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The writing is good. Chongzhen died for his country, and a friend in need is a friend indeed. The plot is touching and the loyalty of loyal ministers and good generals makes people unable to help but shed tears. The Ming Dynasty is a difficult thing in the hearts of many people. If it were true, there would be no modern century-old history of humiliation.

I have only read Chapter 4, and I can see that the author is very careful, but there are too many adjectives. It seems too laborious to read three or four rows of adjectives before getting to the object. Also, there are too many swear words that are really unnecessary. Too much is not enough. Just be appropriate. Good luck, author.

In fact, the author still has some misunderstandings. There is a book called "The Eastern Origins of Western Civilization" written by a British writer. That book confirmed that all the knowledge about the Western Industrial Revolution was recorded in the books and materials of the Ming Dynasty, and that China's "Industrial Revolution" was a long process. Specifically, it can be studied as a special hydraulic industry, including the advanced water turbines and kilns at that time.

Yes, the plot is okay, but in terms of military, it is better to be close to the past history, and don't blindly climb the technology tree. In fact, the tactics of the Ming army against the Qing army are already very mature.

It's not easy to create, so I give you 5 stars! Speaking of the "golden finger" of the "Caogang"... If you want money, there will be people, and if you want people, you will have money! If you want news, you must be loyal, and if you want loyalty, you must have channels (pretty good) [laughing evilly]! There are too many modifiers in some places, giving the impression that the text has been modified by AI.

The writing is good and pragmatic. Ups and downs again. Come on author! Try to write two to three million words! ! ! Love watching! !

It's pretty cool, keep up the good work!

The writing is good, and it makes people excited to read it, but it is too little and not enough to read.

This is a very good book, you can read it. Follow-up review. . .

Deserves a high score Those long descriptions of the plot hindered the viewing, but the protagonist has plans and actions, which is better than the other Ming Dynasty novels that ranked first and second.

Quoting history and writing brilliantly. It made my blood boil. What a great book.

There are too many adjectives, but it won't affect the viewing if you scroll faster. The front is very watery and the back is good. The author writes better and better. It's a good read and worth recommending.

When I saw the author's writing style, I was impressed. It is simply the best writing style I have ever seen. The content is so realistic that I couldn't stop reading it. I won't say more, so I will just give it five stars [Cool]

Top-notch enjoyment. The writing in this book is a level higher than those in Ming Yue's Ming Dynasty.

The author hopes to write five to six million words without using the word "water".

Okay, why do you have to make up five words? ! ! !

Nice, very nice

Well written, very beautiful

Awesome, good looking, come on

It's very enjoyable to watch.

The writing is sophisticated and well written.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good looking very good looking

Good, good, good, good It's just good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very interesting, good luck to the author

This is still very good.

Watch it first, comment later

I've read Chapter 30 and it's very well written! !

It's pretty good. I hope it stays stable and doesn't break down later.

The author's writing is very immersive