Sister, Don't Kill Me, I'll Give You All the Rules and Clues!

Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, and there are zero descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies, and female degeneration. The heroine has no trace of masculinity and can be treated as a woman. It's a very good setting. The heroine has her own system of weirdness, and the second heroine is a player of the national luck system. This is really amazing. The interaction between the two is also very sweet. Chapter 18 is well written. I cried when I read it. The empathy ability is too strong, and the emotional line is silky smooth. Looking forward to the follow-up National Games dungeon, the cute heroine and the strong female secondary character, tsk tsk tsk.

This is one of the better ones I've written so far. The writing style is good, and the story written has a certain logic, although it can be seen that it has been patched and the flaws are not covered up. It seems to me that this novel already has a score of 9 or above. Please update it well. Come on! Another note: If you want to write an emotional scene between the two protagonists, it is recommended to write it in a more stream-of-consciousness way (avoid the dark room). Another thing: the prologue and the first chapter are both set in ancient China. The previous script was a European castle. The next one may be a Yin Yang Lao, a containment object, or a Western urban legend (Wendigo or something).

Read from the beginning to the end in one go, and briefly talk about the problems in the novel. First of all, the relationship between the two heroines develops very quickly, which gives people a rather abrupt feeling, but it is not very affecting (it is really worth watching if you like watching dual heroines, the two heroines get along very sweetly). Also, there are currently two dungeons updated, but both are Chinese-themed. Since the rules and ghost stories are global, they cannot be too biased towards Chinese themes (the problem is not that big, after all, there are only two copies, and unlimited flow novels will not lack themes). Then there is the plot and story, a more classic tragic story background, and then the two heroines go through a series. The battle of wits and courage finally succeeds in influencing the weird villain with a tragic life experience, and the plot is easier for people to guess at a glance. That's about it, after all, you can't be too picky about new books. If the author has any clever ideas for the copy in the plot, he can write it down. Of course, it does not deviate from the novel. The setting and original intention are the most important. Anyway, keep it up, this novel still has great potential.

It would be better if we forget that the protagonist is a female protagonist. The heroine's IQ is very online, and the story is well written. What makes me feel best is that the country's think tank is very online, and the clues are analyzed perfectly. I will read the follow-up later.

At present, the overall look and feel is very good. The characters are simple but the creation is relatively successful. The content is temporarily focused on the two female protagonists in the ghost story and working together to pass the level. Later, Luo Shutong seems to be able to return to the world with Xia Yubing (looking forward to (,,＞᎑＜,,)). The country is powerful, there is no mutual suspicion, and there are no brainless slaps in the face and other poisonous points. The two female protagonists are strong throughout the whole process (not counting the weak Shou Tong at the beginning!) However, there are some minor flaws in this book: the emotional transitions are a little rushed (but very sweet). The content is partly empty. For example, [Netherworld Academy] is a collective volume, but by Chapter 39, other adjudicators are only mentioned three times (uncertain). The role of the country and the barrage are somewhat reflected, but there is less writing. Our two female protagonists are very powerful, but we still need to give a little more content to other characters~ (This only represents my personal opinion, the author please don't beat me up>⤚<) Overall, it's a great read. I've read Chapter 39 in one go and my heart is beating fast. Girls' stickers are really the best. Keep up the good work, author!

Very nice It is simply a breath of fresh air in the current Internet literature world. Everyday yandere, every day yandere, just watch Dior. Reading online articles only makes you lose your brain and does not make you lose your mind. Really yandere literature has no three views. Although the subject matter is no longer new, the rules are strange and strange, these are all materials from a few years ago, but in the Internet where yandere novels are popular nowadays, this novel is really a breath of fresh air. Anyway, I thought it was quite acceptable after reading it. In short, if you think yandere is not good enough, you can read this book. But there is one evil point about this book. The third ghost story is probably because the author is not in good condition, which leads to chaos. This can be skipped. The most important thing about the third ghost story is that he got a master key, and there is nothing else. Also, the author, you are very slow in updating. You have to learn to be the donkey of the production team, you know? So starting from today, it's okay to update five chapters a day.

It's very interesting to watch. The plot in the front is very powerful. The think tank also looks like a think tank, not a waste. I hope that the rest of it will be maintained. After all, every copy is a high-intensity brain-burning script (there will be a little knife in the middle) The only thing this book lacks is description, multi-line character description, emotional description, and plot details. The plot outline of each chapter is very good, but it is a bit difficult to express it. The relationship development is a bit fast (but it is reasonable, they are two people who lack love), and there is relatively little description of other characters. The story line is too concentrated on the heroine and the protagonist. If more multi-line descriptions can be added (for example, when the heroine is doing this, what are the other characters doing? Or give other characters more roles.)

The writing is very good, but the main character is a bit miserable. In fact, he was dissected when he came here. It feels like the brain's protection mechanism has been activated. I forgot about it. Later, I was specially trained by the system to use virtuality and flames to stimulate painful memories. Whether it is time-travel or fake time-travel, it is miserable. The speed of the relationship with the heroine is both unexpected and reasonable. The supporting characters also have very distinct characteristics (I feel that I can't survive without being distinct). The logic is very clear, and the overall writing is very good.

What is worthy of praise for this book is that the author's writing style is quite good, and the characters' perspectives are very normal, and there is no such inhuman behavior. After all, the characters set in many novels nowadays (including the protagonists) feel a bit inhuman when written by ordinary people (either with distorted views, extremely dark, crazy and perverted, or twisted yandere). It may be good to put them in novels, but sometimes it does ruin the views. Many successful novels are based on character creation. I believe that the author can definitely create a character well, unlike some novels where the protagonist is just a personal computer and cannot be saved. If the author thinks what I said makes sense, please give it a thumbs up, okay? Please don't spray thank you. This is just a suggestion, thank you all. 😀

I suddenly thought of a novel like that, in which a strange girl travels through time and gradually grows from a weak or immature to a cold and taciturn BOSS. She always stays in the strange world, providing help to challengers while also improving her strength to encroach on her territory. In the finale, she sacrifices herself to close the strange world? [Thinking] Just this Kanako can't stand it anymore. She keeps saying how important Luo Shutong is to Xia Yubing's heart. In my opinion, it's nothing more than that. If Kanako hurts Ye Zhen, she will be punched to death by Ye Fuli; if Kanako hurts any one of the orange peaches, the other one will be chopped into pieces and stuffed in the refrigerator; if she hurts Jiang Siyu, Ji Huaiyue will not allow her to live... It's a pity that she hurt Luo Shutong, which is considered a soft persimmon. Luo Shutong is the first heroine. She can be forgiven so easily for hurting Luo Shutong, and she still protects her. This so-called "Japanese yandere" is just like the previous plot of Xia Yubing contradicting Chen Jiaoxi. It is completely unnecessary. The difference is that the plot of contradicting Chen Jiaoxi will not make people feel bad at all. This Japanese yandere is just disgusting.

The author is serious about whether he uses AI, but his writing is still OK. It is normal to use AI to find ideas, but some subtle things, such as the structure of a sentence and the narrative logic of a paragraph, must be written by himself. Of course, if it doesn't work, just treat me as nonsense and apologize to the author.

I really like it. The author is a bit slow in writing. The first two copies are very sweet, but then the pressure starts to increase. The heroine is useful in the first chapter, the second chapter is the highlight, and then it is a drag. Please rate their performance. First dungeon: Luo Shutong 7.2 Points (half a hindrance and half useful at the beginning, but gradually becomes more useful in the later stage) Xia Yubing 9.5 Points (full, after all, she has to show her strength, basically perfect) 8.5 Points in the Monster Talk game (the tips are still very useful, letting Xia Yubing know that Luo Shutong is more trustworthy, and then giving tips for clearing the level) Second copy of Nether Academy: Luo Shutong 9.8 Points (This is really her highlight, she is steady, she has practiced a magical trick to change other people's minds, she has saved Xia Yubing and herself in danger several times, after all, in order to highlight her enhanced ability after practice, and show that she is also useful) Xia Yubing 8.5 Points (This level is mainly led by Luo Shutong, but Xia Yubing also contributed a lot) 8.0 Points in the strange talk game The third copy of No Return Train: Luo Shutong scored 8.2 Points (resulting in not clearing the level well, but Xia Yubing was not injured and could not find any faults) Xia Yubing scored 9.2 Points (still perfect) Weird Talk Game scored 7.5 Points (normal) The fourth copy of Deserted Village Sacrifice: Luo Shutong 6.2 Points (obviously holding back, if not for saving Xia Yubing, the score would not have passed) Xia Yubing 7.1 Points (being suppressed by others in the game, it is of no great use, but there is no big mistake) Guaitan Guoyun 7.5 Points (can't give a hint, give a normal score) I have saved 9 chapters but haven't read them yet. After all, the updates are too slow. If you don't save them and read them, they will be gone.

It's well written, not an assembly-line story about national fortunes. National reminders online are not for show. Players from other countries are not brainless either. There is a knife but the writing is good. Not bad [blowing kiss]

The writing is really good and very beautiful. Just don't stop updating. I finally found a book I'm interested in. Qiuqiu.

=A good book on the road to becoming a god=[Top post] Using the unique heroine's weird perspective to go hand in hand with the participants' perspective, The two lines are intertwined, creating an incredible wonder. Various magical, interesting, exciting and meaningful challenges An original script (to be honest, it really aroused my desire to fight) [face covering] And the writing style that directly touches people's hearts [love] [love] [love] It reflects more than just a ruthless world and rules Rather, it allows people to feel the embodied heart of every living being. It vividly reflects evil and good: ——You protect me with your soul—— ——I protect my oath with actions—— ——You are guarding the world in a strange way—— ——I'm guarding you strangely...—— When the dim light of the morning fell, I opened my eyes and saw those purple-gold eyes and a faint smile, just like the dim light of the sky lanterns in the sky. I remembered that day again, when I opened the door, you looked panicked and at a loss. "Guest, guest officer is sharp... Still, or are you staying in the hotel?" (●—●) ——2:34 Am ——Xinghe

This is how a young man's shoulders should be. Don't worry about the hatred of family and country, and the righteousness. First, stir up the breeze and the bright moon, the willows and the grass and the flying orioles. The young man's shoulders should be full of beautiful things.

It's still quite interesting. For now, it seems that the author is a little busy now because he is in the first grade of high school. But I still hope to work hard! After all, it's so uncomfortable not to see the ending. There are really very few such novels in Lily.

I've read Chapter 15, and the overall plot is pretty smooth. The logic is also very online, that is, after reading it, I felt that the relationship between the heroine and Xia felt disconnected (personal opinion). However, the writing is still great!

The saddest thing in the world It's you who has a crush on a girl And he was happy with another person When you are filled with artistic spirit Sad in the moonlight When I walk alone and miss her Under the same moonlight She held someone's hand in someone's arms kiss someone on the lips in the air The hormonal scent of mutual love surges And you Only a tight-fitting coat Like using this thin clothing Resist the overwhelming chill in your heart The wind seems to be deliberately acting against me stir your hair But it can't dissipate the sadness in my heart — "The Tide of the Three Black Moons of the Dragon Clan"

Haokang, I'm back to read a novel after a few months, and it's still as good as ever [Chigua]

Do your works all score 7.8 Or 9.1?

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It's really good-looking, but I couldn't understand it. Although I couldn't understand it, I have stored my brain, so it's normal that I can't understand it. Haha, but it's still very good-looking. I'm just stupid and didn't understand it. Anyone smarter than me can understand it.

There is a story about a weird copy written by an author that is not very interesting. So why don't we strengthen Tie Tie Bar [laughs]

Very good, but there is no need to write the setting of male to female

I'm a very lazy person, and I've left nothing but five stars.

The main character of m was watching Lao Zi at the beginning. He didn't finish his summer homework. He cried because he didn't have a machete. He cried to death. He cried to death. He cried to death [crying]

Wonderful novel, wonderful author, so beautiful

It's quite good. When I first read it, I thought it was better than other national sports articles\(//∇//)\