Rework*******

The writing is very good. The daily life of Ginin is very interesting. It is very heartwarming and sweet. But the one drawback is that the author seems a little unfamiliar with the setting of Demon Slayer. That is, Giyuu's combat power is a bit broken. In fact, Giyuu can be killed with a sword in seconds, but overall it is still very good. The author updates a lot every day and does not make us hungry at all. It is very good.

It's not my favorite type, but I admire the author's speed in writing more than 170 chapters in 10 days. I have the opportunity to suggest a new book that is more in line with the original work. It should write about feelings that are indifferent to worldly affairs rather than verbal love and care. Watching a seed sprout and take root is much more interesting than looking directly at a big tree.

It can be said that the whole novel only has the name of Demon Slayer, and it is a story created entirely by the author. Sometimes it is really confusing to read, but the emotional line of Yoshinobu is very delicately depicted, the writing is elegant, and the emotions are simple and sincere. He is very good at using environmental description to further deepen Yoshinobu's emotions. The writing is very sweet and delicious😋

I have just read the first part now, and the plot may be a bit confusing. If you are someone who likes seriousness, I don't recommend you to read this book. But if you like to watch one-person cp, I strongly hope you read this book. This book is a kind of daily warmth, and it is very well written with delicate emotions.

Very beautiful, I like it very much

The author has more to say, I would love to read it! ! The writing is very good, Yiren CP, you made me eat it super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super good! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Although the love line of Ginin is not bad, I don't understand a lot of new settings at all. It is recommended that more explanations be given to the settings.

Very sweet, love watching it

Very nice! But it's basically daily life, and many plots are either changed or original. For example, Mi Douzi from Nata Spider Mountain disappeared!

It's pretty good to watch, but there are some issues with the basic settings of the characters in the original work, but otherwise it's pretty good. Let's talk about some parts of this that I find quite confusing. Some parts are illogical. He came back from the future and was discovered by Shinobu. I think Giyuu can completely report the ghost information to the lord and all pillars, including ways to improve his strength. Staying with Shinobu all the time makes me develop a character of Giyuu who only wants to fall in love. In addition, in the timeline, Tanjiro has not been to the headquarters in the original Spider Yamamae. Of course, this is ahead of schedule. It's nothing, but Spider Mountain said that Tanjiro and the others should be trained. I know the author wanted to focus on Giyu and Shinobi, but it was too concise. Then this book added another method of killing ghosts to the original method of killing ghosts by beheading and sunlight, which is to break the core, which is an extra way to kill ghosts. The author probably doesn't know the background story of the original characters very well. I hope the author can work hard! It's quite sweet.

It's well written and the author is very productive. Cheers to the author.

The interaction between the righteous ninja is very good, and it is okay to watch the righteous ninja alone, but the plot is too original, and sometimes I feel confused in many places, and the combat power is a bit weak, but it is still very good.

It's good to watch, but the writing of Ginin is really good. I want to cry because I have to watch a movie tomorrow!

Dear author, let me finish chasing the other one and then I will chase yours_(:з∠)_Don't worry

Very good! Come on!

I like Ginin very much

Very good. I like to read more.

One word, sweet

The plot behind it is very sweet [Adoration]

Beautiful language and delicate emotions

It's so sweet. I like it so much.

A very nice book.

I give five stars to everyone who writes about righteousness.

Some of them are inconsistent with the original settings but they look good

It feels like there are very few shots of other pillars

I'm really friendly to those who are willing to bear it.

Sweet and a bit greasy

Sweet! Be patient for a lifetime!

I very much agree with this article, I like it very much

Beautiful, very beautiful