why do you feel that Daiyu will die of old age earlier than the protagonist?

The author is so awesome, he has written the ideal Lin Daiyu in my heart. Who knows how I cried when I read it.

It's really beautiful and the emotions are described delicately.

The writing is really awesome

It's really good, the writing is delicate

The meaning is not exhausted, the writing is smooth